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From: JustAnotherDay4
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  • this was my favorite part

    It just made my heart drop every time I saw him with her. Talking, holding hands, hugging, kissing, practically breathing each others air.

    But Im not jealous, no Im not. I just want everything shes got. The way he looks at her, he looks at her so amazed. I guess he really likes her.

    :)

  • aweee<3 so cute (:

  • AWESOME!!!

  • sounds really good ;)

  • (cont)

    my fave part: Wow, was he a real cutie. He was tall with dark brown curly hair and the most gorgeous dark brown eyes, the first thing that made me notice him. Yet, looks werent all about him. He was also in the baseball team. He had a great personality and a good sense of humor. Shy at some points but really outgoing. He seemed perfect! His name was Nick.

    I can't freaking believe that this is happing to me (well me in the story) I can't wait for this to keep go plz don't lose focus

  • OMG I LOVE THIS this is tottally how i felt about this one guy i mean he wasn't as amazing-ly good looking as Nick Jonas but hey what guy that's actually in my leage does look that amazing!

  • ahh! i just loved this part...

    He was tall with dark brown curly hair and the most gorgeous dark brown eyes, the first thing that made me notice him...

    haha.. of course he has gorgeous brown eyes, who wouldnt want to stare right into them, right? lol..

    i loved it..

    its really good, hmm... it reminds me of something..

    ahh! i rather not think about it, but I'm glad it's Nick!!!!!!!

    Great Chapter!

    cant wait for the next one to be up and running.

  • sounds amazing!!! love it so far haha what happened with just another day though? that was good too haha

  • I lost focus.

    I got distracted by someone. =\

  • aww :( i havent talked to you in ages!! wee need to catch up

  • haha i know!! tell me when you get on aim or something =]

  • lol i'll be on aim the whole day tomorrow :D now im off to bed haha byee :D

  • OOooooh really interesting! :D

    I am really excited for this story, it's gonna be great! (:

  • Sounds really good :)

  • i love this!

    you should def. continue!

    :)

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