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From: davidorpheus
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  • big potent wise words spoken.....wise words

  • i did'nt write it on paper or two way or some shit i wrote it in my head!

  • throw big l in there

  • most ppl dont like being compared to other rappers, but being a mix of Jay-Z and Lupe Fiasco cant be too bad of a compliment...

  • Nice homie. Keep doing your thing!

  • dude sounds a little like nas

  • man dat nigga ate

  • I WISH I COULD DO DAT HAHA

  • i freestyle off the head but I learning to respect written more. who cares if its written if its hot. who cares if its off the head if its wack. think about it

  • tight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • that shit was mad hot, even if it was writen. its still his.

  • THAT WAS HOT QUIT HATIN SON

  • written = shit

  • dat wus tight

  • nice flow man

    that painting is nice too

  • mad sickness!

  • dig it!

  • that was nice as hell.......but the painting behind you was nicer. shit is sick. imma get that on my wall

  • Everyone that does that is writing their shit first. But if you only got a minute of tv time, you're not gonna come off the top and risk stumbling. It's business homeys

  • People these days are freestylin too fast. Ever heard lil wayne freestyle? It's not all fast and shit, but the lyrical and metaphorical quality makes it good.

    Still, not bad.

  • that wuz wack

    too many words

    too fast

    if you wouldve dumbed it down a bit it probably wouldve sounded good

    but u didnt

    ya metaphors and similes sucked

    and it was too much too fast

    jus bein truthful

    other than that it wuz aaight

  • yeaa thats definetly written..but still good shit

  • Real official,nice shit son.....~Was~

  • thats written..nice try kid

  • good shit man

  • mad hot

  • nice kid

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