Se Tu M'ami, Se Sospiri

[martipuigroig]

No me gusta que asco!!

[flaze3]

@martipuigroig tu comento más!

[fuchion15]

would love to see an updated version of this from you with an actual accompanist, in which he or she will follow you, not the other way around.

[parangaricutirimicau]

è l'atteggiamento che è grande mi congratulo con voi, ma avete molto da lavorare sulla tua sfumature e vocalizzare più amici, si vuole suonare e cantare ma si dovrebbe essere. Vi suggerisco di perdere peso in modo da avere un migliore equilibrio di te e la tua voce

[blueblacks]

nice, did you do this for a competition?

I just got a 97% on it, love this song XD

[RainbowRatatouille]

Well.. you've got potential. It's just the breathing and releasing the energy into the words and not wasting it.

[maudetorterat]

you are a singer :-))

stand up, stand your head and your neck!

this song is not really simple!

i'm working it too :D

(sorry i'm french)

continue!

[AlexaFucsia]

practice the pronunciation..and work a little bit with your vocal and youll be great..you have talent..and when your singing try not to move so much..:)

[merlinfan1006]

=)I like it!, you should study more your singing tecnique to develop your voice, you have potential...best wishes for you!

[globalgourmand]

Keep practicing. Pronunciation, pitch. You can do it! :)

[cabalains]

hace muchos años canto lirico. ignorante eres tu

y ella

canta como las weas jsjsjsjss

[merlinfan1006]

jajaja, tu unica intencion es fastidiar verdad?...pucha mejor sigue escuchando la musica de tu canal..con letra tan renegada como todo lo que sale de ti, y si hace tanto cantas lirico...donde estan tus videos?...has algo positivo por la vidaaaa=)

[cabalains]

por favor ke verguenza no sabes cantar

[merlinfan1006]

no seas ignorante, ella esta desarrollando su voz..quisiera oirte a ti intentando cantar lirico... si quieres escucharalgo mas avanzado busca a bartolli ...no seas tan ignorante de criticar por criticar. Shaerin, congrats, you did an excellent job with the tempo...i love your color voice is so sweet, watch my version i upload my version too

[minaburd93]

The pitch is really...

[ashenwolf13]

i liked the arrangement of the piece, but work on your pronunciation. Roll your "r's" and with the words "pastorello" and "se sogetto" there are three notes in the each phrase...not only two. Make sure you hit all three instead of smothing them over. Good job!

[ratatouillez]

flat, out of pitch.

work on your pronunciation you're about 1/3 of the way there.

[topliokmj]

ma muor

[SopranoSinger16]

You have a ton of potential. I thought this was very good considering the quality, just work on your pronounciation and that will change a ton! One thing my voice coach always tells me is when you're singing never give up on it especially on the higher notes. Feed all the energy you have through your vocals and also take an extra breath inbetween if you need to. You don't want to be out of breath by the end of the phrase and feel like you need to gasp when you inhale afterwards.

[tepaioinleva69]

vergoniati bauca

[cutecatcay]

great!

[kmhyde10]

Needs work.

[ColinMeloy91]

needs a little work but youll get it this was good tho.

[BroadwayyBaby04]

Nice voice but watch your pitches and shape your phrases more. Also be careful on your vowels they sound very american.

[byutieke]

beeeeetje vals schat whaha

[Solecit00]

Debería colocar la voz...

[psychicbyinternet]

stop picking on her and tell her the real bottom line: u of t is a stupid, pretentious, horrible, snooty university and no one who is passionate about music should apply to it.

[alyssasag]

good job needs work though, if you want check out mine and tell me what you think...actaully please do

[rysoad]

oink oink

[leprincedesfees]

Some of the best singers are bigger. It's gives a wonderful tone, and I can't believe you would say something stupid like that. Does that make someone a bad person because they're bigger? That's like saying HAHAHAH YOU HAVE BROWN HAIR, so shut up and go die.

[atlasUSSR]

Nice...but you have some wrong words in Italian.

wrong: "so spiri", "matiri", "debbariamar", "proporina" and "glialtri".

Correct: "sospiri","martiri", "debbo a riamar", "porporina" and "gli altri".

Thank you!

[91linda]

che brava!!!!

[SingingQT101]

umm...needs aton of work.

you were wayyy off at most parts and you slid to much.

needs more breath support.

:/

[TaintedSpear]

you werent singing it in key

[omgitsrebeccab]

its a little 2 legato.

but i think with a little more work u could b rlly good!

:)))

[amykapey121]

not bad. you need work on your vowel placement and intonation. but you look very young, you have a lot of time to work. good job on such a hard song!

[onutza2007]

ooooo...horror...sorry u must work much moore!!

[l4bellamy]

A couple of pieces of advice when it comes to singing this piece.

~Intonation is key. Work on each interval and make sure that they are clear.

~Sing the song first on a neutral syllable like la or loo, then say the text before adding to the music.

[Leinaah]

Oh gosh, the horror... Your Italian is sooo bad!!

[stefanellina]

non è vero il suo italiano è buono. è L'intonazione che deve curare!!!

[beezoid27]

"Oh gosh, the horror... Your Italian is sooo bad!!"

You actually chose her highlight to criticise... lol Her italian is not bad at all, she just needs to learn to sing better, but she has a very sweet voice.

[operaticxingenue]

I don't even know where to begin with the critique. -_-;

[justin1982b]

I have been looking at some of the videos for "Lasciatemi Morire" and I came across yours. I am very impressed. Like everyone said, keep working and practicing and becoming more technically sound. Who knows, you could be the next Lena Horn. :)

[DamienThornGirl666]

im just starting this song with my voice instructor. its beautiful!

[jestal]

Good start to a difficult song. Try singing the song on "loo". As you sing it try connecting the notes using your air flow. Air flow is a big part of singing.

[ShaeRin]

My instructor and I have worked on this song since I made this video. We are pretty much done with it and have moved on to something else. Thank you for your comment :)

[saprano1ke]

How Old Are you??? .... Thast a hard song to pull off I sang it as a college freshmen and I think you did a good job continue working with your teacher to fix technical problems keep it up nice work

[ShaeRin]

16, thanks :)

[ShiChelle]

Aw, that's pretty good! :p I think SingerFreak pretty much said what I was thinking as far as criticism goes... I didn't know you sang. :( And as Reinbach said, really 'tis a dying art(I'd do it myself, but I don't wanna make people go deaf! X3). /clap. :p

[ShaeRin]

;p Chelle. And, as you see, I do sing :P <3

[SingerFreak]

Ummmo... Right... Let's get started, shall we? If you were looking for criticism, be ready.

Some notes... Half notes... Weren't exactly hitting the mark. -Cough.- Your tone is a little childish due to the fact that you do not open your mouth upward. You open your mouth to the side. Dynamics... I won't go there unless you want me to.

Over all, I was wondering if you possibly had a better recording? Maybe try recording it again and then repost it?

[ShaeRin]

About missing notes, my instructor and I covered that last Saturday. Been working on that this week. And, I can't open my mouth very far; my jaw tends to lock up when I do but I've been trying ^^;; And for the dynamics... I know they weren't very good. As for the recording, all I have is my crappy lil webcam and the CD my instructor gives me.

Thank you for the comment :)

[MariahDanee]

You and I have the same exact problem. The dynamics aren't too well. Those I had to work on as well. x.o Good job, though. Just strengthen it. :3

[BooguiBoo]

que bonita voz tienes, se ve que todabia estas chica, pero seguramente si siques practicando tendras una gran voz, cuidado con la diccion y apoya bien para que no te vallas a lastimar la garganta porque seria una lastima. Bien hecho

[ShaeRin]

Thank you ^^;

[ShiChelle]

Kitti~ If you're curious, he/she said, "You have such a pretty voice for a girl(girl meaning young girl, not just "female"), but surely if you practise more you'll get better; careful with diction because it helps to last longer(keep singing longer) because it would be a shame if you did not. Good work." Rough translation, no one hurt me if I'm off, please. lol :P

[ShaeRin]

Thank you Chelle... I used babelfish and was confused as hell. x3

[Unikatze]

Richelle's translation wasn't very accurate either though >.>

[FearVice]

Kitti >.>

[ShaeRin]

Vyce <.<;