Your modeling and lighting are pretty good, and I like the character design.
You need more cuts. At around 1:28 when the sign falls on the lizard's head, you just linger on the shot as he stands up, and thinks through to another idea, and then executes it. We should be seeing this character's FACE as he is thinking of what to do, not his back. Cut to a close up of him when he thinks, and THEN go back to the wide shot of him jumping for the doorknob.
Your modeling and lighting are pretty good, and I like the character design.
You need more cuts. At around 1:28 when the sign falls on the lizard's head, you just linger on the shot as he stands up, and thinks through to another idea, and then executes it. We should be seeing this character's FACE as he is thinking of what to do, not his back. Cut to a close up of him when he thinks, and THEN go back to the wide shot of him jumping for the doorknob.
igniius 10 months ago
Thank you for your advice! we will do it best next time!
zwx8613 8 months ago
i like the animations i kinda thought it would be about the red lanters (green lantern villains)
urkhalmaster 3 years ago