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  • pretty good man i kno music i play and tour a little in indiana. work on more lower notes just some positive critism still great stuff

  • I favorited this to save for later. One day I'll need this badly. ...lol....Thanks. I enjoyed your originals :)

  • youre so welcome :)

  • Absolutely love this song. Sometimes the best songs come from trials and errors of our ways. It's catchy and makes you just want to sing along...woohoo. I don't need you anymore I'm not gonna let my tears hit the floor over you ! Yay that's great!

  • BITCH THATS MY NAME

  • wow

  • You have a great voice, the lyrics are very good. I was trying to imagine what it would sound like if you had someone singing the chorus along with you in harmony, it sounds like you're trying to sing in two-part harmony by yourself which is a little distracting to the listener. It's a very good song. I understand it's new and rough, but with a bit of orchestration and refinement, it would work. You are very talented. I'll check out more of your work. Always, Bill

  • Pretty good man, I like it

  • awesome! peace2u! eric

  • great job

  • Great song, very well done. :)) 5******

  • Very nice song!

    Roeleke

  • a very lovely song. i'd love to see your guitar playing on the next song, if possible.

  • Great, I like what you doing, bravo ;-D

  • One more thing:

    When you sing 'im over you' in chorus your voice sounds like sb's else whose voice i know, but i dont know exactly who it is:)

    Does anybody get what i wanted to tell you? :D

  • beautiful voice and lyrics. love the song

    100 big stars

    love kelly

  • great job!iluvit,3

  • I Like it! :)

  • This is AWESOME!!!! 5***** Thanks for sharing.

  • This is great. Thanks for sharing.

    Check my original song Holding Up.

    Bye.

  • Another catchy one, dude. Good advice fromSizzletube....don't forget to copyright your songs.

  • love the way you pic out the pretty notes - like root bass notes. awesome! ohh so delicious n honest lyrics xxxxx

  • Sweet!

  • Great job and I love those lyrics!

  • I dig anti-love songs. Nicely done.

  • This is AWESOME!!!! 5***** AWESOME lyrics:)))

  • you sound great, and lyrics are great!!

    keep it up!

    angel for you ^j^

  • Excellent lyrics!

    Great song and singing!

    Great job! Thanks for sharing!

  • Well done child*****s.

    Keep up the good work...

  • nice ...friend

  • Sounds great!!!

  • learn to play the gtr and you have a freind for life and you are doing fine , preaty good song writing so good infact i have to give you 5*****oh and make sure you copyright your songs befor posting, you probably allready have but thoght id mention just incase, had asong of mine ripped off me when i was your age, so you never know

    love is all trevor sizzle

  • not bad

  • he looks like Quintin T.

  • im more of a heavy metal guy but the lyrics are good. Just the guitar riff might need to be a lil louder. I am not into that kinda riff work but its cool nonetheless. Good job!

  • Excellent lyrics....I like the vibratto in your voice too...You did Good!!! A million stars.

    Yvonne,Bob and Kazandra

    Ava,Illinois Obamaland

  • Wonderful*****

    THNX ;))))

  • I agree with Scarecrow686....you need to feel what you are singing a lot more....believe in what you are singing...show a bit more emotion and make sure you make more eye contact with the camera as you need to get used to that if you are gonna make it in Idol...which I am confident you will!!! That was a great song though..great lyrics!!! Keep up the excellent work!!!!!!

  • Good songwriting. Glad you're getting so much out of your playing and singing. Keep it up.

  • catchy music simple lyrics def makes for a good summer vibe

  • Cool song.Good job.

  • awesome song dude! 5 stars man :)

  • You have achieved so much in such a short time.

    Well done on this.

    I also had some vocal lessons (not that they did me much good) but my teacher emphasised the need to act the lyric through your voice (really feel the pain) your singing about.

    If you were able to do that a bit more the song would sound more the way I'm sure you intend it to sound:)

  • Nice!

  • be strong! cool song and believable performance!

  • Great song! *****

  • Lovely!  5 stars

  • very well done Jarrod, i liked it alot.............Marissa

  • What a fantastic original, who can't relate?.............5*

  • I completely love this song, great job mate!! I love the lyrics, it's exactly what I feel in these days. Thank u for this amazing song!

  • Fantastic performance and excellent song !

    Great job !

    5*****

  • very catchy tune!! you're souding great! ;)5

  • Very Original*****s.

    Thanks for share...

  • great song,

    thanks for share!

  • you have a beautiful voice

  • great song^^ Thankyou for message me~

  • great

  • Great song and guitar! ;)

  • hey i like it man. really good

  • youre voice is slightly flat... only in the begining though. but all in all it was very good.

  • NICE SONG!!!

  • Great song man...really nice...the lyric is ok too...well done!!!Just an advice...in my opinion u have to patent your original songs 'cause someone else can copy them and I don't know if u have the royalties just by uploading videos on youtube (for me it need an official way)...inquire about it...aloha

  • Catchy tune.

  • Very cool tune.

  • Hey, great work there, Jarrod. Keep going, dude. Real nice stuff.

  • What a lovely simple little ditty. Really reminds me of Buddy Hollys style of writing on things like Words Of love and Listen To Me. Your voice is so subtle, so direct, and therein lies the appeal. Great bud, i love it.

  • Great song man i like it smooth relaxing and a good message no man should have to cry and be depressed cause a woman

  • Wow-great job. :)

  • Great Song And Performance!!!~5*****'s~

  • really nice my friend. its bittersweet and has catchy rhythms.

  • Hey, I like it.

  • What an awesome tune! Love your playing as well ... sweet voice and great lyrics here ...

  • wonderful song, cute, and very well done your a great singer, i like the song, wow, its beautiful, so talented you are

    jade amazon

  • This has a lot of hooks, but I can hardly relate to the lyrics myself, because I've never really gotten over anybody. I've moved on, but I hate saying goodbye. Nevertheless, it's got a catchy tune and rhythm. Good job!

  • Hey Jarrod,

    great song. Really catchy acoustic melody.

    You said you wanted advice, all I can say is maybe change the speed in parts so its not too repetitive, otherwise its brilliant. Good luck with yr music. Jourdain

  • need some arrangement but sweet, and cool ^^

  • nice!!

  • Sweet tune!!!

  • really nice one.

  • nice song my friend~ 5*****

    Dave

  • nicely done

  • Dear Jarrod. I liked the lyric and the music aswell. Your voice is great and the guitar playing too. Thank you very much for sending me this video :)

  • yeh i like it, the music is cheery but the lyrics are sadder, i like the mix!! well done!!

  • I like it dude...I wish I had your vocal range.....keep it going, bro!

  • i love this accompaniment Jarrod and the voice and tune are great. I can't identify with the message because I was always heart-broken when I got dumped - often and bigtime! I'm still nervous that my present girlfriend will get fed up of me and we've been married 37 years! I have a youtube friend in in Germany with a similar voice to yours,(onkelbuke). Check him out if you want.

    Keep up the good work.

    Geoff

  • i think its great, here come the constructive crit now, lol, i think you I's and A's at the start of some lines are needing to be warmer, if that makes any sense, they sound a bit raw or even straind. but who am i to judge you, i got lots of lyrics written down, and cant pull out my first song, argh!! anyway! its brilliant,

  • what a wonderful original....love the guitar in this....lovely my friend ;0)

  • That's amazing! :)

    Lyrics [if i understand them right:)] And music...

    It's something different, I hadnt heard anything similar before:) Any remarks? Maybe there are, but I can't explain it:)

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