Alice as some serious attachment issues. Guy she nearly hits with a car...wow, he can see into my soul. Guy she never met gets killed in the woods...I never even asked his name.
I hope she isn't training to be a doctor, because any guy that dies on her table will be marriage material five seconds later.
We see Alice's friend's car at the top of the hill when she's talking to her, next time we look up after her friend goes back in the house, the car is gone. Once again, not bad so far, but being aware of slight continuity errors will make this MUCH better.
This is brilliant! Never seen a fan video like this before.
The effects are fantastic and the atmosphere is really dark.
Only problem with this is the pace. Some places can be really slow, however when the dramatic parts of the story appear the pace is perfect, just like any Doctor Who episode.
Be amazing if another episode was made like this.
I REALLY want to like this, because they clearly put some effort into it, but the dialogue is really bad in some places, especially this segment. "Oh, I'm such a screw up, I'm afraid of everything!" The first rule of good characterization is SHOW, DON'T TELL!
I'm also bugged by the pacing, which is extremely slow, and the dubbing of the lines. Hopefully as the show goes on they can buy a boom mic and tighten up the writing, because this has potential!
this gave me nightmares
stickman3thousand 7 months ago
"How is it this thing killed a trained, armed, combat soldier, but you managed to escape?"
He was so busy trying to pop a zit, the training he received in the Boy Scouts didn't have time to kick in..
Seriously, are there any real grown-ups in this episode, or is it perhaps, that this a younger edgier version of Doctor Who?
Like for instance.. watch?v=UAgODVbPq78
watzizname 8 months ago
Alice as some serious attachment issues. Guy she nearly hits with a car...wow, he can see into my soul. Guy she never met gets killed in the woods...I never even asked his name.
I hope she isn't training to be a doctor, because any guy that dies on her table will be marriage material five seconds later.
NateSean 10 months ago
@NateSean Did you see *any* of the Rose episodes?
Whovian93 2 weeks ago
@Whovian93 At the time I made this comment I only saw a few of them. I've recently seen all of seasons 2, 5, and the first part of season six.
And in Rose's defense, at least her attachment issues are explained on screen.
NateSean 2 weeks ago
He does sound like Tom Baker
auro1001 1 year ago
This is awesome.... but creepy. It sorta reminds me of Reservoir Hill.
Skyuni123 1 year ago
We see Alice's friend's car at the top of the hill when she's talking to her, next time we look up after her friend goes back in the house, the car is gone. Once again, not bad so far, but being aware of slight continuity errors will make this MUCH better.
Briannicus 1 year ago
This is brilliant! Never seen a fan video like this before.
The effects are fantastic and the atmosphere is really dark.
Only problem with this is the pace. Some places can be really slow, however when the dramatic parts of the story appear the pace is perfect, just like any Doctor Who episode.
Be amazing if another episode was made like this.
kingdomyugi 1 year ago 2
It's good work just a little too over the top. Are there even five minutes WITHOUT music in the background???
And there is too much Alice and not enough Doctor.
tortshxcoed 2 years ago
This is all rather ham-like.
WorldVideophone 2 years ago
I REALLY want to like this, because they clearly put some effort into it, but the dialogue is really bad in some places, especially this segment. "Oh, I'm such a screw up, I'm afraid of everything!" The first rule of good characterization is SHOW, DON'T TELL!
I'm also bugged by the pacing, which is extremely slow, and the dubbing of the lines. Hopefully as the show goes on they can buy a boom mic and tighten up the writing, because this has potential!
alanedomain 2 years ago
...One word...E-P-I-C...
theLegendofZelda2009 2 years ago
I wish they wouldn't lip synch =/
qqqCYBERLEADERppp 2 years ago
I know exactly how Alice feels. What a great fan film!
dancergirl 2 years ago 2
Argg, spoiler, dont read comments before viewing video ha
crmfghtr 2 years ago
This is great, the Actors are pretty good for amatures.
batmanofni 2 years ago 2
Very impressive - I really like the Ice Warriors.
Excellent.
Grantwebb13 2 years ago