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  • FAIL

  • i like how basic yet how smart it was with the cliches it used leading to its basic climax

  • haha i laughed a little when she said her real name was cinderella and when she screamed forever at the end i jumped nice job

  • I liked their Camera angles, but Honestly the acting made me want to puke, and the lines could of been more...less read off a script, But I liked the plot line : )

  • are you seriously kidding me with this film?? film festival winner?? well... this certainly gives me hope of being a good film maker!!

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  • wow this is AWESOME!  good job;))

  • nice acting guys!

  • 3:47 looks sooo cool. i wish i made this!!! lol!!!!

  • You did an excellent job. I can see why this short film won. It was perfectly done thank you for posting. Well done on the Movie.

  • What? Where's all that blood? haha Good job on the video. Thumbs up!

  • well done except the music choice at 1:28

    but very well made i can see you know a thing or two about filmmaking

  • good plot/acting but the sound was terrible if you couold fix that then you could have a great film

  • well dun nice acting and well filmed good job

  • haha thank you!

  • They really have their camera angles down though. At 0:16, the shot was extremely good.

  • Thank you for the comments and the review of the work. The kids really try hard and I agree with some education they could really shine...thanks

  • It was pretty good, but i'd like to give you some constructive critism.

    First, I think that the shadow effect is a tad bit cheesy in my personal opinion, it may differ with other people.

    Second, I think that a little more emotion should have been shown. Act it out more than you think that you would in real life, and it ends up perfect on film.

    Third, when doing fight scenes do the takes many times, alot more than you normally would. For example, at 3:49, he fall was a bit delayed.

  • This was horrible. Please don't make anymore movies.

  • that wasnt very nice.

  • ey dude, give em a break. only in middle school. but they could have done better.

  • To whom it may concern...if you think you and your friends could do better the Festival begins on October 8th at 6:00 pm.... be there or forever shut your mouth!

  • agree

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  • This was suprisingly enough..... an enjoyable little short film ........

  • Haha. nice. im only 7th grade there. Nice job.

  • Whoah....I Was Just Kiddingggg:P

  • I love it!  Nice work girls!

  • I am Too:)

  • Haha, I Know.

  • Oh Wait He's Insulting Logan, Okay Good:)

  • wow. gee nice lindsey. he was kidding.

  • Logan did a great job in this. No need to be getting all harsh on her. She couldn't have played this part better if she tried. No offense to you, but you couldve used a little emotion. I mean jeez your about to die by some crazy chick in the middle of a graveyard! If it was real life you wouldve been terrified. Acting is about trying to make the emotions seem real. I didnt believe you.

  • Wait, Is Keith Trying To Insult Me?

    Thanks:P

  • 5 STARS!

  • Tierney looks like Demi Levato

  • Good Job You Guys!

  • WOW GUYS THAT SUCKED!

    LOVE NEIL!

    justkidding. it was good ;]

  • wow this actually scared me. the ending was great. good jobb.

    bethbryann.

  • All our hard work paid off..cant wait til next year!!

  • your part fits u perfectly jk

  • I Look Like Maddddddd Dumb:)

    That's Okay Though. It's The Spirit That Counts?

  • our movie!!!!!

  • that was pretty beast u guys. can i get a copy of it?

  • WHY DID TIERNEY DIE????

  • this movie is amazing!

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