I'm speaking straight from experience here if you truly paid any attention to Brentalfloss you'd realise how much strain he puts on his voice where as you put ... none this is sad the lyrics are good but they are not in sync nor are they in tune.
@deanfaak okay u see Brentalfloss doesn't really strain his voice to sound good believe me if he did he would always have a sore throat but does he? NO! so at least this guy tried so don't hate on him.
A bit of criticism. You're monotone, your syllables go over the entire notes, you use too many syllables at certain parts, and overall the lines don't go very well together. I can see promise for you if you follow lyrics and singing a bit more.
Also, your spelling is pretty bad for the lyrics. Not really criticism, but I'm a bit of a grammar nazi :p
whenever i go to a sunshine vid theres always a hate comment about how it sucks and its to easy well for 1 you clicked on the vid and 2nd ever tried 100%ing it
Good. Nice. Everybody should stop comparing this to Brentalfloss because NO ONE is as good as him. But, if you TRY to forget Brentalfloss, this is actually pretty good. As others said, sometimes, but only SOMEtimes the lyrics are too long, and a bit more emotion in your voice, could also polish this one a bit.
Lyrics are good (although aren't always in tune with music), you keep it at the same level, only raising your voice like twice, but besides that, I don't see anything "bad" about it, although you should make sure you have Brentalfloss's permission before stepping into his territory.
u ever heard of seconpdplaceeagle there a groupof 3 people who do with lyrics songs if u dont know them look them up and listen to someof their songs there aweosme ur awesome to out of btoth of ur sunshine vids i ratye them both 5 stars
i study music... what you have to do to make your phrases fit well is to think of phrases and words that have their accents on the accents of the song and that are short or long enough to fit...
for example... the first phrase of the song could be...
"some GUYS dont LIke to beLIEve.... this GAme Is COol to be REal"....
your lyrics are good but your voice needs to be higher, you voice is like monotone level, i can understand puberty but if your not a good singer why sing?
ok dude this is constructive criticism i dont think this is bad but try not to drop your voice so low and with the part with always saving the princess try not to flutter your voice u know what i mean like going low then back up a bit then lower besides that great job i like the lyrics
I loved the song, but like Brentalfloss said, you have to sing at a slightly higher octave. You're singing below your natural voice (I can hear it when you talk). Now I'm not a professional like Brent, so I have a considerably less amount of experience than him, but all I know is that when I sing above my regular pitch of voice, it sounds a lot better than lower. All things aside, 5/5 :) Great lyrics!
Well, you heard it from the Brentalfloss himself. MORE ENERGY! There's always going to be douchers nay saying and stuff, but after they're done messing with you, they just stick their thumb up their ass! Show those fag master tard balls you mean to SING! HUZZAH!
Nice work but you realy sound demotivated. The good thing at brentalfloss' videos is, that he looks like he has much fun, which makes it more fun to watch his videos.
I know, my english is the worst, but i hope you understand what i mean.
And the "1,2,3,4" counting doesn't fit at the beginning of this song.
But still nice work and I think i know what's coming next and I'll gladly see it.
If you're really trying to emulate me, I'd suggest taking songs like this up an octave. You might feel like you're yelling, and singing it lower might feel "safer", but you just end up sounding sleepier and less powerful. Next time try singing higher than you're comfortable with. You never know what might happen.
do some research before calling someone a dumbass. Piantismo is the annoying guy dressed as a pianta you have to race in the beach level and the one with the waterfall.
@Jamooo2008 It is who you who is the dumbass. The pianta are the inhabitants of where SMS takes place. Piantissimo (spelled correctly) is the little pink dude that's dressed up like a pianta and tries to race you every time you meet him in game. Are you at the ready? THE GET SET GO!
Haha good job man. For those who complain about his low voice, sunshine theme is very high for a male's voice to sing, so it wouldve sounded awful if he tried to reach the correct tone
not bad, a good job, but you should have practiced more, i know the camera can make you nervous, but the more you practice the easier it becomes, thanks for the upload, a good tribute to mario sunshine, thanks
Hey man, if you brought it to a key where you could sing it comfortably (because I can hear the tones of one who's trying to keep in key, but can't because it's just too low). Either switch up an octave, or do a cover of the song (as Brental does) where you can sing it at a nice level.
The lyrics are awesome, the singing voice could use a little work, no offense or anything. You have potential, at least you don't have an annoying voice like mine. :D
5. Don't give up because people say your not as good as someone else. If everyone quit because someone was better, than their would only be 1 person for everything. You no how boring sports would be with only 1 athlete per sport?(very)
its pretty good. good lyrics but the music is so.. yeah happy and you have a verry low voice try to sing a bit higher next time ^^ good luck with the next one
Decent writing, but yea... you sing better than me, but that's a consolation prize. Hand your lyrics off to someone who can do them justice. I have no idea who... but that's your job.
pretty good video, but to be clear, its "youtube's brentalfloss" screwattack was his "new coke" phase. or to use a more current phrase "screwattack was merely a setback"
Not bad, but you should sing a little higher... don't worry about the tone quality, just squeeze your balls a little and go for it. Keep writing lyrics!
it's gay
Thegamesfordays 3 weeks ago
fail on u
eveefan8 1 month ago
i found a piantissimo picture on google
eveefan8 1 month ago
lyrics. good. tune and pitch. o.e
Skunxful 1 month ago
yeah you needs some work and don't even try and dis super mario sunshine I like almost as much as 64
crazykilla394 1 month ago
You're a pretty good lyricist, but your singing needs work. You're off-key.
erectinGear 2 months ago
its Il Piantisimo not piantisnno, duh!
firefredrik 2 months ago
Have you heard about toad? He's Princess Peach's P.A.?..... All the brentalfoss fans wil get this and switch over.
amazinggrace863 3 months ago 2
not bad preety good
nando9991 3 months ago
hearing you sing makes my throat hurt i dunno why
goomba771 3 months ago
meh. Lyrics not bad. Voice is less than par bordering on very bad.
BigRed453 4 months ago
Its not galeto beach its gelato beach
TheShreder98 5 months ago
It's spelt Piantissimo. Maybe that's why you couldn't find the picture, lol. Anyway, awesome work. Keep it up!
PS3TNA157 6 months ago
very nice job guy. I can tell you worked very hard on this. YOu may not have the greatest singing voice but this is still a job well done! :)
sharinganmoon 6 months ago
I quite like this video.
MinerPlanet2 6 months ago
1:17 you Sùck Again It's not piantissno but piantissimo -,-'
Ekalka75habbo 6 months ago
0:31 Stars ? This is not collecting star but COLLECTING Shine # YOU SùCK #
Ekalka75habbo 6 months ago
@Ekalka75habbo he meant that you don't collect stars like in super mario 64
zeldaman1324 6 months ago
this is good but your voice cracks at some points usally to use mouth was to stop that
LetsPlayNintendo101 6 months ago
i love this game :P its better then galaxy
ACEAbridged 7 months ago
Song of storms
DEDwyer64 7 months ago
I'm speaking straight from experience here if you truly paid any attention to Brentalfloss you'd realise how much strain he puts on his voice where as you put ... none this is sad the lyrics are good but they are not in sync nor are they in tune.
deanfaak 7 months ago 6
@deanfaak okay u see Brentalfloss doesn't really strain his voice to sound good believe me if he did he would always have a sore throat but does he? NO! so at least this guy tried so don't hate on him.
GexMediaDimension 4 days ago
I googled Piantissno and found a bunch of pictures of him.
petertwnsnd 8 months ago
I love this game
ogmozis 8 months ago
he looks like malcom from malcom in the middle
chedderanthony01 8 months ago
i likes it
brettsworld99 9 months ago
your lyrics could be better...
but you dont suck at least...
damprumpan 9 months ago
It is pretty cool that you were inspired to make this but singing...not your strongsuit.monotone and sheepish.No life to it.Show some energy man!!!
Alucard746x 10 months ago
he looks like malcom from malcom in the midddle
anthonyreviews64 10 months ago
you are awsome! good lyrics
maybe you could have had some higher tones here and there other wise
Awsome!
banjodude186 11 months ago
its really no vacation
when you have lost all intrest--
8D OHH WHY HELLO THERE DAISY
videogamecactus 11 months ago
I googled Piantissno and found tons of pictures.
theAjackKidz 11 months ago
This video sucks...
TheLollero666 11 months ago
A bit of criticism. You're monotone, your syllables go over the entire notes, you use too many syllables at certain parts, and overall the lines don't go very well together. I can see promise for you if you follow lyrics and singing a bit more.
Also, your spelling is pretty bad for the lyrics. Not really criticism, but I'm a bit of a grammar nazi :p
FireJigglypuff2310 11 months ago
Your a good writer, but maby you should ge somebody else to sing it.
DrIvoRobotnick 1 year ago
whenever i go to a sunshine vid theres always a hate comment about how it sucks and its to easy well for 1 you clicked on the vid and 2nd ever tried 100%ing it
camloon360 1 year ago
You spelt the name wrong.Its Piantissno not Paintissno.gosh! If youre going to do a song about this game at least get the names right.
TheRacboy12 1 year ago
@TheRacboy12 Um... he did spell it "Piantissno".
TheArchsage74 1 year ago
@TheArchsage74
It's "Piantissimo". I play SMS way too much.
FireJigglypuff2310 11 months ago
Good. Nice. Everybody should stop comparing this to Brentalfloss because NO ONE is as good as him. But, if you TRY to forget Brentalfloss, this is actually pretty good. As others said, sometimes, but only SOMEtimes the lyrics are too long, and a bit more emotion in your voice, could also polish this one a bit.
GreatSoren 1 year ago
song of storms i know it i havent even played that game its on but i know it
supersonicfanful 1 year ago
Lyrics are good (although aren't always in tune with music), you keep it at the same level, only raising your voice like twice, but besides that, I don't see anything "bad" about it, although you should make sure you have Brentalfloss's permission before stepping into his territory.
legend3454 1 year ago
u ever heard of seconpdplaceeagle there a groupof 3 people who do with lyrics songs if u dont know them look them up and listen to someof their songs there aweosme ur awesome to out of btoth of ur sunshine vids i ratye them both 5 stars
pokemondx2252 1 year ago
You couldn't find a picture of Il Piantissimo because you spelled his name wrong.
enchantedtoast 1 year ago
The lyrics fit well with the song. Nice!
Jelley0 1 year ago
may not have the best voice around but your confident and adorable so keep it up! haters gon' hate!
PinkyWins 1 year ago
Mario 64 is def the next song
mortonkoopajr 1 year ago
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leave this to brentalfloss, no offense but you suck at singing. you kept the same tone and the lines extended over the rythym... basicly you suck
actualPSYCH0jr 1 year ago 5
@actualPSYCH0jr No offenCE but you suck? How can I not take offence to that? But I don't and I leave you with this: /watch?v=HcqEGBDj-Bk
That's my newest With Lyrics which should change your opinion of these videos of mine.
And "no offence" but you used the incorrect "offence" and spelled rhythm and basically wrong
mariobrosgang 1 year ago 8
@mariobrosgang i think you tie up with brentalfloss (i think paintissimo is an ass to) :) keep singin!
darkdestroyer245 1 year ago
@mariobrosgang you win
UnCensoredSean 1 year ago
@mariobrosgang well your singing isn't that great but hey you can correct some guys spelling over the internet congrats man.
MrBeanz18 10 months ago
@mariobrosgang Sometimes you can be an ass to trollers. In a good way. I respect that. Keep up the good work. :)
juvi12321 10 months ago
@mariobrosgang dont worry u dont suck a singing
chedderanthony01 8 months ago
@actualPSYCH0jr Well quit comparing it to brent then, I would like to see you do better.
corgal2 1 year ago
@actualPSYCH0jr basicly you suck
SuperGT240 10 months ago
@actualPSYCH0jr i used to be good at sining but now that my voice is breaking i have to sing kinda like mariobrosgang
14littledude 9 months ago
sunshine is way better than 64 its awesome
mortonkoopajr 1 year ago
i study music... what you have to do to make your phrases fit well is to think of phrases and words that have their accents on the accents of the song and that are short or long enough to fit...
for example... the first phrase of the song could be...
"some GUYS dont LIke to beLIEve.... this GAme Is COol to be REal"....
the capital letters are the accents
I hope this helps you to make better songs
its cool already though :)
and sorry... i speak spanish
linkwerewolf 1 year ago
your lyrics are great just the singing...
SalvadorkXD 1 year ago
is not good as brentalfloss but still pretty good, you should do more whit lyrics!
kionashi 1 year ago
at the begining u sound awesome but towards the end it seems as if u lost i nterest of singing and it didnt sound as good
pokemondx2252 1 year ago
u brentalfloss and secondplaceEAGLE R ALL GOOD AT LYRICS WITH VIDEO GAMES
pokemondx2252 1 year ago
Piantissimo is how you spell his name thats probably why you couldn't find a image of him since you mis-spelled it
trumpeter811 1 year ago
dude you are awesome you are the next brentalfloss!! keep up the great work i'm subing
trumpeter811 1 year ago
do ssbm menu 1
TheSuperMarioFan10 1 year ago
I agree. That Piantissimo is an ass.
Goldstar127 1 year ago
"Oh why hello there Daisy" hahaha
Nivek150 1 year ago
your lyrics are good but your voice needs to be higher, you voice is like monotone level, i can understand puberty but if your not a good singer why sing?
gorteous 1 year ago
do soul caliber
yowhatup726 1 year ago
Lol slash in the background
You a guns n roses fan? me too
aceofgames12 1 year ago
not bad i giggled :D
guitarninja820 1 year ago
thats more worser den hearing hannah montanna crap fireworks that sucked munkey vagina big time that is 4 nerds
silvertorch5 1 year ago
This sucked mutant horseradish dick.
Leave it to Brentalfloss.
You cant sing.
You cant write lyrics.
The video is cheesy. (Mostly because of the box one the bottom displaying lyrics.)
You are most likely Gay or Bisexual.
legendofzeldaseeker 1 year ago
Even though Piantissimo is an ass! I love that part mainly because it's true.
InuYashafanboyee 1 year ago
who the HELL is piantissno!? Other than that its ok.
MrNegi91 1 year ago
@MrNegi91 Piantissimo is the one you race during the game =D
FanofZelda450 1 year ago
I love this! You are great thumbs up! Screw the haters you rock!
panther2598 1 year ago
ok dude this is constructive criticism i dont think this is bad but try not to drop your voice so low and with the part with always saving the princess try not to flutter your voice u know what i mean like going low then back up a bit then lower besides that great job i like the lyrics
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theBunnyLazah 1 year ago
I loved the song, but like Brentalfloss said, you have to sing at a slightly higher octave. You're singing below your natural voice (I can hear it when you talk). Now I'm not a professional like Brent, so I have a considerably less amount of experience than him, but all I know is that when I sing above my regular pitch of voice, it sounds a lot better than lower. All things aside, 5/5 :) Great lyrics!
JaRiRa21 1 year ago
dude you sing like a mop
DaanShow 1 year ago
Well, you heard it from the Brentalfloss himself. MORE ENERGY! There's always going to be douchers nay saying and stuff, but after they're done messing with you, they just stick their thumb up their ass! Show those fag master tard balls you mean to SING! HUZZAH!
TheRexisFern 1 year ago
It's kind of crappy ... OH u mean as crappy as this song yeah I agree
TheKirbywarrior655 1 year ago
This ain't bad. Sunshine is cool. And it's quite awesome.
AmishParadise27 1 year ago
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this sucks monkey vagina
U2Cool4u 1 year ago
@U2Cool4u I must say, that is quite the original insult. Kudos to you!
mariobrosgang 1 year ago 22
@mariobrosgang
I know how you feel
Luigiforbrawl765 1 year ago
@mariobrosgang y thank u
U2Cool4u 1 year ago
who's Piantissno do u mean pianta?
Engetic1 1 year ago
welll.... so so xD
EmuLegends 1 year ago
good love it dude, just a little more emotion might be better. Other then that 5/5, this rules
CoolPieman1 1 year ago
sounded like Brawl's remix of the song of storms at the end ^_^
FanofZelda450 1 year ago
I find this awesome as hell, with proper equepment you could be better than brentafloss
HJJOPA 1 year ago
Also it's Gelato Beach
Dnfparasiempre 1 year ago
Mariobrosgang...
You're wrong.
Maybe if you actually knew his name you would have found it.
It's spelled Piantissimo.
"Are you at the ready? THEN GET SET GO!"
Dnfparasiempre 1 year ago
Greetings!
Nice work but you realy sound demotivated. The good thing at brentalfloss' videos is, that he looks like he has much fun, which makes it more fun to watch his videos.
I know, my english is the worst, but i hope you understand what i mean.
And the "1,2,3,4" counting doesn't fit at the beginning of this song.
But still nice work and I think i know what's coming next and I'll gladly see it.
(Once again, sorry for my bad english)
schrottinator 1 year ago
Not bad. It needs some work, but not bad.
AmishParadise27 1 year ago
If you're really trying to emulate me, I'd suggest taking songs like this up an octave. You might feel like you're yelling, and singing it lower might feel "safer", but you just end up sounding sleepier and less powerful. Next time try singing higher than you're comfortable with. You never know what might happen.
brentalfloss 1 year ago
@brentalfloss
Megahart123 1 year ago
I love this lyrics and this game
mario6515 1 year ago
u dumbass its pianta not piantismo
Jamooo2008 1 year ago
do some research before calling someone a dumbass. Piantismo is the annoying guy dressed as a pianta you have to race in the beach level and the one with the waterfall.
SnoocheeBoochees 1 year ago
@SnoocheeBoochees Piantissimo
Dnfparasiempre 1 year ago
@Jamooo2008 It is who you who is the dumbass. The pianta are the inhabitants of where SMS takes place. Piantissimo (spelled correctly) is the little pink dude that's dressed up like a pianta and tries to race you every time you meet him in game. Are you at the ready? THE GET SET GO!
Dnfparasiempre 1 year ago
LoL , i luv your Lyrics video.
PastoKage 1 year ago
Haha good job man. For those who complain about his low voice, sunshine theme is very high for a male's voice to sing, so it wouldve sounded awful if he tried to reach the correct tone
IgnitedMHK 2 years ago
Yeah instead of collecting MAGICAL stars... Let us spray lava off of people and wash off grafetti
liliesonfire 2 years ago
Your low voice doesn't really go with the key in this song. It just sounds flat and like you're talking while singing.
The lyrics were alright though.
Uratnik 2 years ago
not bad
taimak123 2 years ago
You probably couldn't find a picture of him because you spelled his name wrong...
CoyoteKun 2 years ago
not bad, a good job, but you should have practiced more, i know the camera can make you nervous, but the more you practice the easier it becomes, thanks for the upload, a good tribute to mario sunshine, thanks
Jshaw71 2 years ago
no offense but its pronouced "Jelato" no gaalato
Walker14121 2 years ago
Song of Storms! that is what its called right? haven't heard it in a while
SilverSonic202 2 years ago
I know the song you're hinting at and it's my favorite Zelda song EVAR!! YOU'DE BETTER DO IT JUSTICE!! I look forward to it.
Lulzigi 2 years ago
some words you have to work into the melody of the music more
BionicLightandShadow 2 years ago
Bowser boss theme from Super Mario 64? :D
UnicornPow3r 2 years ago
@UnicornPow3r
No wait, scratch that, it sounds like the boss theme from SM64.
UnicornPow3r 2 years ago
This game is the number 1 thing on my christmas list :D
Engetic1 2 years ago
It was pretty good.
The only thing I would say is that it sounds like you were trying to sing a bit lower than your range.
Great lyrics - Very creative.
Well made. :)
SheldonEatsFace 2 years ago
(oh why hello there daisy)
GattusoJAGD 2 years ago
It´s "GElAto" beach, not GAlEto!Gelato is italian for ice cream.
Quietschquatsch 2 years ago
Lol, pausing to read and gettign lol'd at!!!
Ronickable 2 years ago
O.K.
Was good, but a couple of pointers:-
I saw were you were going, but I think it'd be more successful if you did it in your own voice as opposed to immatating Brent.
If you were able, it'd be better if you sang a biit louder.
All in all though, it was really good with catchy lyrics!
Ronickable 2 years ago 2
Hey man, if you brought it to a key where you could sing it comfortably (because I can hear the tones of one who's trying to keep in key, but can't because it's just too low). Either switch up an octave, or do a cover of the song (as Brental does) where you can sing it at a nice level.
h4y4bu54 2 years ago
awesome job! all these guys are downing you...but face the facts....most of us here could not do that...
Mariobros814 2 years ago
I did pause the video to try and read it :) LOL
MoshJarcus 2 years ago
Song of storms
link123175 2 years ago
well, ur no brentalfloss, but nice try
sonicstar5 2 years ago
The lyrics are awesome, the singing voice could use a little work, no offense or anything. You have potential, at least you don't have an annoying voice like mine. :D
scratch799 2 years ago 9
This is awesome. The few things you should change were already said, but I have one more.
Instead of putting a black box there, make the white text have a black border.
UntestedPower 2 years ago
Great idea! I was wondering what would be a good way to get rid of the black box, but keep the letters visible. Thank you very much =D
mariobrosgang 2 years ago
1) You sing in the same tone all the time
2) Your lines are too long
3) Does not flow
4) Sunshine is awsome
5) Leave it to Brentalfloss
TheBiz182 2 years ago
1) I agree and will try to change it up more
2) Really? Maybe a few but some fit, right? =)
3) Hmm, I'll work on that as well
4) 100% true *High Five*
5) With all these type of comments the next With Lyrics will probably be the last
6) Thank you for your constructive criticism =]
mariobrosgang 2 years ago 3
5. Don't give up because people say your not as good as someone else. If everyone quit because someone was better, than their would only be 1 person for everything. You no how boring sports would be with only 1 athlete per sport?(very)
FuriousGunman 2 years ago 2
i like it. i want brent to sing it
k111993 2 years ago
its pretty good. good lyrics but the music is so.. yeah happy and you have a verry low voice try to sing a bit higher next time ^^ good luck with the next one
WonderfulNoise 2 years ago
Decent writing, but yea... you sing better than me, but that's a consolation prize. Hand your lyrics off to someone who can do them justice. I have no idea who... but that's your job.
paladincarvin 2 years ago
SONG OF STORMS!
SpencerJonath 2 years ago
The lyrics were ok but...yeah
GeminiDX 2 years ago
A tonedeaf Brentalfloss.
Krukkie 2 years ago
pretty good video, but to be clear, its "youtube's brentalfloss" screwattack was his "new coke" phase. or to use a more current phrase "screwattack was merely a setback"
squirreludecker 2 years ago
It's Gelato Beach, not Gatelo Beach.
CrappyBlueLuigi 2 years ago
hmm...pretty good. to be honest thoe, i would leave the music with lyrics to Brent.
magggie1 2 years ago
Not bad, but you should sing a little higher... don't worry about the tone quality, just squeeze your balls a little and go for it. Keep writing lyrics!
brentalfloss 2 years ago 45
super mario sunshine sucks.
this song has good points
chinezekid1 2 years ago
as always your the best
jackieo12345 2 years ago
lol! good job alex! the song is really catchy
bubbatannous 2 years ago 3
song of storms from Legend of Zelda Ocarina of Time
inuyasha569 2 years ago 17
hmm....
for princess you couldve used "arrest" as a rhyme... sort of.... nevermind XP
DArcbeetle 2 years ago 3
lol loved it!
nathanallan1 2 years ago
keep it up buddy. brentalfloss would be proud.
screwattack 2 years ago 6
Oh, it's the song of storms.
edgewoodblake 2 years ago 3
hahaha good especially the ending
Arceuszilla 2 years ago 2