the Bird Cage for Spirit (poem reading)

[khamerie]

that is beautiful, that is one of the best poetry i have ever heard, just plain godly

[poetryprincess54]

i know this has nothing to do with this video i just thought it a coincidence the name of your poem just because i had a bird named spirit

[nednednerb]

cool! hehe, funny coincidence. Hope you enjoyed my poem anyway!

[BurleyQ123]

That's beautiful

[p8anut]

Wow, I loved this! I felt it! I write poetry as well, stop by some time & listen. ;o]

[jimmycrackcorn1983]

but idono how to dance

[nednednerb]

that's okay, dude! You can learn, if you start moving and a grooving, I mean have fun moving ANY WHICH WAY in front of music. That's enough; you'll be a natural ;)

[DavidRandallCurtis]

Oh yeah... this is real stuff.... 5*

[psychonautx26s]

I feel at home in your words, a sense of true being. It, you, I, we, all is beautiful and that is the tragedy of all the ugliness and pain we strain to escape, so beautiful it hurts.

[shilohisms]

I quench for enough thirst to drink of the depth of your knowledge and ache for the energy to dance the frenzied beat of your soul ...

my spirit is alight with your words

and my heart sings in chorus.

[nednednerb]

can we stop quenching for thirst? even just biologically, if we don't have a mental, wordy reason to drink water, we'll still need water to nourish us, and we will rejoice to have a healthy source of it to drink.  sing sing!

[shilohisms]

I believe "yearn" was the word I was looking for, not quench .. strange how that missed me :) But I fully agree.

[Wintahdream]

Wow,that is very cool poetry!

[nednednerb]

Thank you!!

[maliniG]

Dear Brenden, this is a profound, raw, emotional, intelligent, sad, honest and beautiful poem. I even recognise myself in it; I also know the unwillingness to surrender to the insanity of how life has evolved. Humans could do much better, yet unconsciously choose to remain in their bird cages. We indeed live to dance, communicate, sing and love, if we can!

Best wishes,

Marlena from the Netherlands

[nednednerb]

thank you! :)

Yes! We are to live life, no matter how crazy it can be. Never forget to dance!!

[mmx323]

awesome...it's beautiful

[Ruhul08]

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