Phyllis ( Geek vs. Prince)

[Almarea700]

please tell me the name of this song :)

[iloveHim4002]

your work on this video is really great! but caspian is the perfect man for susan ! ;)

[Almarea700]

i actually cried when watching this,, you are so amazing !

[Katetrnka]

okay i better get this strait in your minds susan was a stupid person, she was not a geek. she was selfserving and anyone who read the actual books should know that oh anf she stopped beleiving in narnia and told the others that they were stupid to beleive in stupid games like that.

[mycamelot16]

Omgsh, that's almost exaclty how my sisters and I imagined it! You're my hero!!!

[ZappingHero]

Hey, Warren is my first name. Good job working on your first YouTube video Steph.

[OurFantasyIsland]

What is this song? Could you tell me?

[melodysweetmusic177]

I loved it! :D

[liafaizah1]

it's so amazing i can't stop watching this video, good job :)

[777dasar]

boring

[jowifren777]

I really Love this one!!!! The Love of God is deeper than any thing else. Phyllis... is'nt it the name that Susan said was her name to that boy in the beginning of Prince Caspian?

Any way. I Love the film! I do also don't like this Susan/Caspian-thing. it is'nt even in the book...

[jowifren777]

I really Love this one!!!! The Love of God is deeper than any thing else. Phyllis... is'nt it the name that Susan said was her name to that boy in the beginning of Prince Caspian? Was his name Warren? I didn't knew that.

Any way. I Love the film!

[chosen1atWork]

of the people in the movie, it would be poetic if she did marry the 'geek' (just because he looks like one doesnt mean he is.. i am one but i dont look it). what most people who havent read the book dont understand is susan was nearly 30 years old when she met caspian even though she was in a teenager's body. Not to mention, while she was queen in narnia the first time, she nearly married a southern prince (boy and his horse), so she was no stranger to the 'feeling' and knew it would not work.

[Evelyn4eva]

so beautiful - it made me cry.

Thank you for this wonderful video - perfect narrative and music :)

[unknow1510]

it's beautiful!!!!

[Soturitar]

I cry every time I see this! So beautiful and sad

[smileclarenet]

Seeing that video has mademe want to read the story! It's brilliantly done, and the music fits perfectly. I love the idea as well - it makes such a nice change from Susan/Caspian!

[RoseBaggins]

Yeah, never liked the Susan/Caspian pairing, but you're kind of along the same lines in thinking as me since I did pair her up with a geek, however he's from another story. Klaus Baudelaire from A Series of Unfortunate Events is the guy I thought would be best for her (and I paired Peter with Violet). I also like how you did Aslan and Jesus in this, totally wonderful. There's hope for Susan after all!!! (She's one of my favorite characters from this series)

[ehuendo]

Whoever made this video, I am forever grateful. I've read the books, and Susan has always been my favorite character. When I read she was no longer a "friend of Narnia," I was disappointed and upset. This video really helped. Thank you so much!!!

ehuendo

[DrWhoFanatic101]

That's really good!! I hate the whole 'Suspian' thing, so it was nice to see a change (:

[JCMercyGrace]

One could only hope that happens to all the Susans/Phyllises of this world.

[Rin4Lizzie]

when he says "Phylli?" I started to giggle really hard, but this was very cute, and like how you tied together aslan and Jesus = )

[Stoffel91]

wonderfull

very romantic :)

[VannesaGirl1004]

Very nice. I absolutely love Narnia, but had kinda given up good Narnia fanfiction and your story brought it back around for me. :)

[0indiangirl00]

thats a nice, well done story.

still I think Susan belongs to Caspian.

I prefer princes <3

but your way is more realistic.

Susan would never go back to Narnia. she's a part of this world.

but in Susans stead I would wait for Caspian my whole life.

I'm a dreamer^^

[Zelfit]

Don't like the original end of Susan, so I liked this very much

[SolanaCloud]

even though i love caspian i love the fact you paired susan with the boy from the train station...he is just what she needed

[cobyboschma]

People shouldn't change stories that are already well written.

[kataangfan22]

Beautiful <3

My name ist Phyllis ,too ;D

[MentosFanka]

What is the title of this music??

[itsneil9]

you suck

[joybetweenhispaws]

I love it! :)

[estamau]

at first i dont think i will like it but.... I LOVED IT!, :')

[peacecanhappen27]

When I saw the title I groaned, but I'm glad I watched it. so sweet! and the music is beautiful!

[AtarahDerek]

This was great! I love the fact that you chose the geek to show Susan the way back to Aslan. And for the record, as Charlie Eppes proves, geek is chic. Geeks will rule the world one day, and a modern-day geek has far more power than any prince--all in the form of ones and zeroes.

Best of all, this didn't focus on Susan and Caspian.

[Akopolipse]

love it soo mutch!!!!

[zeroguepirate]

This is a beautiful vid. Gave me chills.

[lmntfan3]

this vid is awesome!!!!!!! 2 thumbs up!!!! and is the girl at 2:47 really anna popplewell?

[CoconutHorse]

This was awesome, but *cough*...nothing wrong with the more...calmed-down fangirl.

[randomclash]

this makes me cry

[randomclash]

hey wats the story called

[whatisthisshiiit]

The whole point of the geek was foreshadowing. In the books, Susan's downfall was her vanity. She gave up believing in Aslan in pursuit of clothes, men, and prestige.

[Cereghini]

He doesn't need a haircut! Those are extensions to make our dear Ben look a little more princely, not that he wouldn't fit the role otherwise...

[saphuras1122]

DH I love your vids !! Please make more Phyllis!! ;)

[missorange93]

REALLY NEED THE SONG PEOPLE! :)

[SokkaStyle]

so true geeks are gonna rule the world one day

[entertainmania]

OMG!! This was awesome! You must really continue this.. ... please beg ya.. it's really wonderful.

Geek over Princes ! haha.. loved it!

[moonstaRawwwr]

at last caspian will marry ramandu's daughter ( read the book 'the voyage and the dawn treader')

[cheerleader4lyfe235]

I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE SUSPIAN, BUT:

This was really good! Bravi!

[BenevolentVapor]

That is such a beautiful story, Dearheart!! Thank you so much for making it! I always wished Susan had a happy ending in the Chronicles of Narnia books. And I agree that Geeks are better than Princes any day and that Caspian needs a haircut. lol =)

[fiddl3s]

FANTASTIC.

You simply must continue writing this story. If you don't, I'm afraid that thousands of "Surran" fans will come after you with plastic sporks and moldy potatoes!

[Dearheart42]

Noooooes!!! Not sporks and moldy potatoes! ANYTHING but that!! XD

Lol, I'm glad you like the story so much! I will definitely update ASAP! =D Susan and the Geek forever!

[fiddl3s]

Yes, definitely one of the more gruesome ways to die. ;)

I've read all 5 chapters and I'm absolutely starving for more.

You have a lot of talent, and I love it so much that you should look into publishing, once you finish it. I bet you will have to work with copyrights and such to use tradmarks such as Narnia and Aslan, etc; but you should still look into it. I believe it is that GOOD!

Fantastic work so far, thank you so much for the privilege of reading such a wonderful piece of writing.

[Delpheas]

The geek isn't in the books, but she does stop believing, her family dies and all go to Aslan's country.

Phyllis was just the name Susan gave the geek in the movie.

[strongenoughforlife]

OMG!!! all of that...does that really happen in the books??? or did u make it up? like, does she really stop believing, does her family die, does she become "phyllis" and does she marry that geek!?!?!

[anonymous1vs]

unique idea but r u crazy who would choose that geek over caspian.

[Dearheart42]

I would. Geeks are better than princes ANY day! =D (Besides, Ben Barnes needs a haircut.) >__>

And everyone knows that geeks will someday rule the world. ;-)

[xXRoseKuruizakiXx]

@Dearheart42 Rule the world? Geeks? Now that is scary, but the for now, the PRINCE shall rule. -^^-

[uworonuk]

@Dearheart42

shame on you! Ben Barnes' hair is absulutly perfect! And I love him with a spanish or british accent =D

[narniagirl11]

@Dearheart42

Well, I have to admit I'm not fond of the idea of Susan and Caspian but I'm not sure if I like the geek guy either. I do like that he leads her back to Christ and Aslan.

[narniagirl11]

@Dearheart42

Well once I did this funny thig for my sister and took movie pics and put them together with text and one was about Capian's hair. Susan told him she couldn't marry him because she didn't like his hair style! He was a little ticked off because he had it done just for her and she thought it was gross! Funny!

[narniagirl11]

@Dearheart42

Well I'd have to disagree on that. I would personally rather marry a prince (unless it was Prince Caspian) than a geek or maybe someone who was like Peter. He always was my favorite character. :D

[rockstar13000]

So beautiful, yet so sad! I love it so much!

[debater13]

So sad, and yet it had such an important message! The music, pictures, and whatever you call the script at the bottom made me want to cry. (Though it is naturally very hard for me to cry! :D) Please, keep your videos comming!

[courttv89]

This was fantastic. Ugh I hate Caspian/Susan. I love Warren/Susan now they make the ultimate couple.

[europegirlh2o]

that was so cute and lovely! (well, the ending...the middle was sad, ya kno?) anyway, it's really well made! good job!

[gauffsa]

Please do finish the fan fic you started on this. It's so hard to find good writing, period. Please let me know when you do start working on it again...

Also, please let me know what music you used. It is absolutely breath-taking.

[sweetfreinds]

I love this vd so much, you did the best job ever!!!

[avatarkairi]

Good for you! See, I didn't really have a problem with the SusanXCaspian stuff in the movie. What bugged me was, as you said, it clogged up the Fanfic archives with stories about Aslan going "Oh, just kidding, Susan you can come back and be with your 'tru wuv' now." Like he'd do that. And also because now Caspian's gonna look like a total cad in Dawn Treader. Also, I agree, geeks pwn princes. Though princes can be okay too. Which is why I like Edmund so much. He's both.

[gauffsa]

I totally agree. It wasn't such a bad idea (Su and Casp), but it does kind of louse up the next story. Hopefully people will be wise enough (ha ha) to remember that even if they did like the Su/Casp pairing, this Ramandu's daughter is who he was supposed to be with all along. If the story is told well, I suspect they'll fall in love wtih the new pairing just as quickly.

lol Ed as a geek and a prince. Funny!  But remember..."It's 'King, Kind Edmund."

;)

[debater13]

Yes, that's exactly what I said when I came out of the movie theater after watching Prince Caspian. "Boy, Prince Caspian is going to look like a philander!" Or however you spell it. Edmund (Skander Keynes) is not a geek! I am offended by that line! :D

[andr7450]

that is LOVELY!

[WitsyBleu]

This is such a sad vid!

I love it!

The music fits the vid perfectly!

[Soturitar]

So sad, so beautiful! Thank you for this touching vid!

[NarniaFan105]

The Song Was Beautifull and it made me cry (tear) Great Vid Even though it is only pics :D

[hasarii]

where is the music from???

[daleyluverforever]

this is awsome pls do more!!!!

[XSilverXRoseX14]

Wonderful job! I did like the idea of Susan and Caspian, but I knew that it was something that Disney decided to throw in. I also kind of felt bad because Caspian marries another girl in the Voyage of the Dawn Treader. I was also wondering what would happen to Susan since the Last Battle had the rest of her family killed and she no longer believed in Narnia. Thanks for answering. ^^ (Yes, I know it's a fanfic all of you nasty people that might read this comment.)

[GoldenSun96]

This Was Good :)

[Riyabryn]

I love this! I thought Susan/Caspain was sweet but... it wasn't but C.S. Lewis wanted! And ever since that scene with "Phyllis" in the movie I've totally thought she'd end up with him. Thank you for this! :D

[writerssoul]

I would choose the dashing prince.

[gauffsa]

*whisper* Me, too!

But this is still a beautiful video!

[BelieverinGod08]

I'm love it. I didn't like the Suspian Idéa. This one is far better than the other one. :D It almost made me cry.

[sweetfreinds]

LOVE IT,,

[talktob3cks]

Amen sister

Down with Suspian!

[talktob3cks]

I just read your story. It was great! Do you thing you will finish it?

[sweetfreinds]

I love this VD.......... it is so cool and true I am going to miss Susan in the movies.

[lilmissnadinee]

woah! i love the story, it really intrigued me, but all the same, excellent job. keep up the good work!

[pkatharine]

very good message. we do need faith and Jesus.

[Hallows4]

I don't normally approve of delving so deeply into movie-based material, but this was very cleverly done, and really captured the essence of Susan's character.

[andr7450]

Wow! That was touching. I knew she would find her way to Aslan's Country, somehow, somewhere.

[sweetfreinds]

I love that MUSIC WHERE DID YOU GET IT, IT IS BEAUTIFUL. THE STORE IS SO PRETTY.

[sweetfreinds]

I love it, it is so cool

[DuchessAliana]

YOU ARE A FREAKING GENIUS. I MUST read this story now!

[demyxrocks92]

Wow. Loved the video! I'd never thought of the story like that, that's sweet <3

[starsapphire2]

Nice work on the video, though I can accept the idea of Suspian. I still like this pairing, even if I didn't like the geek at first.(Not now!)

[Selumgirl]

I agree: geeks are really much much batter than princes.

[MerryEsquireofRohan]

Most excellent! I love this! I can't stand the Susan/Caspian romance thing.

[gauffsa]

Last comment, I promise! You're a great writer! Honestly, I usually have little faith in people's fan fic work, but you did an impeccable job weaving the book and film together seamlessly--as well as representing those aspects you hate (ie-Suspian) with as much sincerity and feeling as that leading up to Warren and Susan. BRAVO!!!

Please do let me know when you write more--and go light on the "Suspian" fans. Believe it or not, they're not ALL stark-raving idiots. ;)

[gauffsa]

So, that said re: your poll, I'd have to go with the "walking Pantene commercial," though not so much, "OMG liek Susan and Caspian mak teh cutest couple EVR...etc.," as, "In this world where mere sex seems to rule all, it was nice to see something start that MAY have had substance."  It's a bit early to think they should end up together forever & ever, amen, but if she'd stayed--& I'm not saying she should have--I'd have been interested to see how the relationship would've progressed.

[gauffsa]

P.S. As for your poll, though... you didn't have my choice. :( And the wording was not at all biased... *wink*

The Caspian/Susan thing WAS sweet, and again, I really liked how it was treated in the film. This comes from someone who usually despises the added romances in films and even books. (I really liked that the "Da Vinci Code" film actually took it OUT.)

[gauffsa]

Coming from someone who actually loved how the film handled their little crush, even if it wasn't in the book and the subsequent fan fics were painfully subpar (aren't they usually?), your take on Surren (or would it be Warsan?) was really touching. I am not a religious person, but your use of spirituality was also very beautiful. Great job! (I am going to check out your story right now!)

[PiNaYsKaTeGuRl]

I love this pairing! Finally...something other than Suspian! I mean...it was just a kiss and the book didn't include that!

What's the song's name. I swear...I've heard it before..but it's on the tip of my tongue.

Great video! I want to see more Suseek. XD

[Isadora120]

okay... it was good but i totally fell in love with the caspian susan thing. I think it's fine to like a diffrent pairing and i read your story on quizzla, it was good but not my thing... sorry!

~IS.

[IrishFaerieRose]

You know I love it! :D

[FriendofNarnia]

That's sweet. I read the first chapter of "Phyllis" and it was really good. I'm glad that SOMEONE has something other than a Caspian/Susan romance vid. :D

And I like what you said about the 'Kiss of Doom'. Well put. I'm going to use that.

KC

[hammyluver777]

THANK YOU! FINALLY FOR ONCE NO Susan/Caspian junk! I read your story before I saw this and I loved it! Your an awesome writer! I can't wait to read more! (When I heard there was a kiss between Susan and Caspian I wanted to slam a chair up against the wall! THAT WASN'T IN THE BOOK!)

[AuberyMirkwood]

Very Nice! I know how much time and effort this probably took! It has such a good story/point!

[Narnialover4]

Awesome,Dearie glad I got you inspired to do a montage of your own

[liloboegeek]

oh DH I LOVE IT!!!

-Kaori

[Checet]

DH, I read the first chapter of "Phyllis". I'm not usually into romance, but this one was good. The video is GREAT! 5 stars!