A Semi story "Pressure" ep.1 [PG 13]

[JulietandValentine]

XD if only it were real ;)

[fishstickk]

i love her smile at 0:40 - 0:44 shes so hot

[taylorjacobfan123]

nice!

[TIZ190]

this story is awesome so far.i'm just now reading this and i cant wait to read the next one.

[MELENAFASEMIFAN]

LOVE IT MORE

[WeSupportMelena]

This is so wunderrfool!(:

Continue.:D

[heller102]

thank you i will definitely continue this :D!

[AvrilRock2]

well i thinku have a great wide stories ideas , but i'm really not interested in any of RATED R stories ,, but i'll watch it cause i like the way you write your story and i love the trailer too =)

[fansp89]

yes this is very different but its pretty awesome i love the twist

[Dontliejustlive1]

wow make more :)

[JJthejetplane1231]

this is awsome keep writing please love it

[95rodrigues]

LOVED IT! Can't wait for the next one, post soon!! pwease :) it'll help with your sleeping! :D

[MultiNoonespecial]

I'm happy to sub you err what will happen next im so excited!!!

[heller102]

wow thank you that inspired me a lot :D!

[demilenafan101]

for the first chapter I may say it is totally different from the one's you are writing but it is still good...and Demi is like a bad guy here :)!!!

[heller102]

i know but please continue reading it :)!! even though demi is like that :D!