Absolutely love this song. Sometimes the best songs come from trials and errors of our ways. It's catchy and makes you just want to sing along...woohoo. I don't need you anymore I'm not gonna let my tears hit the floor over you ! Yay that's great!
You have a great voice, the lyrics are very good. I was trying to imagine what it would sound like if you had someone singing the chorus along with you in harmony, it sounds like you're trying to sing in two-part harmony by yourself which is a little distracting to the listener. It's a very good song. I understand it's new and rough, but with a bit of orchestration and refinement, it would work. You are very talented. I'll check out more of your work. Always, Bill
learn to play the gtr and you have a freind for life and you are doing fine , preaty good song writing so good infact i have to give you 5*****oh and make sure you copyright your songs befor posting, you probably allready have but thoght id mention just incase, had asong of mine ripped off me when i was your age, so you never know
im more of a heavy metal guy but the lyrics are good. Just the guitar riff might need to be a lil louder. I am not into that kinda riff work but its cool nonetheless. Good job!
I agree with Scarecrow686....you need to feel what you are singing a lot more....believe in what you are singing...show a bit more emotion and make sure you make more eye contact with the camera as you need to get used to that if you are gonna make it in Idol...which I am confident you will!!! That was a great song though..great lyrics!!! Keep up the excellent work!!!!!!
I also had some vocal lessons (not that they did me much good) but my teacher emphasised the need to act the lyric through your voice (really feel the pain) your singing about.
If you were able to do that a bit more the song would sound more the way I'm sure you intend it to sound:)
Great song man...really nice...the lyric is ok too...well done!!!Just an advice...in my opinion u have to patent your original songs 'cause someone else can copy them and I don't know if u have the royalties just by uploading videos on youtube (for me it need an official way)...inquire about it...aloha
What a lovely simple little ditty. Really reminds me of Buddy Hollys style of writing on things like Words Of love and Listen To Me. Your voice is so subtle, so direct, and therein lies the appeal. Great bud, i love it.
This has a lot of hooks, but I can hardly relate to the lyrics myself, because I've never really gotten over anybody. I've moved on, but I hate saying goodbye. Nevertheless, it's got a catchy tune and rhythm. Good job!
You said you wanted advice, all I can say is maybe change the speed in parts so its not too repetitive, otherwise its brilliant. Good luck with yr music. Jourdain
i love this accompaniment Jarrod and the voice and tune are great. I can't identify with the message because I was always heart-broken when I got dumped - often and bigtime! I'm still nervous that my present girlfriend will get fed up of me and we've been married 37 years! I have a youtube friend in in Germany with a similar voice to yours,(onkelbuke). Check him out if you want.
i think its great, here come the constructive crit now, lol, i think you I's and A's at the start of some lines are needing to be warmer, if that makes any sense, they sound a bit raw or even straind. but who am i to judge you, i got lots of lyrics written down, and cant pull out my first song, argh!! anyway! its brilliant,
pretty good man i kno music i play and tour a little in indiana. work on more lower notes just some positive critism still great stuff
riku0213 1 year ago
I favorited this to save for later. One day I'll need this badly. ...lol....Thanks. I enjoyed your originals :)
one2bucklemyhat 2 years ago
youre so welcome :)
arcticwolf1985 2 years ago
Absolutely love this song. Sometimes the best songs come from trials and errors of our ways. It's catchy and makes you just want to sing along...woohoo. I don't need you anymore I'm not gonna let my tears hit the floor over you ! Yay that's great!
devosha2008 2 years ago
BITCH THATS MY NAME
niggerbeater12 2 years ago
wow
mushroomlounge 2 years ago
You have a great voice, the lyrics are very good. I was trying to imagine what it would sound like if you had someone singing the chorus along with you in harmony, it sounds like you're trying to sing in two-part harmony by yourself which is a little distracting to the listener. It's a very good song. I understand it's new and rough, but with a bit of orchestration and refinement, it would work. You are very talented. I'll check out more of your work. Always, Bill
wjr3013 2 years ago
Pretty good man, I like it
mushroomlounge 2 years ago
awesome! peace2u! eric
no2hate 2 years ago
great job
SNAXDUO 2 years ago
Great song, very well done. :)) 5******
austinsplace1 2 years ago
Very nice song!
Roeleke
CollabCelebs 2 years ago
a very lovely song. i'd love to see your guitar playing on the next song, if possible.
pshapiro 2 years ago
Great, I like what you doing, bravo ;-D
redguita 2 years ago
One more thing:
When you sing 'im over you' in chorus your voice sounds like sb's else whose voice i know, but i dont know exactly who it is:)
Does anybody get what i wanted to tell you? :D
kategoldd 2 years ago
beautiful voice and lyrics. love the song
100 big stars
love kelly
kellydoll14 2 years ago
great job!iluvit,3
X0X0BabyV 2 years ago
I Like it! :)
rackyI 2 years ago
This is AWESOME!!!! 5***** Thanks for sharing.
mrchilli 2 years ago
This is great. Thanks for sharing.
Check my original song Holding Up.
Bye.
SUPERMEGADUARTE 2 years ago
Another catchy one, dude. Good advice fromSizzletube....don't forget to copyright your songs.
bigbeninjax 2 years ago
love the way you pic out the pretty notes - like root bass notes. awesome! ohh so delicious n honest lyrics xxxxx
Beeliiinnda 2 years ago
Sweet!
Suzbekistan 2 years ago
Great job and I love those lyrics!
redenajean 2 years ago
I dig anti-love songs. Nicely done.
dmio2 2 years ago
This is AWESOME!!!! 5***** AWESOME lyrics:)))
sistermoonshine13 2 years ago
you sound great, and lyrics are great!!
keep it up!
angel for you ^j^
angelbritney 2 years ago
Excellent lyrics!
Great song and singing!
Great job! Thanks for sharing!
santamara 2 years ago
Well done child*****s.
Keep up the good work...
groberson2007 2 years ago
nice ...friend
74chri 2 years ago
Sounds great!!!
kuaran 2 years ago
learn to play the gtr and you have a freind for life and you are doing fine , preaty good song writing so good infact i have to give you 5*****oh and make sure you copyright your songs befor posting, you probably allready have but thoght id mention just incase, had asong of mine ripped off me when i was your age, so you never know
love is all trevor sizzle
Sizzletube 2 years ago
not bad
refici222 2 years ago
he looks like Quintin T.
Rodjerico 2 years ago
im more of a heavy metal guy but the lyrics are good. Just the guitar riff might need to be a lil louder. I am not into that kinda riff work but its cool nonetheless. Good job!
ravenrage07 2 years ago
Excellent lyrics....I like the vibratto in your voice too...You did Good!!! A million stars.
Yvonne,Bob and Kazandra
Ava,Illinois Obamaland
chirogirl67550 2 years ago
Wonderful*****
THNX ;))))
GraefinVonSalamanca 2 years ago
I agree with Scarecrow686....you need to feel what you are singing a lot more....believe in what you are singing...show a bit more emotion and make sure you make more eye contact with the camera as you need to get used to that if you are gonna make it in Idol...which I am confident you will!!! That was a great song though..great lyrics!!! Keep up the excellent work!!!!!!
Ozzyhellsbells 2 years ago
Good songwriting. Glad you're getting so much out of your playing and singing. Keep it up.
archtopbrownie 2 years ago
catchy music simple lyrics def makes for a good summer vibe
Raebot 2 years ago
Cool song.Good job.
fendermac 2 years ago
awesome song dude! 5 stars man :)
scbene 2 years ago
You have achieved so much in such a short time.
Well done on this.
I also had some vocal lessons (not that they did me much good) but my teacher emphasised the need to act the lyric through your voice (really feel the pain) your singing about.
If you were able to do that a bit more the song would sound more the way I'm sure you intend it to sound:)
Scarecrow686 2 years ago
Nice!
ShadowPlay14 2 years ago
be strong! cool song and believable performance!
tps607 2 years ago
Great song! *****
torstenq 2 years ago
Lovely! 5 stars
bubblybombshell 2 years ago
very well done Jarrod, i liked it alot.............Marissa
surgarbabe9 2 years ago
What a fantastic original, who can't relate?.............5*
darkamythyst 2 years ago
I completely love this song, great job mate!! I love the lyrics, it's exactly what I feel in these days. Thank u for this amazing song!
ValeLovesRock 2 years ago
Fantastic performance and excellent song !
Great job !
5*****
Tadek59 2 years ago
very catchy tune!! you're souding great! ;)5
elviradark6 2 years ago
Very Original*****s.
Thanks for share...
groberson2007 2 years ago
great song,
thanks for share!
DiegoDCvids 2 years ago
you have a beautiful voice
vingema 2 years ago
great song^^ Thankyou for message me~
yjh612 2 years ago
great
VOCIFERLOL 2 years ago
Great song and guitar! ;)
KarenEng 2 years ago
hey i like it man. really good
Chwhw 2 years ago
youre voice is slightly flat... only in the begining though. but all in all it was very good.
Lewana15 2 years ago
NICE SONG!!!
himmelblau66 2 years ago
Great song man...really nice...the lyric is ok too...well done!!!Just an advice...in my opinion u have to patent your original songs 'cause someone else can copy them and I don't know if u have the royalties just by uploading videos on youtube (for me it need an official way)...inquire about it...aloha
whippingboy83 2 years ago
Catchy tune.
jmedia1 2 years ago
Very cool tune.
goodbyewindows 2 years ago
Hey, great work there, Jarrod. Keep going, dude. Real nice stuff.
thefogster61 2 years ago
What a lovely simple little ditty. Really reminds me of Buddy Hollys style of writing on things like Words Of love and Listen To Me. Your voice is so subtle, so direct, and therein lies the appeal. Great bud, i love it.
baldyholly79 2 years ago
Great song man i like it smooth relaxing and a good message no man should have to cry and be depressed cause a woman
Ghettot419 2 years ago
Wow-great job. :)
heyyittsJOSIE 2 years ago
Great Song And Performance!!!~5*****'s~
imaginarythings 2 years ago
really nice my friend. its bittersweet and has catchy rhythms.
dearwillym 2 years ago
Hey, I like it.
JackAwful 2 years ago
What an awesome tune! Love your playing as well ... sweet voice and great lyrics here ...
Bflatblues55 2 years ago
wonderful song, cute, and very well done your a great singer, i like the song, wow, its beautiful, so talented you are
jade amazon
jadeamazon 2 years ago
This has a lot of hooks, but I can hardly relate to the lyrics myself, because I've never really gotten over anybody. I've moved on, but I hate saying goodbye. Nevertheless, it's got a catchy tune and rhythm. Good job!
guitmartiman 2 years ago
Hey Jarrod,
great song. Really catchy acoustic melody.
You said you wanted advice, all I can say is maybe change the speed in parts so its not too repetitive, otherwise its brilliant. Good luck with yr music. Jourdain
JourdainWongtrakun 2 years ago
need some arrangement but sweet, and cool ^^
jbaha9 2 years ago
nice!!
Harrydevisser 2 years ago
Sweet tune!!!
CindyPeress 2 years ago
really nice one.
guitare33 2 years ago
nice song my friend~ 5*****
Dave
DreidMusicalX 2 years ago
nicely done
djmerc135 2 years ago
Dear Jarrod. I liked the lyric and the music aswell. Your voice is great and the guitar playing too. Thank you very much for sending me this video :)
diekleineDalmi 2 years ago
yeh i like it, the music is cheery but the lyrics are sadder, i like the mix!! well done!!
AshleyTroxursox 2 years ago
I like it dude...I wish I had your vocal range.....keep it going, bro!
brmod77 2 years ago
i love this accompaniment Jarrod and the voice and tune are great. I can't identify with the message because I was always heart-broken when I got dumped - often and bigtime! I'm still nervous that my present girlfriend will get fed up of me and we've been married 37 years! I have a youtube friend in in Germany with a similar voice to yours,(onkelbuke). Check him out if you want.
Keep up the good work.
Geoff
geoff1945 2 years ago
i think its great, here come the constructive crit now, lol, i think you I's and A's at the start of some lines are needing to be warmer, if that makes any sense, they sound a bit raw or even straind. but who am i to judge you, i got lots of lyrics written down, and cant pull out my first song, argh!! anyway! its brilliant,
1badassgirl 2 years ago
what a wonderful original....love the guitar in this....lovely my friend ;0)
alexandraxxxxxx 2 years ago
That's amazing! :)
Lyrics [if i understand them right:)] And music...
It's something different, I hadnt heard anything similar before:) Any remarks? Maybe there are, but I can't explain it:)
kategoldd 2 years ago