beautiful beautiful beautiful
MollyKat987 1 year ago
I liked it. Thought the Micheal Jackson line was a little unnecessary. Only because it took me out of her metaphor. Without it the poem would be timeless.
violetz1234 2 years ago
Excellent !
TheScriptorium 2 years ago
i hear when you goto enough poetry readings you are entitled to expert opinion
LilSam11 2 years ago
reguardless of her memorization, this is a beautiful poem.
Brandynoel16 2 years ago
amen :]
xxsiceemupxx1 2 years ago
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I hate when poets don't memorize their poems.
Natashalulu 2 years ago
she's got it memorized now, this was her first reading of it.
when you write this well . there's no urgent necessity to memorize .
I have been to a lot of poetry readings and I am entitled to my own opinion.
beautiful beautiful beautiful
MollyKat987 1 year ago
I liked it. Thought the Micheal Jackson line was a little unnecessary. Only because it took me out of her metaphor. Without it the poem would be timeless.
violetz1234 2 years ago
Excellent !
TheScriptorium 2 years ago
i hear when you goto enough poetry readings you are entitled to expert opinion
LilSam11 2 years ago
reguardless of her memorization, this is a beautiful poem.
Brandynoel16 2 years ago
amen :]
xxsiceemupxx1 2 years ago
This comment has received too many negative votes show
I hate when poets don't memorize their poems.
Natashalulu 2 years ago
she's got it memorized now, this was her first reading of it.
LilSam11 2 years ago
when you write this well . there's no urgent necessity to memorize .
xxsiceemupxx1 2 years ago
I have been to a lot of poetry readings and I am entitled to my own opinion.
Natashalulu 2 years ago