real real good shit man check out the short lil verse i got on my account took like about 15 mins but not bad man lemme know what ya think just type in WhoaTripp.wmv and it should pop up keep doing your thing man rip it up
@THAFOUNDER my "SHIT SWEET" like i'm "shittin" berries... probably the most simple play on words i used in this whole verse so it shouldn't be too hard to get... berries are sweet, and I'm shittin' berries therefore my SHIT is sweet. No offence but you dont gotta go thru my videos showin disrespect just because i gave you a pointer.... it's called constructive citicism
@SpliffTheGeneral lo.. im really not. i thank you for the "konstruktive kritisism". im not apply'n dat in mah komment. im jus say'n. in mah ears dat didnt really go together. kno wat i mean.
1) u say "fuck" 3 times in the first 30 seconds, and another 4 "mutha fucks" in your verse, IN FRONT OF THREE CHILDREN!!!!! great pr campaign guy. also, dont attack folks written if urs is too....
2) and this problem is severe.....u cant be a spliff if ur disrespectfull. do some googling, find out the rappers with the moniker "Spliff" we are calm people....by the way, i am Sunny Spliff, so fall back on that one
i wasnt dissin anybody for doing writtens, that wouldn't make sense cause this verse is written lol.. I was using "writtens" as a synonym for ppl's verses and it was a reference to rap in general, not this cypher or anybody in particular..
And Spliff is an acronym for something lol.. no hard feelings but u should listen to the rest of my music to get a full image of me, not just based on this 1 lol
Nasty flow man, really good consistency on the rhyme scheme and had a couple good metaphors, you're really good compared to a lot of the rap i hear around my area, keep doing it man cause you nice just work on the metaphors cause not all of them were strong but man you got talent, keep it doing it
real real good shit man check out the short lil verse i got on my account took like about 15 mins but not bad man lemme know what ya think just type in WhoaTripp.wmv and it should pop up keep doing your thing man rip it up
TheGeneralOfStreets 1 year ago
"but mah shyts sweet like a muthafuqk'n shyt in betrries"??? wtf?? huh??
THAFOUNDER 1 year ago
@THAFOUNDER my "SHIT SWEET" like i'm "shittin" berries... probably the most simple play on words i used in this whole verse so it shouldn't be too hard to get... berries are sweet, and I'm shittin' berries therefore my SHIT is sweet. No offence but you dont gotta go thru my videos showin disrespect just because i gave you a pointer.... it's called constructive citicism
SpliffTheGeneral 1 year ago
@SpliffTheGeneral lo.. im really not. i thank you for the "konstruktive kritisism". im not apply'n dat in mah komment. im jus say'n. in mah ears dat didnt really go together. kno wat i mean.
THAFOUNDER 1 year ago
Damn homie you got mad skills... You should sample off "That's What It Is".. You got rhymes boy and a future
TheMarxist622 1 year ago
Mannn..That was craaazyy. Surprised me haha. Good shitt.
Certifyde444 1 year ago
damn those kids ears are scarred! lol
good shit tho
city0fj 1 year ago
sick sick. the rap flow reminds me of the young gunz.
phillie101 1 year ago
This shit's fuckin' tough. Real talk
KiddFreshMusic12 1 year ago
man that came out looking so effortless and dope at the same time imma have to subscribe
check out my verse on this beat and tell me what you think
~Mobi
Mobi861 1 year ago 2
thanks brah! that means alot!
SpliffTheGeneral 1 year ago
Tight work my dude, def a 5 star.... hit me bak, i see a kollab in the future
MindInterrupted 1 year ago
5/5 man, that shit is sick!
acrobatstylez 1 year ago
gritty fam...check my entry
trakzproductionz 1 year ago
My god this shit right here.......straight piff. 5* and won't be surprised to see this as one of winners.
JDaHispanic724 2 years ago 2
no doubt cuz.. thanks for rating!!
SpliffTheGeneral 1 year ago
2 problems my dude....
1) u say "fuck" 3 times in the first 30 seconds, and another 4 "mutha fucks" in your verse, IN FRONT OF THREE CHILDREN!!!!! great pr campaign guy. also, dont attack folks written if urs is too....
2) and this problem is severe.....u cant be a spliff if ur disrespectfull. do some googling, find out the rappers with the moniker "Spliff" we are calm people....by the way, i am Sunny Spliff, so fall back on that one
but.....
DAT SHIT WAS HOT MY NINJA!!!!!
Polytix09 2 years ago
i wasnt dissin anybody for doing writtens, that wouldn't make sense cause this verse is written lol.. I was using "writtens" as a synonym for ppl's verses and it was a reference to rap in general, not this cypher or anybody in particular..
And Spliff is an acronym for something lol.. no hard feelings but u should listen to the rest of my music to get a full image of me, not just based on this 1 lol
but thanks for the love tho, appreciate it!
SpliffTheGeneral 2 years ago
dope shit my dude
Derove420 2 years ago
AHHHHH....this shit is too fuckin dope....god damn where the fuck u came from....keep with this cypher, we need you...fuckin RAWNESSS....1-love
-Philly Blunt
k2stypoint 2 years ago
that shit went hard
MookieSays1Love 2 years ago
dude yu went fkin hard bruh. realii feelin tha flow. do meh a favor nd peep out mah verse i put down fa the cypher. sho love. peace
djay52491 2 years ago
gasssin'! daps.
mosaek1 2 years ago
Nasty flow man, really good consistency on the rhyme scheme and had a couple good metaphors, you're really good compared to a lot of the rap i hear around my area, keep doing it man cause you nice just work on the metaphors cause not all of them were strong but man you got talent, keep it doing it
Skullz930 2 years ago
thanks yall... just wondering can somebody tell me if any annotations are showin up in the video cause they wont show up for me..
SpliffTheGeneral 2 years ago
that was sickk lol
Rynbow3 2 years ago
damn that was sick as hell, ill be waiting for "i like you you like me" hahaha
KOEverything 2 years ago
damn spliff how u gon swear frona dem poor kids , u wrong dude ! looool !!
yasserthug11 2 years ago
man those were some good ass words words right there. i rates and subed . keep it up Spliff
Hanijibrail 2 years ago
sick flow man check mine subbed you sub back bro
ShahnG 2 years ago
omg poor kids gonna be asking their teachers what "fuck" is lol
sick flow
dope lyrics
JustMeStarlight 2 years ago
Thanks for the feedback yall.. make sure to subscribe/rate and shit.. thanks again
SpliffTheGeneral 2 years ago
haha @ gmc you like me i like you. good bars.
UnknownCrypt 2 years ago 3
dope shit man, good energy.
check out my entry. stay up.
-sho beaz
The1NonlySHOBeaz 2 years ago 2
Sick multi's dog for real.
THEHRHOFTIME 2 years ago
Why you cussin in front of da kids... They must be some thugs lol
Dnh3one 2 years ago
At least Ty Ty didn't choke. and 5 stars for your verse dog
KevinS380249 2 years ago