Life Cycle of a Chicken

[plokipoiuyo]

The eggs look like they are wearing socks...?

[Martz10]

uj

[Evan16100]

First off, you cannot create a chickens life using your own creativity! It doesnt make sense. Second. The eggs look like they have condoms on the top. So no wonder they were trapped. Lol

[eduvidum]

2:53 The sentence: Now, you can make your own chicken's life cycle and you can arrange it according to your own creativity. It was not explain that this is a DIY chicken's life cycle. What do you mean by arrange it according to your own creativity? Are you indicating that it can rearrange and you still get the right flow?

[MrRadunk]

Good video for me. Can see your efforts on doing this video. The content are there, and it will be really interesting for a young learners.

notakakidimuka:

1. Some editing on the audio and background will help to make this video nicer.

[mrmrscats]

hahaha...even de father chicken dunno where they come from...quite funny...hihihi...nice job dude...

[ExcellLeo7]

Thanks megatron, baikpunyeer,acikg,anugal,and aleecheekhong for the comment.. I'll make necessary changes if possible.. Thanks again..

[ExcellLeo7]

Hi preetydiana! Thanks for commenting, hmm.. if u mean about the word Hooray!, Wow, Yahoo!..all that are purposely done so that the video does not sound too formal which will make it dull, but noted, i'll be aware next time.. Thanks again..

[ExcellLeo7]

Mrschumil: Thanks for commenting, actually i have further edit the audio and you may view it at group skydrive group 8, by the way I will make other necessary changes..thanks again..

[aleecheekhong]

Good co-operation of different voices. Where a chicken comes from remind me the movie whereby this little boy asking his mum 'where does the baby come from?' Voice clear accompanied by appropriate background music.

[ExcellLeo7]

Hi guys! Thanks for rating and leaving positive comments, by the way littlepanda9, actually I want to use colourful background, but as I use Adobe After Effect, my characters will look weird if I made them move in the colourful background. But, I'll try to make out something...Thanks again.

[anugal87]

very interesting, nicely done but the voice clarity can be better especially when the baby chicken part. good job guys...

[preetydiana]

Nice video. I like the the introduction of the video which has makes us to have a good understanding of the video. Just that there are a number of SMS words being used but other than that you have done a good job!!!

[acikg13]

interesting. i think you can achieve your learning objectives with flying colors as your video portray simple storyline which help pupils to have better understanding towards the lesson.... good job

[megatron2207]

Good attempt. you managed to create something interesting and educational to teach life cycle of a chicken using story of a family chicken..perhaps, you may consider to put some background to make it more lively...:)

[littlepanda9]

Interesting! Clearly showed the concept of life cycle. The voice ideas are communicated with enthusiasm, proper voice projection, appropriate language, and clear delivery. Background audio is kept in balance and does not overpower the primary audio. However, you may like to change the background colour. Make it colourful! Kids would love it!

[mrschumil]

interesting characters used plus lively voice... but papa chicken voice is quite drowned by other voices... very cute chicken pictures used in your video... the font used is suitable but you may want to increase the size so that it will be more clearer for audience... all in all good job..