City Of Dreams 2.08; "Become"

[theloony00]

=(

[lolKarebear710]

why did u end the series. it was so good

[theloony00]

love the episodee i really love the seriee!!! :D

soo what happenned?? :(

[ilydean]

You know who i hate the most? It's andrew. when Charlee needs him the most he doesn't give a shit. He could talk to her just as a friend but he doesn't. I hate Andy for that. He was the only one that Charlee really trusted and now he's almost betraying her trust by not being there for her! Please make it as though Andrew really does care (i know he does) but still. lol im taking this way too seriously but still. I miss their sweet talks, like when he punched her ex. I miss Jemi</3

[lifesatrainwreck]

"Screwing up is a fundamental part of human nature."

That was the best line in the whole episode.

I seriously love this series! And I'm so happy Maddie and Jimmy finally got together! I almost teared. lol <3 but anyway, please keep them coming cause it's so good! You make the characters so relatable! This series is great (:

[LBOSCO4]

"And by next couple of episodes, I mean THE REST OF THE SERIES."

lmfao i honestly lollled. i loveeee this so much. the writing is amazing. charlee is so deep and perceptive yet she can never find a way to help herself. i love how she needs to help others to even begin on fixing herself. jimmy is adorable <3

[XxLikeAstarlightxX]

this is so amazing and unique! I've been follow the whole serie and I can't wait until you upload more! Plz make it Stemily again, they've always liked each other since the start :)

[lovezaccharmed12]

hmmm for some reason the ending with charlee i think shes talking not just about parker but about andrew and her! makes sense! ahh i love it, not crazy niley fan most of the time, but in this story its cute! oh god, you're gonna make me depressed??!! :/ oh well, im excitedd!!!!

[ilove1music]

I wonder when Charlee said those things to Kate .. is she only talking about Parker or Kate ( you know about Andrew ) or maybe both

[drpepperluvgurl34]

Aw! I'm so happy that Jimmy finally did that! :) that just made my day. and...wow katie. I'm still wondering if Charlee with blow up at Andy for telling Katie about her personal life, which was not something a 'best friend' of hers would do... Yay Jimmy & Maddie <3 Cannot wait for the next update!

[MileyLily70]

Its lovely

Now we just need Charlee and Andrew to be together and it will be all perfect

keep writing

-Lily

[cherryberry449]

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[sarah9417]

i loved it!!! cant wait for more, this is the best story i have ever read. no lie. i really really really hope this series has a happy ending...its depressing that it has to end at all, please dont make it more depressing by it ending sad...

[gg55xbackup]

speechless.

its was wonderful.

i loved loved loved loved it!

JIMMY! i love JIMMY!

wondeful,

best best eppie yet.

i said yet!

ah-mazing cant soo not wait til next.

-kel.

[2worldofchances]

ohhmygaawd FINAALY ! jammes took forever , ahahha . i love this series its my favorite one out of anything ive ever read , its ahh-mazzing && yes im addicted so PLEASE try to upload it more , thaaank yoou(:

[lizzyluvsyouh04]

I just wanted to get up and clap for james and maddie they're too cute

[mileydemiselenalove1]

I am now officially hooked up on this series! Please write the next one! I am soooo dying to see the next one! Youve got real talent.

[MissNaleyy]

Even the second time, it made me cry. I luuuurrve it Julie. Theyre so so so cute. Can i have him for myself? <33.

[luvcarlssxo]

AMAAAAZING!!!! please tell me you're gonna upload the next ones soon! I can't wait this long!!

[x0xvaleriex0x]

Yay for Jimmy and Maddie. Even though I wold have loved to see Jimmy and Charlee together. I loved that little conversation between Katie and Charlee.

Really loved this episode soo sweet and nice.

[nicolethefreak12541]

aww finally! James and Maddie! <3. James aww. :) I am so excited for the next episode. I hope its not as depressing as you seem to say it is.

[tripleerin]

i really love this<3. i love james and maddie together, almost as much as i love andrew and charlee...;) every episode is so amazing. i'm sad to read it won't have too many more episodes, but this is like the best series ever.

[SimplyFictional]

Gosh, i am sooooo in love with this series! Everything feels so real and believable, which makes it incredible!

I loved what Jimmy said to Maddie!

So sweet (:

Can't wait for more episodes! <3

You're an amazing writer!

[DoubleYouTeeEffx3]

This was such a great episode! So sweet! I loved that James and Maddie got together! Especially how Charlee was explaining why Parker walked away to Katie, I'm hoping that somehow it relates to her relationship with Andy. <3

[ElleeMchugh]

charlee need to find love. She's always trying to make everyone around her be happy. She deserves someone :') LOVE THIS SERIES WAAAAY TO MUCH!

[permanentjoy]

I'm just so glad for Maddie and James, i'm waiting for it since...maybe the very first episode ! This is great, every episode of COD is really amazing and when i see you uploaded an episode i'm like "AWESOME !" (the Barney Stinson one xD)

[xxxRadushPxxx]

Awww, how i love this story, I am so freaking happy for James and Maddie and so proud of him, because he is really brave that he told her what he feels. And I am sorry for Katie, I know that I love her, but I don´t love her with Andy. Can´t wait for next part! <3 Great job! <3

[theloony00]

awesome!! :D

[candyAlex91]

Screwing up is a fundamental part of human nature. THAT my friend is so true.

And I loved how Charlee spoke to Kate at the end. Everything she said about Parker, I think she said about herself in some way too. No matter how she feels about Andy, he is with Kate. But that made me sad, cause she'd deserve him or someone who cares about her and "fixes" her. But I think she's just too caring to break Andy and Kate up :)

[MarleneSophieCompton]

while they were kissing i remembered you giving little hints of spoilers and telling me how they might kiss in about the middle of the second season.

:D

GO.! CAPTAIN. OBVIOUS.!

wooot.!

"screwing up is a fundamental part of human nature."

so true.

i loved it!

[ElisaMelody]

Loved it ! I think Jimmy was very brave :)

( if always boys were like that...-.-)

And i hope the new episode comes soon ! :)

[supaxflyxbeb]

YYYAAAAAYYYY. finally I love jimmy and maddie together, the characters you created are just so perfect for each other. gahh I am such a fan girl when it comes to this, your characters are so real and well yeahhh... so i have nothing else to say except that you are an awesome writer and that I am obsessed with you series, I hope you have time to post a new one soon.

[TheNickcyrus]

Yay Jimmy & Maddie<33

[JBgurls4ever]

I love you're writing. I Love this episode. Keep up the good work!