magnificent. though why did you put the words on the same line where Williams made a conscious choice to break? Great self expression but doesn't do the poem's form justice.
I like it, however be careful...you should have separated wheelbarrow and rainwater into two words each. This is one of Williams main techniques in expressing the simplicity of the poem's essence.
So much depends, upon the bends of the barrow, by the white hens. So much depends, upon the barrow, by the hens, wet with water. (Flows a tad nicer. My English teacher was fiddling about with the poem)
I thought this was an excellent potrayal of the poem - kudos.
6000countingdown 1 month ago
<3 The red wheel barrow.
Mullixhi 2 months ago
Awesome, glad I found it!
TheSimci 7 months ago
Its a bit shit isnt it
IeuPify 7 months ago
take a look at wheelbarrow flatland one wheel one world barra handy
kutlericeland 11 months ago
Great work. It must be annoying, to say the least- when the 'academics and purists' spout off!
CustardpiePuppets 1 year ago
magnificent. though why did you put the words on the same line where Williams made a conscious choice to break? Great self expression but doesn't do the poem's form justice.
lsmayhew 1 year ago
I like it, however be careful...you should have separated wheelbarrow and rainwater into two words each. This is one of Williams main techniques in expressing the simplicity of the poem's essence.
cz231 1 year ago
Great, great job on your video! Very creative, very eye-catching! Thanks for doing this!
soulstorm3 2 years ago
Wow, this is terrific. Great job.
puppetlit 2 years ago
I read this poem for my english class about a year ago. I never understood it. It was one of the few I never really got.
Can someone explain what it was about??
jjguy23 2 years ago
isn't there anyone says the poem ..? guys help me up , i want to know how we read a poem in english ..... im not english
q8y4AllMyLife 2 years ago
is there a video of him singing it?
virtigo3 2 years ago
i love this
BDempsey37 2 years ago
thanks
heartbrayke1982 2 years ago
i liked that, good animation and music to the poem:)
heretherebealiens 2 years ago
Wow that is gorgeous!!! beautiful! go you and your amazing skill
unicyclist0 3 years ago
RIP WCW
7Row7enn7 3 years ago
So much depends, upon the bends of the barrow, by the white hens. So much depends, upon the barrow, by the hens, wet with water. (Flows a tad nicer. My English teacher was fiddling about with the poem)
Warwickcain 3 years ago
this is my verson i made for a school thing it's called the the cold red knife
so much depends apone
a cold red knife
dripping with warm blood
beside a dead body
i know kinda odd but it's all i could come up with
BAM1027 3 years ago
Why is the knife cold if it is strewn with warm blood?
7Row7enn7 3 years ago
Haha. Exactly what I was thinking! Bit of a contradiction. This is like W.C. Williams crossed with Slayer lyrics.
dirtycelinefrenchman 3 years ago
so much depends
upon
a red wheel
barrow
glazed with rain
water
beside the white
chickens
joshscomputer 4 years ago
lovely style
the music is really nice as well
great texture
richragsdale 4 years ago
Amazing. I love this! Beautiful music and animation. Fits the poem perfectly.
sleeper3343 4 years ago
amazing.. how did you capture that movement so well?? :)
aonrach 4 years ago
amazing. this really touched me man you have some creative juices flowing throughout your body my friend.
timlearybedead 5 years ago
wonderful, gosh!!
TorstenEtLaMegas 5 years ago
I remember that poem! O:
Chickens = love. xD
Stereominate 5 years ago
very nice... ;)
marcogodme 5 years ago
it is beautiful. i like your style so much.
ntiak 5 years ago
That was beautiful!
Did you do that this summer??
Sgay 5 years ago
nay, last semester
heartbrayke1982 5 years ago