Wow.... Hey donsherio, why don't you help these guys!?! Perhaps contact them and assist them in their quest. I can can imagine media being about relationships! This could be an opportunity :)
Great idea, but if anyone is going to take this seriously, you should really consider making a better video. Background music was loud and had too much bass, girl was quiet and really only used for her looks (and bad posture much). Use a tripod, get more people so it doesn't look like you're selling AXE and for a "Music program", PROVE that you know something about audio production.
Just to add (since i didn't have enough space), Hands in the pockets, very amature, snippet where she says, "what am I saying?" is completely unnecessary, playing with her hands at the end and finishing her last sentence so quietly. Not to mention the lighting is terrible. 1/2 the time shes in shadows, other times shes over exposed. Sorry for being too harsh, but its something to look at when making a video to promote something
Soooooorry for leaving some tips and constructive criticism. And FYI, I DO Leave my bedroom. I actually work with film and multimedia and plan on doing it as a career so don't tell me to go get a life, cause I already have one.
Wow.... Hey donsherio, why don't you help these guys!?! Perhaps contact them and assist them in their quest. I can can imagine media being about relationships! This could be an opportunity :)
Wow.... Hey donsherio, why don't you help these guys!?! Perhaps contact them and assist them in their quest. I can can imagine media being about relationships! This could be an opportunity :)
paulhose 4 years ago
bueno... pero está muy buena
juansp18 4 years ago
Great idea, but if anyone is going to take this seriously, you should really consider making a better video. Background music was loud and had too much bass, girl was quiet and really only used for her looks (and bad posture much). Use a tripod, get more people so it doesn't look like you're selling AXE and for a "Music program", PROVE that you know something about audio production.
donsherio 4 years ago
Just to add (since i didn't have enough space), Hands in the pockets, very amature, snippet where she says, "what am I saying?" is completely unnecessary, playing with her hands at the end and finishing her last sentence so quietly. Not to mention the lighting is terrible. 1/2 the time shes in shadows, other times shes over exposed. Sorry for being too harsh, but its something to look at when making a video to promote something
donsherio 4 years ago
What are you, my mother? Try leaving your bedroom and enjoying life, freak!
mlctv 4 years ago
Soooooorry for leaving some tips and constructive criticism. And FYI, I DO Leave my bedroom. I actually work with film and multimedia and plan on doing it as a career so don't tell me to go get a life, cause I already have one.
donsherio 4 years ago
Wow.... Hey donsherio, why don't you help these guys!?! Perhaps contact them and assist them in their quest. I can can imagine media being about relationships! This could be an opportunity :)
paulhose 4 years ago
This is a great video...
kchevrier 4 years ago
Fantastic.
colonelketchup123 4 years ago