Remitocoko - I Will Go First

[MJZLNP]

Toutes tes chansons sont vraiment magnifiques et ta voix, juste vraiment merveilleuse ! Avec l'accent anglais version français (un excellent accent, je ne dis pas le contraire), c'est super ! Continue, on en veut plus!! :D

:)

[jeji330]

Franchement, plus je regarde tes vidéos, plus je me dis que tu mérite d'être beaucoup plus connu... Tu as une voix magnifique et d'un incroyable justesse et tu as également une excellente prononciation de l'anglais. Continue, t'as vraiment beaucoup de talent.

Au fait, je suis en train d'apprendre la chanson, elle est très agréable à jouer et chanter ^^ Merci encore !

[Remitocoko]

@jeji330 Merci beaucoup, et si jamais tu as envie d'en faire une reprise sur Youtube, n'hésite surtout pas ! :)

[jeji330]

@Remitocoko

Pourquoi pas ^^ mais je vais d'abord la travailler, parce que c'est pas encore ça et je voudrai pas gâcher ton travail  ;)

[tayor99]

Remi can I hug your face plz?

[Bella93ish]

In my opinion the words you chose and how you wrote it are good and should stay the way they are. The way the song is written and sung makes it unique. Different. I personally like it.

[mexisxchrissy]

This is seriously one of the most beautiful songs I've ever listened to. It's so simple, but it really hits home for me. Definitely one of my new favoritess<3 (:

[JazzyJeffyJoo]

Hey! Thought seeing as it's your little creation you'd love it to be absolutely perfect :) Your line 'and how you can't swim unless you know where to sink at' would be such much better if you got rid of 'at', not that it doesn't make sense, it just isn't right in context :D LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE your work though, smashin'! :) Jasmine X

[Remitocoko]

@JazzyJeffyJoo Thanks for helping ! What do you mean it isn't right in context ? Could you be more specific please ?

[JazzyJeffyJoo]

@Remitocoko No worries:) Oo, hard to explain!! This is my take on the official definition... The 'at' doesn't enhance/influence the sentence any further because the rest of the sentence pretty much sums it up. The other words are having a nice tea party together and the 'at' is floating around at the end not fitting in?? hehe Hope that clears it up :) X

[Remitocoko]

@JazzyJeffyJoo Ok I get it. But is it uncorrect or just unnecessary ? Because it wouldn't sound as good without it, I would need to put another word with the same sound there anyway... ! Thanks for the help, it's very appreciated ! :)

[MatthewScottRose]

@Remitocoko I've listened to the song and I like it the way that it is. I agree that by the "rules" or English, having 'at' at the end of the line is not grammatically correct, but there are a lot of songs that don't follow the rules. The beauty of self expression is that you don't always have to. Even in French, I would assume that not all songs are "correct" by the rules of the language - but you really don't have to be. Excellent songwriting - you have a great talent.

[Remitocoko]

@MatthewScottRose Ok I get it, thanks a lot for helping ! Have a great day Matthew ! :)

[YourMajesty91]

@Remitocoko You should do a cover of Raise Your Glass by Pink. =) I think your voice is very good for that song.

[xXxmonsterkeksxXx]

beautiful song and great voice.

I like the way, you smile at the end.

good job. :)

[ShaneFoxX]

you are the best. j'adore! t'es meilleur que cocoon =]

[AnotherSadGirl]

I love those lyrics ♥

[hhuddaa]

NOM x

[GuitarPapster]

Remi, I truly love it! Art, courage and emotion. Thank you!

[rachel2636]

remi i dont know if you watch whatthebuck but he does a show were he promotes youtubers, you should submit one of your orginals to him! I think he'd love it and would help get your music out there!

[OliverX6]

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee make some french songs!!

[ThePeaceableKingdom]

Super pretty, very tender. You have a great voice. The simplicity of the guitar is very effective here...

[samira169465]

beautiful! Bravo my friend, Bravo! Look forward to hearing more original music from you.

[Mimiileemusic]

When Im in the office working; I many times put your channel on and listen to your acoustics ^^ very relaxing..

[GlitterxAndxHearts]

You are so so so so amazing! Ah!! LOVE<3.

[BilliMonroe]

B, E, G, and C is an inverted C7 chord. Sorry if I made that really complicated (I'm a music major). Anyway, I hope that helps. :) By the way, I love your songs. You're voice is amazing!

[Remitocoko]

@BilliMonroe So its name is "inverted C7" ? Thanks for the help and for the nice words ! :)

[DanielaSings]

love your voice :'(

[BILLKAULITZGIRL4EVER]

Can you do "Ladybug" by NeverShoutNever?

[SteeringForParadise]

"How I'm ripped apart" -> Butterflies in my stomach.

Always a pleasure to listen to you :)

[SkyluhhAndLexieLuu]

On my ipod <3



[Weronica100]

Rémi, I'd love you to be my youtube boyfriend;)

Nice song and adorable voice, as always;]

[Milanizzle123]

The lyrics have so much meaning its ridiculous :O <3

[brianatorifleming]

I couldn't imagine making any changes to this. Something is found in translation: a sincerity. Keep up the good work.

[madizzle93]

lovelovelove this.

[Soccerfrk777]

You actually have the best voice. Your accent like puts it overrrr the top.

Make videos more often.

Cause your voice is beautiful(:

And so are you♥♥♥

[violaplayerforever]

Amazing. I really feel like there should be a viola part to this song just to add another level of awesome. I can just hear myself playing with it in my head. Just beautiful . :)

[ArthurGarrosMusic]

it's been too long !

[Flo3Dmusica]

Sweeet!! Love it!!

[MakeupSOW]

I'm french and this is beautiful !! I love your song !

[MrFlorianfrank]

Wow. Thank you!! Wow.

[Maxim1990]

i'm so glad to be back on youtube when I see this :) good job, and you can always send lyrics to me if you need grammar check :)

[BilliMonroe]

For the Em chord in your introduction tab, it sounds as if you are talking about a C major 7 chord. Are the notes C, E, G, and B? If they are, then it's a CM7 chord major seventh instead of a minor seventh on top. Hope that helps.

[Remitocoko]

@BilliMonroe No the notes are B, E, G and C, do you know the name of that one ? Thanks for the help ! :)

[LoriAistulf]

i love it, Rémi :) thank you.

[CannotStopUs]

Good job!

What chords did you play with those C / Em / Am / F? 2° and 5°? I want to learn it and play it for a friend of mine! ♥

[Remitocoko]

@CannotStopUs The 2° and the 4° + 5° at first and then the 2° and the 4° + 5° + 6° from the "how I can't sing all them lullabies" moment. I hope that makes sense !

[CannotStopUs]

@Remitocoko absolutely yes! Woah I can't wait to try playing it! =D Thank you soooooo much!

Never stop doing it boy =)

[BandDINCrox]

holy fuck! Where can i download this?

[Remitocoko]

@BandDINCrox Done ! The link is now in the description box ! :)

[IDontLikeAsparagus]

Such an amazing voice. You write such beautiful lyrics; I can't believe it's only your second language! Great work!

[xkweendilemmax]

This is lovely!

[Zimologist]

Those lyrics are amazing.

[Deviante16]

This is beautiful! The correct word instead of 'them' would be 'those' but it works okay with them, its just a little more slang that 'proper' english :) Looking forward to your next upload!

[iin3sZ]

Your voice fits perfectly with drewby1xo :)

[dparkfashion]

I feel like your voice gets better and better each video(not that it was ever bad) this is beautiful

[pian0manpaul]

What a beautiful song with a simple yet haunting melody. You write better poetry in your second language than I write in my only language.

This may be more grammatically correct:

The (or Those) birds I fear, the (or those) … I will no longer heal from them.

But I like it exactly the way it is, and it may make sense to leave it as is; after all, people make grammatical errors, even on purpose.

As always, great work.

[Remitocoko]

@pian0manpaul Thanks ! Yes those ones were sort of on purpose. As @Deviante16 said I think it still works, though it's more slang. Thanks a lot to both of you for helping ! :)

[jamesrath]

Hey I wanna have yo babies <333333333

[CouleDansMonPoison]

Et ça fait du bien d'entendre ta voix! Merci.

[kejcikowa]

clear.. amazing.. deep.. ♥ !

[ihat3barbi3]

tres bien! :) bravo encore une fois pour cette mangnifique chanson!

Like'd ;)

[itscarolinemary]

so nice, I very much like the lyrics! I swear if you had a cd I would buy it and play it all the time. It would be especially nice to listen to while sitting outside or during long drives.

[esthergirl123]

J'aime beaucoup! Tresss belle :):) 

[whooshiable]

your voice is wonderful!!!

[taintedlover2007]

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.

[Lindead666]

Such a beautiful song!

[CHARLATUBEx]

I like!

[OtherCoffee]

Parfaitement parfait !

[yemored]

Belle chanson, tout en légèreté et en douceur. Bravo, c'est parfait =)

[DareToDream3]

Love this, so heartfelt. Love your voice!! Keep pumping out these songs!!

[emunkthebeliever]

Beau travail encore une fois ^^

[asarcastichello]

You must have an album of your (beautiful) songs.

[bjenne]

I love the lyrics, you're really talented. I have no doubt that you'll make it far.

[xPIPZZYx]

This is so, so beautiful <3

It's really amazing, I adore your voice ♥

[TaylorGT123]

Beautiful!

[whatsinmyfridge]

YESYESYESSSSS

[Dork0730]

This song is absolutely wonderful. I love your voice. :)

P.S The English is perfect.

[xconverseballerinax]

love it :)