I liked their Camera angles, but Honestly the acting made me want to puke, and the lines could of been more...less read off a script, But I liked the plot line : )
It was pretty good, but i'd like to give you some constructive critism.
First, I think that the shadow effect is a tad bit cheesy in my personal opinion, it may differ with other people.
Second, I think that a little more emotion should have been shown. Act it out more than you think that you would in real life, and it ends up perfect on film.
Third, when doing fight scenes do the takes many times, alot more than you normally would. For example, at 3:49, he fall was a bit delayed.
To whom it may concern...if you think you and your friends could do better the Festival begins on October 8th at 6:00 pm.... be there or forever shut your mouth!
Logan did a great job in this. No need to be getting all harsh on her. She couldn't have played this part better if she tried. No offense to you, but you couldve used a little emotion. I mean jeez your about to die by some crazy chick in the middle of a graveyard! If it was real life you wouldve been terrified. Acting is about trying to make the emotions seem real. I didnt believe you.
FAIL
saburexno1 2 weeks ago
i like how basic yet how smart it was with the cliches it used leading to its basic climax
roadspike1ify 3 months ago
haha i laughed a little when she said her real name was cinderella and when she screamed forever at the end i jumped nice job
kristen4698 4 months ago
I liked their Camera angles, but Honestly the acting made me want to puke, and the lines could of been more...less read off a script, But I liked the plot line : )
testis112 5 months ago
are you seriously kidding me with this film?? film festival winner?? well... this certainly gives me hope of being a good film maker!!
MRBananaMan87 1 year ago
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greendaylover418 9 months ago
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greendaylover418 9 months ago
wow this is AWESOME! good job;))
Selenagomez5able1 1 year ago
nice acting guys!
amyinponderland 1 year ago
3:47 looks sooo cool. i wish i made this!!! lol!!!!
Lolipie10 1 year ago
You did an excellent job. I can see why this short film won. It was perfectly done thank you for posting. Well done on the Movie.
AlicevsNemisis 2 years ago
What? Where's all that blood? haha Good job on the video. Thumbs up!
treverlazlo 2 years ago
well done except the music choice at 1:28
but very well made i can see you know a thing or two about filmmaking
DXFan1269 2 years ago
good plot/acting but the sound was terrible if you couold fix that then you could have a great film
HeAteAVolvo 2 years ago
well dun nice acting and well filmed good job
beepsbobby 2 years ago
haha thank you!
Logue24 2 years ago
They really have their camera angles down though. At 0:16, the shot was extremely good.
TheJamesDun 2 years ago
Thank you for the comments and the review of the work. The kids really try hard and I agree with some education they could really shine...thanks
shubzdaj 2 years ago
It was pretty good, but i'd like to give you some constructive critism.
First, I think that the shadow effect is a tad bit cheesy in my personal opinion, it may differ with other people.
Second, I think that a little more emotion should have been shown. Act it out more than you think that you would in real life, and it ends up perfect on film.
Third, when doing fight scenes do the takes many times, alot more than you normally would. For example, at 3:49, he fall was a bit delayed.
TheJamesDun 2 years ago
This was horrible. Please don't make anymore movies.
repeatoffender420 3 years ago
that wasnt very nice.
Logue24 2 years ago
ey dude, give em a break. only in middle school. but they could have done better.
vashy101 2 years ago
To whom it may concern...if you think you and your friends could do better the Festival begins on October 8th at 6:00 pm.... be there or forever shut your mouth!
shubzdaj 2 years ago 8
agree
eBaxas 2 years ago
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greendaylover418 9 months ago
This was suprisingly enough..... an enjoyable little short film ........
Brickhouse321 3 years ago
Haha. nice. im only 7th grade there. Nice job.
Hybridthievery 3 years ago
Whoah....I Was Just Kiddingggg:P
LINDSEYRRR 3 years ago
I love it! Nice work girls!
schollie8 3 years ago
I am Too:)
LINDSEYRRR 3 years ago
Haha, I Know.
LINDSEYRRR 3 years ago
Oh Wait He's Insulting Logan, Okay Good:)
LINDSEYRRR 3 years ago
wow. gee nice lindsey. he was kidding.
Logue24 3 years ago
Logan did a great job in this. No need to be getting all harsh on her. She couldn't have played this part better if she tried. No offense to you, but you couldve used a little emotion. I mean jeez your about to die by some crazy chick in the middle of a graveyard! If it was real life you wouldve been terrified. Acting is about trying to make the emotions seem real. I didnt believe you.
NirvanaFreakXD 3 years ago 3
Wait, Is Keith Trying To Insult Me?
Thanks:P
LINDSEYRRR 3 years ago
5 STARS!
brentproductions 3 years ago
Tierney looks like Demi Levato
puravidacostarica200 3 years ago
Good Job You Guys!
17111r 3 years ago
WOW GUYS THAT SUCKED!
LOVE NEIL!
justkidding. it was good ;]
PandaBananas 3 years ago
wow this actually scared me. the ending was great. good jobb.
bethbryann.
Blb13132 3 years ago
All our hard work paid off..cant wait til next year!!
Logue24 3 years ago
your part fits u perfectly jk
keithisbeast 3 years ago
I Look Like Maddddddd Dumb:)
That's Okay Though. It's The Spirit That Counts?
LINDSEYRRR 3 years ago
our movie!!!!!
sullyyy12 3 years ago
that was pretty beast u guys. can i get a copy of it?
snowsoccer19 3 years ago
WHY DID TIERNEY DIE????
kenchin222 3 years ago
this movie is amazing!
tierneyyyyy 3 years ago