I ma glad you're using this software in the classroom. However....
When you write, "it has been a life long dream of mine" you are not addressing the interests of the reader. The reader cares what you can bring to the company NOT necessarily what the company can do for you (!)
Granted, but showing the functioning of the program was my priority, not creating a perfect letter for myself. My apologies if this detracted from your view of the program's quality or usability.
I ma glad you're using this software in the classroom. However....
When you write, "it has been a life long dream of mine" you are not addressing the interests of the reader. The reader cares what you can bring to the company NOT necessarily what the company can do for you (!)
jjyoga 2 years ago
Granted, but showing the functioning of the program was my priority, not creating a perfect letter for myself. My apologies if this detracted from your view of the program's quality or usability.
cmacd33 2 years ago