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From: StanleyPacion
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  • Honestly Stanley, this poem made me have goosebumps it was so good. It was an outstanding poem about life and people in general that are like this, it is sad. People do things they thing are good for them when it isn't. If only people wouldn't treath themselves like that. Sad sad things in this world. But they do it to themself, but they want sympathy. I can't give sympathy to a person who's actions harm them in the end. But sad fact it claims lives every day. Let your heart guide you.

  • Thanks Mister! Cody, I really appreciate all your follow ups to my work, especially since I still it as developing and wanting real professionalism. Youtube reminds me of the early television shows that I watched as child, you know, a bit hokey and wanting polish on the edges. When you respond kindly to my efforts it has the effect of pushing me forward.

    Your effort, your positive comments and acute, insightful appraisals of the verse propels me forward. Best Regards, Stanley

  • this is so sad, and it is sadly something that happens often among many girls. very good though.

  • Thank Ms Jordan 92xx, I appreciate you taking out the time to comment. I enjoy the making of these videos, though I am still amateur in my technique. For a person of my generation this opportunity to reach across the country and the world, plus the inter generational aspect, young and people my age, and older is phenomenal. It amazes me, Viva Youtube, and

    Thank You miss for your kind and positive comment.

  • All these, or most of these bits of lyrics were composed over the years, and in some of them the person addressed is more a composite of several friends than any one individual. Also, many of them have a strong allegorical component. One may never find an answer in material substance, no matter the method we use to control it. Even in the plenty which surrounds, in our material abundance many of us are starving in the spiritual sense.

  • Friend, You caught me walking out the door. More later, but I am compelled, again, to say Thank You.

    Yours, Stanley

  • continued thought,

    I really enjoy having this conversation with you, over and again, for months now. Your observations are acute and heart felt, I must tell you once more how much I appreciate your kindness. You do, you do humble me, sir.

  • That was pretty powerful, adding the lack of period due to anorexia, and her heart clenching response. Very sad. No, if this happened for real, you couldn't be friends with her, at least not the kind that supports her self-destructive ways. And if this didn't happen, ha! look how concerned you have caused me to be with your poem. Excellent Sir!

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