Arey dost...thanks a lot for your sincere comments and I am glad you listened. One thing I did was slowed the track a little so had messed up the timing of surs in some places! I sang this song in a function and it was really appreciated. As you said I had some better feedback on this song by then and also put in some feelings and harkats! Take care buddy. Jai Hind!
Good attempt! But the clips u have shown have no relevance to the song. Another thing is polish up your voice a bit. Otherwise, it's good and can touch anyone's dats listening to it. I was attempting the same thing but gotta wait. My number is +91 9867 97 6372. I am into singing too. Maybe We could talk
I listened to your entire song. My comments are as follows:
1. Voice needs more stylizing.
2. Sur needs mores work. Kahin kahin to sur bahut hat jaa raha hain.
3. Expressions needs more polishing. This is also related to voice stylizing but also closely connected to the context of the words.
4. Taal sahi hain aapka.
5. Aur Sabse badi baat mere bhai sincerity nazar aati hain.
Koshish karo dost ... duniya koshish par hi chalti hain ... Jai Hind!
KishoreKaDeewana 3 years ago
Arey dost...thanks a lot for your sincere comments and I am glad you listened. One thing I did was slowed the track a little so had messed up the timing of surs in some places! I sang this song in a function and it was really appreciated. As you said I had some better feedback on this song by then and also put in some feelings and harkats! Take care buddy. Jai Hind!
vbkommoj2000 3 years ago
Good attempt! But the clips u have shown have no relevance to the song. Another thing is polish up your voice a bit. Otherwise, it's good and can touch anyone's dats listening to it. I was attempting the same thing but gotta wait. My number is +91 9867 97 6372. I am into singing too. Maybe We could talk
moonliteinday 3 years ago
Hello Thanks for commenting. After recoding this I realized where my mistakes are but I still put this up just for fun.
vbkommoj2000 3 years ago
please comment and pass the word...so i can get some recognition..
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vbkommoj2000 3 years ago