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  • I'd like it better if the lyrics matched the text.

  • whatta a choice of music ! makes it 100000 times more romantic , i hope your still with the girl you wrote this for !

  • Good

  • lovely poem

  • Hey man amazing poem =) hey if you guys dont mind i actaully wrote a poem to and i posted on youtbe and i would really like it if you guys/girls can watch and give me ur opions on it. Thx alot and again very good poem =). And please again if you guys/girls can take a look at my poem to its on my channel :) p.s it was my first vid after long time so i was shy :/

  • @AliJokers Thanks Man, means a lot! & I sure will :D

  • @schoenchen Np and thx alot wat u think?b honest =)

  • dear my lovely wife..i promise to be true to you in good times and in bad,in sickness and in health..I will love you and honor you all the days of my life..

  • your the best poem writer ever i hope you don't mind if i sent these to my girlfriend lolololol

  • @2for20 - Lol Thanks Man & Be my guest haha

  • your 1st poem hit me... ^^

  • @NeverMhineYours - Thanks so much! I would say it's my very best!

  • Very beautiful message! I will definitely send this to my Sweetheart in hongkong...thank you so much for posting ;) Reagan was so blessed to have u!

  • @rkgooner89 - Thanks so much!!

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  • this made my girl cry :)

  • @john400ful - I hope in a good way haha

  • i have one :roses are red lemons are sour girl spread ur legs and give me one hour!!!!  ;)

  • @AllMyMelody777 - Aww Thanks so much :] & I sure will hehe

  • @FaedWolf21 -Aw, well I'm really glad you liked it, Hope it was a good cry!

  • @TheMarcushunter - Your Welcome Man, I'm so Glad I was able to help :]

  • @coolnofool - Thanks so much!

  • this is how i got laid

  • @TheSimplysteve - Hahahahahahahahahahahaha lol Well I'm glad that worked out for you!

  • Wow! So beautiful

  • @catheynshvll - Aww Thanks soo much :]

  • Dude, I know, coming from a 12 year old this may not seem much, but, you have a talent, that, is powerful, I mean, Just with a couple words, you made my heart sink.

    You need alot to make that happen to me, I think you're a great poet, and I hope the best for you and the woman. :)

    P.s, I write a couple poems of my own, not long, or good though. :<

  • Hey everybody, if you really like poetry check out our video. Remember to give your rating. Thanks!

  • A circle is round and never ends; thats how long i'll be your friend

  • 13 people didn't get it.

  • @MarvinBOII123 - Thank You so much for actually understanding it :]

  • awwwwww this poem is so nice

    

  • @shawtiilove21 - Awwww thanks, means the world to me :]

  • this is gay!

  • heres one i kind of made up:

    I love you, I want to be with you

    every second of every day and

    I will fight for you until my heart

    stops beating.

    What do you think?

  • @mystic489

    It's good, but it needs work, I can feel what you feel for him/her by that, so it's good that it shows emotion. :(

  • man and i thoght i was good,but my poems comperd to this,one of mine would be like,

    I was sceard when i first saw you,

    I was sceard when i first met you ,

    I was sceard how i felt about you,

    And now im sceard that I mite lose you

    sorry for spelling

  • i thought it was amazing it was so good i'm happy for u nd reagan

  • @joey9428 - Thank You sooooo much!

  • ilove this song its so omg just so cute

  • @sillysooty101 - Thanks :]

  • I LOVE WRITTING POEMS WRITTING THEM IS MY OTHER TALENT THAT GOD BLESS ME WIT ILL HAVE SUM ON HERE SOON LOOK OUT FOR THEM.

  • @marquisantoniolee - I sure will :]

  • unbeliveabley beautiful

  • @kgsangel - Awww thanks :]

  • @BloodyHeartbreak - I would Love to :] and thank youu so much, that really means a lot to me!

  • I left the door open to my heart but you only came in to say goodbye

    thumbs up if this happened to you

  • whit this message i have got my girlfriend back.

  • @077684490 - Aw I'm soo Glad my poem helped you two out! :]

  • Absolutely brilliant and so what I feel too.

    Thanks for sharing your feelings

  • @tizzyj1 - Anytime :] & Thanks so much, I'm Glad!

  • i love this my friend and i both almost cried, and she and i never cry, so touching

  • @tmv111895 - Awwwww well thank youu :] I'm Glad you two loved my poems :]

  • iight :D

  • i copied that and gave it to my girl friend , my ex girlfriend got gellus. she thought i was lieing when i said i wa rich - i wasn't

  • it was so beatiful tht i was rlly cryin and not many love poems cant do tht to me u r the poem righter evr

  • @kidced - Well thanks :] means the world to me, I'm so Glad you loved it!

  • very great beautiful poem

  • @tomatombomb13 - Awww Thanks :] means so much!

  • i saw this somewhere:

    I see you

    Im afraid to approach you

    Im afraid to talk to you

    Im afraid to hug you

    Im afraid to kiss you

    Im afraid to love you

    Now that i love you....

    Im afraid to loose you.......

  • @DRAGONIRONFIST that is so true! if i lost my bf idk how i would live he is my world

  • @caitykoo95 ='} awww....

  • @DRAGONIRONFIST its true he took all summer getting to know me than asked me out on my bday and my parents love him and well i can't explain him he is too great for words and thinks i am his princess!:)

  • that was a very fantastic and liket the poems l helpet my my poams to my girlfrind that l miss every day and evey night and one day that were live togther and show our love for each other.ps and l also like pics you took nice places too

  • Best poem ever, me and my love loved it so much it was almost like it was about us

    Thank you for writing this, love it

  • @iwillkillyou808 - Awww well I'm really glad my poem reminds you of your loved one and you, means the world to me knowing something I wrote can resolve in someones life in such a good way :] Thank You sooo much for showing sum luv and your welcome :]

  • love my meg so much, obicham te !!!

  • jackly

  • Thank you Everyone soo much for all the love and support and the amazing comments...keep them coming..I'll be putting up new ones real soon..Once again thank you and God Bless You ALL! :]

  • wow thats amazing :-)

    im so happy i have someone who writes poems for me too.

    when a boy writes to a girl only just one word for her that means a LOT or maybe EVERYTHING. thats really so beautiful :)

  • @valeerioo45  - Awwww Thanks, means so much to me!

  • this poem is so fantastic..can not say the words...only i thank the owner for sharing..

  • @jackw345 Thank you sooo much, really means a lot to me :] I'm glad you enjoyed it

  • @jackw345 - Thank you so much..words can't even describe how much! But Your Welcome :]

  • Dear Michelle, Baby it doesn't matter if we are far apart from each other, It doesn't matter if the worlds turning their back on you, It does't matter if the roads long and the ride's uncomfortable...Look beside you, michie I'm always here for you. Love you with all my heart <3 <3 My baby girl.....

  • Just beautifull 5/5

  • I love these poems man. Props to you man. Keep it up! ^^

  • Wonderful song, poem, and video

  • I luv u angela baby

  • wooow very good..... bravoooooo when i read it and it touched my heart... and your poem talking about my heart :$ and i send it to my love... i hope she will understand me :)

    very good just go on with it...

  • LOVE THIS. THIS IS JUST SO BEAUTIFULL

  • MY GIRL FROM PERU SENT THIS TO ME. IT IS BEAUTIFUL AND A TOUCHING POEM FROM SOMEONE SO FAR AWAY. I CAN SEE IN YOUR GIRL THE INSPIRATION YOU FEEL,LOVE IS THE BEST GOD GIVES.

  • oh wonderful...

  • awwww i luv diz one -mi fav-

  • ooooh....it's a romantic poem.....:-)

  • here's one of my love poems:you are the prettiest rose in the garden of life,your eyes brighter than the stars,your spirit more free than a bird,and you,as beautiful as can be,smarter than Einstein,nicer than Santa,strong as an ox,and lovelier than any rose on earth.

  • @SuperBullseye

    That poem of yours was honest and veryreal. It didn't seem like you spent days thinking of what to say. It wasright there on the tip of your tongue from the deepest part of your heart. It made me smile. A child-like quality which is a good thing. Too much of what we say is so convuluted.This was charming and sweet. Keep writing or staying in love or BOTH.

  • @early60srcool thanks.she is the sunshine of my life.if i were to lose her i would jump off a bridge.

  • This is beautiful!

  • i can feel your heart with this writings...keep it up

  • very nice

  • i love this poem its the best poem ive ever read it really touched my heart i can really relate to it i write poems myself and u have inspired me to keep writing everyday

  • oh god thank you so much...when i sent this to my girlfriend the next time i saw her she jumped into my arms and started crying tears of joy:)

  • Those are beautifull poems that can only originate from a true lovers heart :) i'm wishing you both the best of luck & happiness in life.

  • great

    

  • fantastic

  • really nice dude i see you put a lot of work into it you have my respect

  • You have an amazing talent. I honestly wish I could write like that.

  • @DOJOKA50 - All you gotta do..is put your very own..heart...soul & mind into it, and watch a masterpiece be created :] worked for me!

  • @schoenchen I <3 u got my gf who was so hot but refused to go out with me wants to go out with me now

  • You have a great talent. I honestly wish I could write like that.

  • its hilarious, I almost shed tears of wishes

  • fucking love it

  • this is thebest poem i hav heard so far! 5/5

  • dude, thank you sooo much, this poem got me and my girlfriend bak together. ( :

  • Mind blowing...

  • Good poems and terrible music.

  • so great this girl is really lucky to having you 5/5 and fav keep it up :)

  • This is a lovely poem this has made me feel sad but happy and has made my friend feel the right choice xx love this forever xx :)

  • good job dear thank you for this beatiful love poems really those words touching the hearts and yes there is nothing beautiful like love in this whole world specially when to be in love with someone

  • Thank You Everyone For the wonderful comments :] They all really mean a lot to me, Keep them coming hehe, Thank You

  • @schoenchen Beautiful ......My tears run down my face .......... I recently lost my beautiful angel .............. Died in his 15 years of life ........... So much I miss my angel

  • I write poetry but,this poem is very good...I LIKE IT...

  • BEAUTIFUL POEM :))

  • Oh my god!! This is a very BEAUTIFUL POEM

  • very nice... really touching...

  • 10nx

  • thx i sent this a girl

    and she asked me out

    thx 4 the poem XxXxxXxx

  • thats beautiful! man

  • Jesse ILOVEYOU! <3

  • good work 5/5 it was beautiful.

  • your girlfriend must have really loved this present because that was simply beautiful

  • i rely feld it....its same as mine story thanx fr it ...if u dont mind can i send it to ma girl.''?

  • dude im crying so lovely

  • the first poem is lovely xxxxx

  • the words r so true xxxxx

  • actually ,, no comment ever can express my appreciation ,, that was amazing , wonderful really ,, it touched ma heart softly ,, thank u : ) and i dedicate it to my love <3 : ) ,, thnx again

  • dude i freestyled a poem yesterday and it sounds similar to yours!

  • thank you so much for making this and I realy did cry cuz my gf and i are going through some tough times and so I'm going to send this toher anyways thnk you so much agian for making this

  • Absolutely Beautiful =).. Mahalo for sharing ..

  • this is s0 sweet

  • this will be great for my girlfriend XD

  • I love this my great Buck..

  • just like you hill, just like you :)

  • Awesome!

  • this is amazing!

    but remember this quote, my dad told me this before my mom divorced him,

    "Dont look for a girlfriend...Look for a future wife."

  • I know how you feel. My girlfriend just broke up with me and Ive been so depressed since then. I wrote her two poems, and I just finished writing a song for her. Im going to put it on youtube and tell her to watch it because Its a song about me asking for another chance. . . Pray for me and that everything works out. Thanks

  • I wil pray for you because ik how it feels dude!! Good Luck!  Jesus will always be there for you.

  • Thanks

  • mine just broke up with me yesterday ... im praying for yea ;)

  • thanks. Hope everything works out for you.

  • A love such as yours is very precious and will last a lifetime...

  • Love is so beautiful!!! Amazing poems!!!! makes me think of the boy I love <3 <3

  • its gud very gud...........god bless u.......

  • YO!!! INTERNET HUG!!!!!!!!!!!!that was amazing the way u discribed her was plain out mezmorizing!!!!!!!!!!!! if you dont mind can i recite this poem to my class...9creative writing: poetry) i belive the more this poem is expossed the more people will stop acting foolishly and finally settle down their immature ways!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!again amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Beautiful!! full of love. It made me cry... Wish we could be together also like Anthony and Reagan. I miss him...

  • im even crying its well good

  • That was so beautiful! Who ever Reagan is, He/she will love it for sure! Great job!,

  • beautiful

  • beutiful it made me cry im im a boy! lol

  • nothing wrong with that. i cry too. most boys do. and the sensitive ones are the ones that get that girl in the end.

  • Reagan is a lucky girl :-)

  • Incredible.

  • i used every sentence fr my gf

    me and her are together now and thanks

  • I love your poem Anthony,

  • lightning never strikes the same place twice.....great love will only come once....be patient enough to wait and pray for that...it may come later.... gud for u anthony based on ur poem..i guess shes a God loving person...shes a gift sent to you indeed...

  • omg anthony thats so.................. i cant omg im gonna cry so preety exuse me

  • That was disgusting. I can appriciate love poems but the first was sickenenly sugary and indescript and the second one was a little creepy. I hope Reagan liked them but man. That was embarissingly painful to read.

  • awesome!!

  • The First 1 was amazing :D Keep writing poems plz ! Its so beautiful You have the skills dude!

  • DUUD!!!...i couldnt even watch the whole thing....duud the poem i made wasnt even that big...the 1 for my gf but she still liked it....wow.....im glad u found some1 in ur life worth loving..^^ <3

  • I LOVE THIS POEM ITS SO BEAUITFUL ;)

  • beautiful poem