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  • One of the greatest videos on Youtube. Also, I know a guy called Ben and he knows the story.

  • what scares me?

    my dopleganger

  • watching everyone i know and love slowly die infront of my eyes and not being able to do anything to stop it that is what would cause me to kill myself

  • last thirty seconds.."the truth has never been known" - or what ever you said, but that repeated in text over an over, overlapping the text until it makes like the subtle face of satan or something with like a loud distorted male scream then when the credits end it sounds sort of like a gunshot...that would be freaky..

  • Are you still making the remake of suicidemouse? I was just wondering.

  • Ooh, last 30 seconds?

    I would want to see....

    FRED!!!

    No, just kidding...

    I don't know, maybe red and blue static with black "crack" lines off to the sides, with the sound of a faint beeping.

  • As for your 30 second idea, I recomend a reianactment of the Jack the Ripper killings, I would off myself on the spot if I ever saw that.

  • Well, I'd kill myself if I saw a nude cow. Yeap.

  • @ZXtales23

    But cows are always nude :P

  • use something from a oh i don't know a really scary screamer

  • i suggest something like all your family members screaming from inside your screen, or micky screaming and banging the screen with blood and that grin and saying "i'm going to kiiiilllll you! i've got your family come and get them! LET ME OUT OF HERE! I WILL TRAP YOU IN THIS HELL!!" and him trying to grab you through the screen.

  • i made something like a creepy pasta lately. would love ur creative opinion on it

  • The Majora's Mask pasta actually kept me from sleeping one night. XD

    

  • Tulpa Creepypasta is my favorite. :)

  • I would kill myself if I say chuck norris's tears

  • Just a random question,What was the creepiest creepypasta u seen?

  • I clicked on this vid in order to learn more about this "creepypasta" thing going around. I have already seen a recreation of the "Suicide Mouse", a reading of "Squidward's Suicide", and a reading of "Dead Bart". I was lead to this from a spelunking session into the circumstances of Gary removing his Raticate from his party in pokemon Red.

    After the person in this vid asked what could cause a person to commit suicide after viewing it, I suddenly saw suicide mouse walking

  • in front of his six looping videos. As they started to warp, they floated away and a series of still photos of key events in my life popped up. Suddenly, the pictures started moving. Mickey was grinning his grin and melting into a mickey skelton as the pictures of my childhood animated themselves. I saw things I clearly remember; however, the "me" in the pictures started doing odd things as mickey started laughing maniacally. I, well the "me" in the pictures, would kill animals I remember

  • loving, such as our pet cat and the neighbor's dog. I watched as friends and family alike were slain by me. These events were as clear as if they were broadcast live on the evening news. These atrocities punctuated by manical mousey laughter caused me to start crying. I tried to stop thinking of these things, but I couldn't. The only way to make it go away was to bang my head as hard as I could into the wall. Finally the images stopped. Everything finally stopped.

  • Nice lighting in your room for watching Creepypastas all night.

  • What would make me wanna kill myself? Justin Bieber porn.

    Seriously, Make an increasingly scarier mickey, and at the end,...

    GOD I CAN'T CONCIEVE THE THOUGHT WITHOUT TABBING MYSELF

  • I can't think of anything. Something psychological

  • Personally, I absolutely love the slender man creepypasta.

    I swear, if slender man where real, There would undoubtedly be a religion based on him.

  • Cool story bro.

  • How about that Majora's Mask creepy pasta that just came out? Have you tried it yet?

  • @23rdpsalm Ya, I found the actual ROM online too, it's nothing special, and I̻̫̖̾͆̀̔ͯ̚ ̸͍͗̆͋̊́s̫̰̲̳̳e̥̊̿͌̀̋̓̕r͋́ͦ́̇̈́͟­͉͔̟i̭̝̠ͥ̉̏͐͊͂ͩ͞o̩͓͚̣̻͌u̹̻̫ͦ̓̅͝­̮͓̲̰s͖͇̙̖̑ͪ͊̓͋͊̚l̵͕͈̱̻̉̒ͯ̾y͆̍͐­͡ ̛ͩ̋d̡̳̼̠̮̦̪̃͛ͯͧ̎ọ̤̻̝͘ͅu͙̘ͥ̒ͪ̃­b̷ͯ̐t̵̼̩͉̺ͩ̀̌̊ ̬̯̺̺̮͕̒͆ͤ͛̿̚͡t̴̩̤̟̭͆h̡̼͒̏̎͛̏a̡­̬ṫ̴̺͈̆̇ ̗͂̈̓a͍̋͗͒̆ͧ͂͟n̛̈̏͋́̅̄ỵ̇̿͐ͥ̒͠ͅ­̹̲͈ṫ̆͂̓ͤẖ̠̦̒̌̾iͧ̂͆͒͟s͇̲̟̮ͫ̆ͯ­̟̳̺g̻̙͈̻̪̲̊̕ ̯̘͙̲̩̠̞ͦ̈̔ͧ̏w͘e̵͈̝i͕̱ͯ̊ͭ̈́̿oͫ́͢­͕̝̘ͅj͈̠̄͑ͭḟ̨̩̺͇̗͇̤̙͆̊̂g͑ͪ̃ͦͭ̄­̚͘ ̝ͦ̐ͣw̮̻ͨj̝̤̹̣̤̤͍ͤ̆ͩͬ̽ͮ͞r̶ͣ̆͒̃̀­̪̣̪̝j͖͚̜͉̬̯r̦͉̈́ͅẁ̱͇̋̏lͥ̆ͮ̂̾̉̇­̷̮͚̣̳k̝̲̲͔̗̲̝̀̂̏ͬͩ͆̋͡

    BEN is coming...☼

  • @AJComixII Sure is zalgo in here

  • @AJComixII how you do that?

  • @AJComixII cool haha

  • @AJComixII Wtf you hacker

  • Harlequin Fetus.

  • what would make me want to kill myself? is mickey mouse refering to me by name and saying hes gonna find me and torture me in the worse't whys possible and then kill me. unless i kill myself

  • lavender town creepypasta

  • @OMGzCookiez Old?

  • lol marblehornets was too boring to be scary

  • @windmonkey95 - I liked it, though it is something of a chore getting through the first part. I get where you're coming from...

  • Dude you have the best facial expressions and hand motions EVER

  • HELL!!!! no seriously....some code in a foreign language and translate it into some secret saying about what the world truly is. And what the actuall purpose of all creation holds. In the end there just is no god or happy haven for your soul. And that is what would make me want to die. But like I said it would not be that obvious. It would be in some secret code that would need to be deciphered and it would be in some unkown language. well I hope I am not to late but I hope that helps. :3

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  • Babies up close gorging their own eyes out

  • Last 30 seconds = subliminal terror. Thousands and thousands of terrible images reeling quickly with one common image appearing more than any other - Jesus woul work.

  • I'd kill myself because of a classic childhood character being displayed in such a dark a creepy way. It pretty much gets inside your mind and destroys whatever you thought was happy and nice.

  • This guy's a badass.

  • For the last 30 seconds, show an image of Miley Cyrus with a clip of her singing "The Climb" live from American Idol, and then zoom in on a Disney logo and then fade from a normal image of Mickey to Hannah Montana.

    Walt wasn't trying to summon demons, he was just trying to warn everybody!

  • For the last 30 seconds, you could just continue some eerie sounds but slowly have words come up. Every once in awhile around the words you see brief translucent flashes of color impossible for the time period. The words say some kind of poetic riddle, something people could figure out on their own. The meaning would be like, after you die, your body is dead but your mind goes on, and you are conscious forever. Alone with nothing but your own thoughts. Kind of like the song one by metallica.

  • Are you still working on the suicide mouse video?

    If so, study the old Mickey Mouse cartoons to get an idea of what the buildings should look like and how Mickey should walk.

  • The beginning wants to make me kill myself. Let alone the end.

  • i bet mickey showed a picture of justin bieber and said "he will rule the world"

  • Everything you can possibly think of popping up all at once. Words, sentences, dead people, horrible mutilations, that kind of thing.

    Don't forget demonic whispering (Backwards talk would be the easy route to get that effect, possibly subliminal messages that say 'kill yourself', but I wouldn't go that far because that would make people kill themselves for real.), static, and blood-curdling screaming.

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  • Perhaps C'thulhu.

  • Good luck if you're actually re-creating it. I'd love you if you uploaded it. =D

  • ive been watching this stuff all day, haha.. keeps me interested idk why

  • Mickey in a guillotine without a face, but all scarred and shit, also with some backwards talking and freaky sounds. Then warp the shit out of the face and give it freaky eyes and shit, then warp it all the way back to the original mickey mouse, but have distorted theme music playing in the background. Then have mickey mouse say something freaky as shit, like "knock knock!" then they chop his head off.

  • First I read from creepypasta was Candle Cove story.

    Scared me until I realized it was made up.

    I would love to see your version of the Mickey video though :)

  • i'd say what make you kill urself, is usually painful, sharp sounds.That shiat make people go mad...

  • The thumbnail to this video scared the shit outta me.

    I'll be uploading a few creepypasta adaptations in the next few months if you're interested. Also I agree, that one entry of MarbleHornets is hilarious!

  • the video is heavily disturbing. i couldnt sleep for days after watching it. i had recurring nightmares over it too. but its good to know it wasnt real. but who in there right mind would make such a video?? its mentaly dangerous.

  • @lukeyboy118 jojacob666. Now go to his page and throw rocks at him.

  • Goatse

  • You look like some guy at my High School who is like a ghost and paranormal freak and performs alot of Rituals.

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    i don't think the credits were litualy "credits", i think it was just the title card that you see during the start credits of most RKO disney cartoons. which was probebly in itself a test

    as for teh last 30 seconds, maybe nothing, maybe a special effect test for an upcoming theme park atraction, hench the sound effects of the screaming and the broken music box before

  • i have theries about that film which are similar to what you described, but nit identical, and i was going to do the same, recreat it how i think it may have looked

    i think the second part of the film does in fact excist, but is a result of walts infamouse pionia techneques, coupled maybe wit hthe effects of the ageing of the film, and the fact that it would have probebly been carelessly installed. i can imagine how and why teh film was made

  • Picture yourself in his position. Black and white, endlessly walking in that place like a nightmare for a reality,with no one around.That hellish world just staring at you,waiting. You want to off yourself to wake up, or at least just make it go away. Just make it stop.

  • Think about it...Mickey Mouse walking around with a sad face, in black and white, in those old days. Wouldn't You get depressed if that happened to you, or just seeing it happen?

    He's all alone, and there's is NOTHING else.All he can do is but walk around, until the point he can only escape by ending it all.

    Picture it yourself. Walking around in that same place, in black and white, by yourself endlessly. =(

  • what's with the owl hoots?

  • Maybe his window is open.

    Durpty durp.

  • Make it a prophecy of how the world will end, insanely bad shit in it, something dumb like that. I don't know how you could fit a nuts end of the world thing into 30 seconds.

    Look up some Nostradamus and other end of the world prophecies and just morph them into one huge messed up ending I guess. I found this video that was trying to scare people into christianity by describing hell in extreme detail, rivers of vomit and all that shit, I forgot the link though but you could try looking it up.

  • Your Mother naked.

  • Make the buildings behind Mickey start to resemble the Cyclopian architecture or Rlyeh. The screaming in suicidemouse.avi is scary, but looped. Make it nonstop, and make it more and more frantic as the movie progresses. Make the film distort, and crack, those weird bubble things you see in movie theater movies. Start to put demonic faces in those bubbles. Make the buildings begin to resemble demons, make Mickey' face and ears melt into three heads, to resemble the head of Satan from Inferno.

  • I finished watching Suicide Mouse and I clicked on this video since it was one of the replies and I have to say this is really intersting. I'm subscribing for sure.

  • the screaming....thats what got me...but the morbid background and back story is creepy too lol i got so paranoid after watching that video... o-e;

  • seeing many people dying at the the same time total chaos just death slow and painfull deaths would make shoot myself

  • I think that the last 30 sec of the vid

    is a part of The Grifter

  • if i was watching a creepy youtube vid, something that would make me kill myself is a sudden view of THE VIEWERS FACE. whoever was watching att he time is put in the video. but that is impossible. sooo ima say.

    a bunch of random thing put together wit weird music and subliminal hypnotic messages to kill yourself.

  • it's probably something that has to do with

    world war 2....since it's in the 30's....

    it's probably just something VERY VERY odd

    not scary....

  • I Created My Own Version In Out Of A House Of Mouse Episode In Sony Vegas.

  • 0:36 epic win

  • Im fucking freaked out after watching it.

  • Make Dead Bart instead.

  • I would just do a very fast change of horrible images that show me how painful and disgusting life is in general. I don't know. With the right sound behind it it could work.

  • Something no one wants to see. Something that makes you say "Who in their right mind thought that up?!" Something grotesque on all levels of man kind.

  • Make a bleeding skeleton mickey tell the viewer they're going to die on a specific date and that suicide is the only way out.

    Huh? Huh?

    Or make it an interactive flash video like the red room were it produces pop ups.

    Or better yet you ever download one of those pornotrojans, make the video only available in a downlaodable format and some kind of scary malware that produces screaming pop-ups at random times. THat wouldnt make me kill myself but it would make me mad

  • dont put something stupid. it would have to be something distorted and extremely disturbing. something that gets to you. you would need to add dimensions of fear that people haven't thought of.

    i liked how in the other one there was some blurry stuff in the background that you couldn't quite make out, but all of the distortion effects ruined the entire video i think. and at the end put some passage from the bible that would freak the shit out of you. unless you think thats too cheesy. idk

  • Nice, im interrested in this videos stuff too i watched "all" others (thats how i found this one).

    The 666 video wasen't scary at all, it was just nice.

    The suicide mouse is kinda interresting, the ideia is making those black/white images around your head, so you are seeing them all the time when you are not watching the video(it happens to me even tho im not scared), but that could get scared and get this, they maybe could suicide because of that? thats my only clue, anyways the video is fake

  • abt your 30 second idea... i would problably kill myself if i watched fred videos for thirty seconds

  • lmao!!! spot on!! :D

  • Based loosely on your 30 second idea but here could be something unpleasent: Something you fear, as in you have a truily morbid fear of, has managed to manifest itself into something that you cant really put into words that only terrifies you, and that image you have of this entity of your most horrid fears is all you can see and hear, and all that exists of you is your mind and all you see is what is mentioned above for eternity. Either all that, or death.

  • Anything with demonic signs in a comdemned building with pentagrams would scare the shit out of me.

  • visions of hell were probleble the last 30 secends

  • proof that there's no life after death....although i think that would make me wanna live as long as possible....idk, the most distorted thing imaginable with the blackest most disturbing noise imaginable, those are 2 things right off the top of my head

  • Ack, that song is annoying.

  • Ummm im not sure maybe sieng my family die before my or have sumthing jsut melt with like there eyes comeout and gore an jsut fucking sick ass possible that would make me kill my self.

  • Malformed ID.

  • for the last 40 secs... what about a ring style video but focused more on gruesome things?

  • Wouldn't it be easy to see if there was more after the end on a reel?

    well anyway, I look forward to see your version

  • Do you know anything about the audio in the video response I posted?

  • how about(IM NOT FUCKED UP OR ANYTHING) a baby being skined or maybe micky being torn a part slowly. just some ideas

  • Bloody hell, you're close to what I've decided on.

  • maybe not kill-self worthy material is needed, just a scary and unsettling poem or quote or such at the end to top it off.

  • my own death maybe

  • Well, then you'd see yourself kill yourself. Sounds like brainwashing. That and I cannot make a magically unique version of that for EVERYONE.

  • @AJComixII

    thats crazy....

  • How so?

  • How would it be brainwashing?

  • You've been disturbed by the video, it's displaying color and such that's impossible in the 30s, and then perhaps it gives you a message of "the future" and shows you telling a guard "True suffering is not known" 7 times and blowing your head off. How is that NOT brainwashing?

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  • traumatizing.

  • @AJComixII try googling "brainwashing".

  • @Paradoxical003 Feel free to do so yourself, idiot.

  • @AJComixII i already am familiar with the definition.

    the guy was traumatized, but not brainwashed.

  • @Paradoxical003 Did you not read my comment? " You've been disturbed by the video, it's displaying color and such that's impossible in the 30s, and then perhaps it gives you a message of "the future" and shows you telling a guard "True suffering is not known" 7 times and blowing your head off. How is that NOT brainwashing? "

  • @AJComixII I agree with paradox. The reason he killed himself was because he had seen things far more horrible than anyone can imagine. Whatever those 30 seconds were, were enough to make him not want to see it again in his mind. Then again he did say "True suffering is not known" 7 times...so I guess it could be both.

  • i wonder if he saw his own death...that would make me want to kill myself.

  • Ditto what I told Skullfan135.

  • I saw the video.....its so scary, i was......freaked out very bad

  • A pittance.

  • AT first i got all scared, then i watched your video than i finally breathed a sigh of relief, how did you hear about the truth?

  • Research.

  • Oh, well its a good thing you made this video, you are preventing people from getting scared to s**t. :D

  • something that would make me kill my self would haf to be somthing so horrific and disgusting that i cant unsee that i would want to off my self

  • The Owl that Walt stomped to death as a child that so changed his life that he drew animals (like good ol Mickey, as a constant penitence for destroying that one so violently

    Look it up :P

  • I've known that for seven years. Not news.

  • @AJComixII  Finally someone believes me. I figure if there was an awful sad fucked Mickey it would have an owl involved

  • I may reference it faintly.

  • I cant wait to see you recreate this!

    and the last frame. yes im fucked up but you want to know.

    Dead, Cut Up, Bloody babies wrapped in rusty barbed wire.

    Good enough eh? Wouldnt really make me wanna off myself but still.

  • You're sheltered sir. That pales into comparison of my current plans.

  • allright cool. I'm sure youve got quite abit of good plans for this recreate.

    Again. I cant wait to see it!

  • Subbing for precisely that reason

  • You're fucking insane... I don't care if you live in your parents basement, dropped out of high school, and spend all day eating pizza in the dark, you're fucking awesome

  • I live in a normal room in my parent's house, I'm a senior at my high school, I like pizza and all, but alfredo pasta is better in the dark, and yes I am.

  • @AJComixII I'd post the expect "lol" comment but those get so dull... Btw something that'd make me want to kill myself instantly? Watching my computer explode D:

  • That would be awesome, I can't wait to see the finished product if you actually do recreate suicidemouse.avi :)

  • maybe there was a close up on mickeys weird melted eyes super girn and was just screaming and laughing or something in demon voice

  • Actually, the ending part where Mickey is sorta jerking around in the video that this is a response to really scared the fuck outta me. Maybe make a less Sony Vegas -like version of that.

  • That part is supposed to be the credits actually. I can make it MUCH better.

  • I'm going to take a normal standstill version of M.M.'s portrait, seemingly normal, but flashing a horrible damnation every other second, while a few animator's names from that era roll by in melting text.

  • Sounds cool, I subbed.

  • Awesome dood, lol i just saw the video before watching this... pretty weird

  • I think it's awesome that you're trying to do a very point by point re-creation of the suicidemouse.avi story to counter the vid that's floating around now. As I said for the original vid, I can't wait to see your more (hopefully) accurate depiction of the story.

    As to what I believe would want to make me off myself? I think there's honestly too many things in the world that are horrific to different people. My solution: Have a whole bunch of images...surreal, horrid, terrible, disgusting....

  • (continuing), and whatever other naturally graphic images you can find and splice them into a 30 second segment and have them go by at an extremely fast pace and then blur them together for the crescendo.

    Alternatively, take a que from FACE (if you've ever played Yume Nikki, you'll know what I'm talking about) and try to make an original spin on that.

    Anyways, I can't wait to see what you pull together. Hope I helped :)

  • I've actually been coming up with great ideas, which I'm keeping hush hush until the audience sees for itself. I may collaborate with the maker of the username 666 video which I featured on my channel.

  • You're gonna be working (possibly) with nana?

    You're gonna be working with her/him?

    Now I really can't wait. His/Her work has to be some of the creepiest pieces I've seen on this whole site. God, now I'm really excited.

    I'm anxiously awaiting the outcome of your (hopefully collaborated) project. No pressure, by the way :)

  • I've already got a basic idea of what to do for the last 30 seconds, and it is pretty horrible. I'll admit I got some basic inspiration from theholders * org. Oh, and I liked that site so much I wrote the 289th part.

  • you have a point it does looked made on computer... they didn't have the technology to do video lapsing with a video behind mickey

  • Encyclopedia Dramatica CreepyPasta for a good read.

  • theholders * org

  • can i get a link to the fake mickey video?

  • Seeing as the video I responded to won't accept, sure. ZgWPbnwsIeE

  • A video with something so horrible that you'd off yourself, and the video itself with bloodcurdling screams? Your mom must have been SO nurturing.

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