The FanFiction Critic, episode 24, "Oops-A-Daisy," part 5

[123FishCrazy]

If you think this is bad, you should go and read some YuGiOh fanfiction. I swear, it is SO sad.

[Astromaxis]

I think in actuality Draco didn't want to be a death eater — he has hesitations after becoming one and being put on the front line of all dangerous and dark things the death eaters could fix up. But yeah it's nice to show if Draco ever changes why he does he can't just overnight stop being a pureblood jerk

[rockPanties69]

i dare you to take on Rose Potter. If you thought Holly Potter was bad...it still is, but this is in the top 5. Anybody else agree? thumbs up.

[shinobi67]

@rockPanties69 I don't think any critic of fanfiction could tackle Rose Potter. That's probably the most massive mess of badfic ever. Especially considering that the author essentially copies huge chunks of the books.

[rockPanties69]

@shinobi67 true, very true, but one can also make the argument that Face the Strange is essentially the god of trollfics, and if the FanFiction Critic can survive that (somehow), wouldn't it be fun to watch?

[shinobi67]

@rockPanties69 True. Though it would be a fairly massive review, even cutting out the parts that are just copy pasted from the original novels. I remember reading an MSTed version of it somewhere (There's a link on the TV Tropes page if you're interested) that was... more than 100 chapters long. Not to mention the author's disturbing obsession with naked, underaged girls. And what he did to poor Luna!

[snarrylover1]

Ahhhh, you can't remove the Dark Mark. And stop making Severus the bad guy. Why not Pansy? And Severus did want to become a death eater...wait...why am I writing this? This author is an idiot. I'm going to stop stressing about this.

[caso8]

i think this explains alot: TVTropes, Draco In Leather Pants

[FanFicCritic]

...what the f*** was with that typo??

Anyway, this inconsistencies in this story is making my eyes bleed...

[simplexplanxfanx]

I think Rita Skiter does write for the Prophet.

[caso8]

@simplexplanxfanx DID write for the Prophet, then wrote that one off for the Quibbler, then was unheard of til she wrote that book on Dumbledore in DH. so either way it could work..

[CherryFairy02]

Well, Draco IS something of a reluctant Death Eater, but it's more of a reluctance to commit murder than a reluctance to persecute muggles. He has no problem with the latter.