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From: Mapthestars
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  • This was a very cool idea

  • @OnTargetProductionz Thanks man. I just went over and looked at your most recent and really liked that one to. the shots you have are nice, I enjoy that you can control the focus easily. that's one thing I dislike ab out my camera, I can't really do any pull focus shots with it while recording and I really want to. Only thing was I think it would've helped if the business man was actually an adult and when he stops talking on the phone and looks over and then walks up to the homeless...

  • @OnTargetProductionz I didn't make the connection the reason why he stopped talking was because he saw the boy give him the money. I think it was the shot/staging. It seemed he had his back to them the whole time so I thought, he couldn't have seen that. then with the shot, it was a close up, and the eye line didn't seem right, maybe if there was a shot where you saw all three of them as the kid gives him the money and you see him watching. But overall great film, and your other stuff's good to.

  • @OnTargetProductionz Also, I love your Joseph gordon-levitt look alike friend :) Keep making movies, I enjoy watching them.

  • @Mapthestars Thanks for all the feedback and i enjoy your films as well

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