nice work! though i felt at some instances e woman doesnt really feel alive... im guessing mayb not enough eye darts to show thought processes? for eg, i feel an eye dart to recall e situation at e part when she said "...and..." could help. i realise u did put in eye darts at some places... but i didnt manage to catch it at first view.
I love the fact thar her head gets closer and closer - especially from "approached me" to "really sexy" I really feel that understated intimacy there. NIce work.
nice work! though i felt at some instances e woman doesnt really feel alive... im guessing mayb not enough eye darts to show thought processes? for eg, i feel an eye dart to recall e situation at e part when she said "...and..." could help. i realise u did put in eye darts at some places... but i didnt manage to catch it at first view.
elppac 4 months ago 2
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unprofessionalvids 5 months ago
I love the fact thar her head gets closer and closer - especially from "approached me" to "really sexy" I really feel that understated intimacy there. NIce work.
AndrewCothill 6 months ago
beautifully acted. the power of minimalism!
youknownuno 6 months ago
This is brilliant!!
xxbluejay21 8 months ago