They're sort of like a female version of "Droogies' from Anthony Burgess's Clockwork Orange. Nice job, but I also agree the storytelling could be tighter (ie: shorter.)
Not sure how I missed this one. In just over seven minutes, you managed to tell...and show...a story that is becoming all too true in today's world.
How you can pack all of this into a short time is amazing. Nothing short of brilliant really. I must agree with a previous commenter who said this is better than what you find on the tele these days.
That was cool pete,i was hooked throughout.a great plot with a good twist.You made me hate those girls and feel redeemed when they got caught.visually and emotionally it all works really well,weldone man.
Ps.weldone to the actors,it was simple honest and nicely performed.
A nice story, but it was pretty long for such a simple story - felt like there was quite a lot of padding, and i was often thinking get on with it!! :-)
and what was with the colour of the fake blood? :-)
Excellent Pete-you pack more interest and drama into 7.45 minutes than most TV scriptwriters/producers manage in a full length feature.. Really enjoyed this and well done
Brilliant stuff, Pete. Very clever writing - your misdirection of the audience is second to none! I'm really glad you were able to overcome the sound problems :) a
10 oranges plus to melons down her top lol .. Great little film this in many ways Girls are more and more doing this sort of thing getting drunk and running a riot .. the guy was only trying to do a good deed and give the phone back even after the stick they gave him ..but how many times do you see on the news about a person coming out of their house to move drunken youths away that end up getting murdered.. well done to all that took part well worth the hard work by all "a great little film"
They're sort of like a female version of "Droogies' from Anthony Burgess's Clockwork Orange. Nice job, but I also agree the storytelling could be tighter (ie: shorter.)
coolcat20million 1 year ago
Your films have been the best thing on youtube for some time now, and they just get better and better! Stunning!
trbnew 2 years ago
Amazing work yet again pete i totally missed this one!!! well done 5*'S
lewis5885 2 years ago
well done. I like the song at the end.
aadmharris 2 years ago
It was fun,I love the blonde,they are trouble women,interesting drama!
zebrapaint 2 years ago
Not sure how I missed this one. In just over seven minutes, you managed to tell...and show...a story that is becoming all too true in today's world.
How you can pack all of this into a short time is amazing. Nothing short of brilliant really. I must agree with a previous commenter who said this is better than what you find on the tele these days.
Well done again, my friend!
Rick
rickbell7 2 years ago
That was cool pete,i was hooked throughout.a great plot with a good twist.You made me hate those girls and feel redeemed when they got caught.visually and emotionally it all works really well,weldone man.
Ps.weldone to the actors,it was simple honest and nicely performed.
spiralisedcat 2 years ago
A nice story, but it was pretty long for such a simple story - felt like there was quite a lot of padding, and i was often thinking get on with it!! :-)
and what was with the colour of the fake blood? :-)
chrisbitz 2 years ago
Another great film Pete! A-1!!!
JazzEthics 2 years ago
Great work, Pete !
zoltangz1 2 years ago
great job man! wow really good story
MXPXHolland 2 years ago
Amazing work as always Pete.
You've really manage to capture a slice of life which unfortunately is happening everyday.
pauldownton 2 years ago
Excellent Pete-you pack more interest and drama into 7.45 minutes than most TV scriptwriters/producers manage in a full length feature.. Really enjoyed this and well done
roydoncrossing 2 years ago
Hey Pete Great Editing 5/5
BeautifulGirlByDana 2 years ago
Brilliant stuff, Pete. Very clever writing - your misdirection of the audience is second to none! I'm really glad you were able to overcome the sound problems :) a
hilbilly87 2 years ago
sheer brilliance
mrbuchanantoyou 2 years ago
10 oranges plus to melons down her top lol .. Great little film this in many ways Girls are more and more doing this sort of thing getting drunk and running a riot .. the guy was only trying to do a good deed and give the phone back even after the stick they gave him ..but how many times do you see on the news about a person coming out of their house to move drunken youths away that end up getting murdered.. well done to all that took part well worth the hard work by all "a great little film"
AS6VIDEO 2 years ago 3
A work of art. Fantastic and superior work as usual Pete!
Don
donjacob1959 2 years ago