Peter. I feel that I was a bit harsh earlier. For a middle schooler this is decent
edelman33 2 years ago
I find a profound flaw in your expression of the information. While this is true, I think you showed a lot of effort. Being a history scholar I found this to be good for what I assume to be a seventh grader's report.
tturner228 2 years ago
I agree the info is solid. You delivery is very poor. I nearly fell asleep. This deserves atleast a C.
solid info. Work on the enthusiasm of your delivery.
baudelaire1 2 years ago
sounds more like he took all of his info off Wikipedia
I'm sure his ability to present will improve once he learns the english language better
spfost88 2 years ago
Peter. I feel that I was a bit harsh earlier. For a middle schooler this is decent
edelman33 2 years ago
I find a profound flaw in your expression of the information. While this is true, I think you showed a lot of effort. Being a history scholar I found this to be good for what I assume to be a seventh grader's report.
tturner228 2 years ago
I agree the info is solid. You delivery is very poor. I nearly fell asleep. This deserves atleast a C.
edelman33 2 years ago
solid info. Work on the enthusiasm of your delivery.
baudelaire1 2 years ago
sounds more like he took all of his info off Wikipedia
I'm sure his ability to present will improve once he learns the english language better
spfost88 2 years ago