Light Of My Love (An Original Song) UK Songwriting Contest 2008 Semi-Finalist

[kittenrenea]

this is a sweet and lovely song, Bunchie...  :) keep singing and smiling and God bless you!

Tami

[myusernamesux321]

yh quite good

[BonelessSausage]

Great stuff. Wish I had that talent. Don't listen to people like Hazysunlight who just love to criticize. Ed

[VictoriaWinters]

This is a great song, and my favourite of yours so far!

[bunchie1966]

Thanks for the encouragement; glad you liked it.

[FinnMove]

Beautiful, dreamlike.

[ann6079]

Nice song, bunchie! Thanks for sharing! :)

[tylerr3950]

This is my favorite song of yours. I like the chords and the second half has a cool attmosphere with that vocal or synthetic harmony.

[AyoBully]

I have to say bunchie, this is my fav video from your entries. good Percussions (i missed it on the other two i saw, so i thought ill comment on this seperatly), nice melody and again great lyrics, i just think you sang a little to high on the bridges. But thats nothing to worry about, Its a great piece of work. Although it sounds a little familiar.

[xxpiggystardustxx]

wtg again

[podstar1]

enjoyed the listen here.very nice arrangement and killer melody

[HazySunlight]

Interesting structure, I really expected you to shift to a major tonality for the second section, but staying minor really made this one outstanding. The ending needs work, sounds like you weren't quite sure what you wanted to do with it.

[bunchie1966]

Thanks for the evaluation; actually I was quite pleased with the ending; I though bringing in the guitar to finish it off was a way of ending the song, while giving a final, brief reminder of the solo in the middle - what would be your suggestion?

[HazySunlight]

Oh I quite like the guitar returning, that's cool - it was the final few notes of the vocal line that seemed a little hesitant - "to fade and die". The way you go up to the C# on "die" sounds like you're fishing for a note. Of course you needed something to fit the chord and not clash with the guitar, but perhaps since the vocal is a little weak there, it sounds like you made it up on the spot. I'd polish the performance, or try going down to F#, or even F, for some resolution.

[richpat]

Ths is one of my faves so far... I really like this, I keep coming back to this one ...

[bunchie1966]

Glad you like it. It was written from the heart.

[wobblyka]

I love it.

[uju27]

galing ng mtv a.. good song too.

[miminbulala]

This is lovely. I hope someone writes a song like this for me!

[butsiki1966]

I love this song and the arrangement too. The words are nice too.