3. When she turns around after james walks away it looks too much like she is hitting a mark. seems slightly unnatural. I think it would have been better to capture her reaction by cutting to the opposite angle just as he was walking out or by getting her reaction as she sat down.
very good though. Very even and sensible shot selection.
Thats pretty good dude. Here are a few little critiques.
1. The shot where she stands up and walks to the bedroom you can clearly see her shadows appear on the walls as she gets closer to the bedroom doorway. but you probablly noticed that already.
2. "James, whats wrong?" I thought that line was delivered with just a little too much urgency in her tone. the inflection would have made more sense if she was reacting to him slamming his fist down or something of that nature.
3. When she turns around after james walks away it looks too much like she is hitting a mark. seems slightly unnatural. I think it would have been better to capture her reaction by cutting to the opposite angle just as he was walking out or by getting her reaction as she sat down.
very good though. Very even and sensible shot selection.
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Thats pretty good dude. Here are a few little critiques.
1. The shot where she stands up and walks to the bedroom you can clearly see her shadows appear on the walls as she gets closer to the bedroom doorway. but you probablly noticed that already.
2. "James, whats wrong?" I thought that line was delivered with just a little too much urgency in her tone. the inflection would have made more sense if she was reacting to him slamming his fist down or something of that nature.
blader901 4 months ago in playlist More videos from blader901