Hi, I am an aspiring actress. If you would please give me some feedback on my first monologue (on my channel) I would really appreciate it. I would like to use the scene I did for an audition. Thank you!
In my opinion, I think you put a little too much acting into it. It looked a little force and not really...smooth? That's just my opinion though. You're vocial acting was amazing.
I liked it, very believable... check out my skit tell me what you think.. Im just starting to try and get into acting..I'm deff going to subscribe.im no expert but i think you'll go far
but I think you played it a little bit dramatic more so then comedic. Felt more like you were saying this for a movie rather then in a sitcom kind of tone.
BRAVO!!!!!!!! This was so real I dont care what anyone else says! during the whole thing i was picturing you talking to me and it was just so real! GREAT JOB!
I did the same monologue when I was auditioning for a t.v. sitcom (I got the part by the way) and it came out as though I was upset and pissed and then happy at the ending! *Lmboooo ! You did good though.
@PortuguesePrincess5 I actually get that a lot. A couple of girls who visited my acting class were really excited when they saw me and asked me if "I was the girl from Modern Family." I felt so bad when I told them I wasn't her. Haha. Oh, well.
She's really pretty though, so I'm really humbled that so many people think I look like her. Thank you :)
Haha~ this video was viewed in my threatre arts classroom. My teacher loved it so much, on how you moved ur hands and everything x3 lol my friend was like...wtf..XD
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I have a question, say you're auditioning for a film, should your monologue be something really close to that character, or can I just choose which ever monologue whether it be similar or not? How many monologues do I need to rehearse, and should they be memorized?
WOw that was cool YOur pretty good. It even wants me to practice my monolougues more this summer LOL. KEpp up the good work. MAybe will meet each other one day when we become famouse LOL!!
Dont move up and down so much, with better cameras it puts you out of focus and i can tell your nervous infront of the camera cause your looking away constantly. its rally distracting.
U overdid it I guess. Im not a professional actor or anything of the sort but I can tell who is doing what and in what proportion. I'm srry if its a tad rude but you are not doing it for the camera. You're doing it because you're confused, you have to let it out. Dwell in the psychology of teens. And for Christ sake, stop touching your hair as you deliver the speech. I say again, you're not doing it for the camera. It should be REALISTIC. Try reading "Stanislaviski: An Intro"
i thought that was really good! ive been turning this monologue down for AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS. but i dont think i will next time!
I agree with starky1995,you are using your hands too much but ,hey, directors hate it when you dont use your hands at all but you used them the most when there needed too (ex: 1:00-1:02) so thats mostly what matters.
wow that was great..i also did that same monologue before and im a boy..lololol i would love to act with u. iv'e been acting for 5 years now i been in 2 movie's . 3 plays as the main lead and im doing a new movie called twilight moon.
you seem professional really well done love the face expression and the way you act,please check out me doing my monologue and let me know what you think:) thanks
moment before is the event that just occurred right before your monologue..
I wasn't sure who you were talking to? another teen? your mother? boyfriend? ..this is important because the way that you speak to your mother is different than if you were speaking to a friend...
play the event that just happened before the monologue and then begin your delivery, you'll see a difference...
finally, in your intro, don't tell us its a comedy or drama.. as we wouldn't know by your performance?
yes, that's so true. young actors seem to be giving up on their dreams too soon. it's great to see people like you, who inspire all of us to turn back and follow them again.
haha in the intro *talks slowly* then says her name realy fast
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blakeward5555 1 month ago
Great job...Subscribe to my page. Thumbs up!
ActingOutLoudUploads 1 month ago
uhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ...ok that was great
strawbery64 3 months ago
Good actimg but please think of your own ideas... Iv search monologues and that one came up on google...
MegaRandomerz 3 months ago
@MegaRandomerz so wat
strawbery64 3 months ago
You look a lot like Sarah Hyland and you sound like Mary-Kate and Ashley Olsen.
camakajojo 3 months ago
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MerlinaAzul9 3 months ago
LOVE THE HAND MOVEMENTS KEEP IT UP GIRL!
obsnerg24 4 months ago
You're so good :)
Loonbella 5 months ago
Your great can you give me some pointers?
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MsMariiStar 5 months ago
Great stuff.
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heyy great job!!!! please check out my channel :) i perform monologues also!
GeniunelyMoriah 5 months ago
You can tell you have an accent cuz some of the words weren't pronounced right. Butr other than that u were awesome
rayrayhercules 7 months ago
In my opinion, I think you put a little too much acting into it. It looked a little force and not really...smooth? That's just my opinion though. You're vocial acting was amazing.
KeiichiKei 8 months ago
i love the way u did this!!
LuxxyLove 8 months ago
i run
jndkp8 9 months ago
I love you accent :D
Kcr1000 9 months ago
do you HAVE to memorize them..?
Briellesmith96 10 months ago
@Briellesmith96 Unless you're informed otherwise, you should
Kiwiberry351 9 months ago
Ur good. check out my monologues. I only have one right now but there will b more soon.
TheActinggirl007 10 months ago
nice job!!!!! i also just started postin videos but i dont have any subscribers yet lol
Bulgariangirl96 11 months ago
I liked it, very believable... check out my skit tell me what you think.. Im just starting to try and get into acting..I'm deff going to subscribe.im no expert but i think you'll go far
DerTruGentlemanWhe 11 months ago
iron doesn't = I Ron
Kittalkie 11 months ago
teenagers move into the realm of insanity then BOOM i hit a tree
sickndboy 11 months ago
are you latina?
JustForFun1215 11 months ago
pretty good! you lost the word "anything" though. you sorta gave up on it at the end.
CreativityCrazed 11 months ago
Good, but it's pronounced i-urn, not i-ron
spyrogal 11 months ago
your really good at acting :D
WeRWhoWeR17 11 months ago
that was awesome!
JstTera99 1 year ago
it was good at first but then it all went down hill
alltimehigh21 1 year ago
That was really helpful im doing that for an audition next week and i wasn't sure about the last line so i feel bit better about thanks x
missabbeymcneil 1 year ago
Your good :)
but I think you played it a little bit dramatic more so then comedic. Felt more like you were saying this for a movie rather then in a sitcom kind of tone.
Still very good though :D
GreenEyedTai03 1 year ago
I honestly got goosebumps within the first 31 seconds.
alexisawesomazing 1 year ago
your really good
yourneongirl24seven 1 year ago
wowww..that was great....plzzz check mines out and tell me what you think
moonlightgirlable 1 year ago
You remind me of Vanessa Hudgens!! :)
Nicely done, I am an actor too :)
StefaniSamacOfficial 1 year ago
not funny.
at all.
get in the corner.
Smelkit 1 year ago
I think you did GREAT!! I'm gonna do this one tomorrow, wish me luck!!
mndznina78 1 year ago
I never liked this monologue but you performed this extremely well :)
Jessieluv09 1 year ago
i was here !!
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Punks1Not2Dead3You4R 1 year ago
BRAVO!!!!!!!! This was so real I dont care what anyone else says! during the whole thing i was picturing you talking to me and it was just so real! GREAT JOB!
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TheChunk02 1 year ago
You look like sarah hyland
HouseofGucci 1 year ago
You look like Sarah Hyland
HouseofGucci 1 year ago
Awesome job. :D I suggest you speak just a little slower, but other than that, it's amazing.
kgman07 1 year ago
Who is the authour to this "confused teen" x
RebeccaT93 1 year ago
I did the same monologue when I was auditioning for a t.v. sitcom (I got the part by the way) and it came out as though I was upset and pissed and then happy at the ending! *Lmboooo ! You did good though.
xztartelevision 1 year ago
wow. that was feally good. im auditioning for laguardia, and i need to do this. you did an amazing job.
jazzyjazz876989 1 year ago
Lol you can tell when you forgot your line! Its not that realistic though and you talked too fast on some parts i couldn't understand it
PeaceForFloop 1 year ago
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OMGmarielle 1 year ago
You have a lot of potential. You should put this on quotetube and see if you get noticed.
MrSport1234 1 year ago
Where did you get this monlogue?
CreativeLovesRouge 1 year ago
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shakirababygirl101 1 year ago
You look EXACTLY like Sarah Hyland from Modern Family.
PortuguesePrincess5 1 year ago 24
@PortuguesePrincess5 I actually get that a lot. A couple of girls who visited my acting class were really excited when they saw me and asked me if "I was the girl from Modern Family." I felt so bad when I told them I wasn't her. Haha. Oh, well.
She's really pretty though, so I'm really humbled that so many people think I look like her. Thank you :)
AlejandraVer 10 months ago 7
@PortuguesePrincess5 i thought is was Sarah Hyland
yungayayok 7 months ago
Haha~ this video was viewed in my threatre arts classroom. My teacher loved it so much, on how you moved ur hands and everything x3 lol my friend was like...wtf..XD
But gotta give it to ya, you we're great ;D
Tecna63 1 year ago
@Tecna63 Haha This is great! There's nothing better than Theatre classes :)
AlejandraVer 1 year ago
Your talking too fast, but great job! =)
BillKaulitzBaby123 1 year ago
HA! I used this for my audition <3 I love it! <3 Great Job!
toodamnfunky4u 1 year ago
Your really good:)
SaoirseRheannONeill 1 year ago
Good job
passionminister 1 year ago
ur over acting n its horrible
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This was funny. Check out my channel for more monologues.
Kwame7Fold 1 year ago
Hey we're emvi our channel is emvi267 . starting tomorrow there will be an Ultimate Youtube Stardom contest !!! FOR ACTING AND SINGING SO DIFFERENT WINNERS !!! If you win you get cash and the title and your winning videos will be posted on our site for one week and the guest role in a youtube animation series . Thus getting you more youtube popularity !!! And you might even be seen by BIG PEOPLE. the contest ends in two weeks. GOOD LUCK ! Spread the word !!!
emvi267 1 year ago
ok go to emvi267 and soon there's going to be an acting contest for cash !!!! so subscribe to us first then we'll post a vid and tell you what to do !
emvi267 1 year ago
cool.. everyone go to emvi267 we want to kow what vids youd ike us to do. mimosa sings evania acts and models. So just let us know what youd like to see. Thanks.
emvi267 1 year ago
i saw this monologue on a website!
0AppleHands0 1 year ago
I have a question, say you're auditioning for a film, should your monologue be something really close to that character, or can I just choose which ever monologue whether it be similar or not? How many monologues do I need to rehearse, and should they be memorized?
liljayduhh 1 year ago
@liljayduhh They should be similar to YOU, because you are more likely to be cast as "your type." Sad, but true.
AlejandraVer 1 year ago
you look like jessica alba~!
Julietteisme 1 year ago 2
@Julietteisme Haha I wish!! But thank you :)
AlejandraVer 1 year ago 2
@Julietteisme she looks more like the girl from modern family! the oldest daughter in phil and claires family
LeMouWards 11 months ago
@LeMouWards lol she totally does.. when I said that comment it was before the show came out. you are so right though
Julietteisme 11 months ago
i'm doing thin this monologue for an audition on sat
toluoneofakind 1 year ago
your a really good actress:)
SoloElle 1 year ago
love it! u r amazing
dakiwi229 1 year ago
AMAZING! :-D
GlassMaskgirl 1 year ago
WOw that was cool YOur pretty good. It even wants me to practice my monolougues more this summer LOL. KEpp up the good work. MAybe will meet each other one day when we become famouse LOL!!
applepi78 1 year ago
wow! that was the best i have ever seen this monologue done! awesome!
vanishivanishi 1 year ago
Tip for acting in front of the camera.
Dont move up and down so much, with better cameras it puts you out of focus and i can tell your nervous infront of the camera cause your looking away constantly. its rally distracting.
just a few tips
the acting way good tho.
MaddsDoll 1 year ago
nice. this is actually the 1st ties ive heard this
puablomeow 1 year ago
that's a teen monologue not some dramatically sad monologue, although it's good
hillarybaybe 1 year ago
hay best 1 so far
jeddersrc 1 year ago
how can you eat Iran? it's a country.
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waterfall3d 1 year ago
umm its good but its not THAT realistic i mean it kinda feels that you are playing not feeling it at all but anyway great job
FranDS4444 1 year ago
U overdid it I guess. Im not a professional actor or anything of the sort but I can tell who is doing what and in what proportion. I'm srry if its a tad rude but you are not doing it for the camera. You're doing it because you're confused, you have to let it out. Dwell in the psychology of teens. And for Christ sake, stop touching your hair as you deliver the speech. I say again, you're not doing it for the camera. It should be REALISTIC. Try reading "Stanislaviski: An Intro"
eternalkhatri 1 year ago
Great Job...i liked ur facial expressions and pitch!
1jazjas 1 year ago
That's great! :) You are awesome!
warriorskk1 1 year ago
You do look confused ;)
Nice job! I like the ending :)
JustMeHere2012 1 year ago
u r good
rikkjamezbich 1 year ago
its a myth that chocolate give u pimples heehee. Gr8 job!
JosieWubsJB 1 year ago
This was so good. I liked your facial expressions because you really looked confused. KKeep up with the good work. ;))
AlwaysandForever9236 1 year ago
i did this monologue for an audition and i booked it :)
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betsyblueenglish 1 year ago
eh, its alright
ShawnaLouv 1 year ago
look at the camera!!!!!!
cthurfield1996 1 year ago
Please please try a monologue from a play! It helps you much more than this online crap. you can work with a more developed character.
Also, you're mispronouncing a lot of words and moving your hands a little awkwardly.
bmjb276 1 year ago
Very Goood(:
I Was Told Not To Touchh My Hair So Muchh Btt Youu Do It Soo Natural!
lkcamille17 1 year ago
Hey check oy the videos "Lleyna and Steve #2" and "Lleyna and Steve #1" she is really natural!
hope it helps :)
Peace212221 1 year ago
Place to share your monologues with other aspiring actors for free @ "How's My Acting". Link is in my channel or Just "Google" it
ActYourButtOff 1 year ago
i thought that was really good! ive been turning this monologue down for AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS. but i dont think i will next time!
chocolateforsale 1 year ago
I agree with starky1995,you are using your hands too much but ,hey, directors hate it when you dont use your hands at all but you used them the most when there needed too (ex: 1:00-1:02) so thats mostly what matters.
therealMichelleLopez 1 year ago
you need to work on pronouncing words right and stop using your hands so much, overal good not the best or even close to the best ive seen though
starky1995 1 year ago
it's not said reeeelm its said relm....and irs not I-run. its i-ern.
ilovepuppydawgs 1 year ago
wow that was really good..i am aspriring to be an actress myself..
keep up the good work!! :)
datmixedkid2396 1 year ago
dont use ur hands so much
coolgirl543 1 year ago
not bad. Play with the comedic aspect a bit more but... not bad
CupydRed 2 years ago
Good Job. I practiced the same monolouge. I'm not very good at it though. I think hearing someonelse say it really helps though.
TeamEdward70 2 years ago
OMG
i am planning to perform the same thing awsome job
u helped me out a little
FamilyConnell 2 years ago
hahahha lol omg that was really goood goood job
IloveCupcakesandTea 2 years ago
Yur not funny.
colbstheone 2 years ago
@colbstheone You're not nice ;)
AlejandraVer 1 year ago 27
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ActYourButtOff 2 years ago
lol! cool
andydo2007vietnam 2 years ago
URR SOOO PRETTY. AND UR REALLY GUD
hollywoodgirl123456 2 years ago
@hollywoodgirl123456 You're SOOOO SWEET! THANK YOU :)
AlejandraVer 1 year ago
wow ur sooooooooooo pretty. estas hermosa alejandra !! when i saw i thought wow mi suenos se hicieron realidad
jaguaresybeatles 2 years ago
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ActYourButtOff 2 years ago
wow that was great.
AlyssaBrown1995 2 years ago
i saw this script a few hours ago on the internet. weird lol.
emilyexceptional 2 years ago 7
wow that was great..i also did that same monologue before and im a boy..lololol i would love to act with u. iv'e been acting for 5 years now i been in 2 movie's . 3 plays as the main lead and im doing a new movie called twilight moon.
i wish u the best hope u make it.
skymayfall300 2 years ago
Twilight moon? ROFL
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you are so pretty.lol. great monologue, such emotion. can you look at my videos and tell me what u think please?
JUANO510 2 years ago
thats funny my friend danielle from the acting school i go to is doing the same one.
JohnsonKayla12 2 years ago
ure awesome:D
OhHotDamnBiatch 2 years ago
She looks a little bit like the gal from Modern Family.
cbotten106 2 years ago
wow that was really good. I wish mine was that good too :)
MissKat001 2 years ago
great job
RuBabii 2 years ago
i-run?
RosaMIss65 2 years ago 16
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I love your monologue...
I have a couple monologues up on my channel...check them out and let me know what you think!!!
HaddieDtv 2 years ago
really good! thanks i hav 2 erform dat n dats really helped me! thank you xxx
sianyandvee 2 years ago
it was good. good job
PEACEOUTSUKERS 2 years ago
im doing this one for an audition in a musical. good job!
irocklikeyou 2 years ago
lol im doing tht monologue for my drama class now
blueberrymuffinhead 2 years ago
good job!
but just so u know, "iron" is pronounced like "i-yern"
atiaraxox 2 years ago
It's iron, not i-ron.
ThePepper67 2 years ago
Less expression = more reality.
fingaherby 2 years ago 26
good job i loved it..very natural...hey guys check out my monologue..:)
prickey3 2 years ago
im working on this same monologue lol but i think yours is good and im gonna youtube mine when i perfect it lol but good job
Caelyn95 2 years ago
I'm doing this monolouge for a audition and this helped, thx ^___^
KatalinaK16 2 years ago
you look so much lyk aimee garcia
jadoretheater 2 years ago
I really liked it, you acted natural, which is kind of hard to do. Good job!
Blackcatsimone 2 years ago
good job
Trulaman 2 years ago
LOL i had that monologue last yearrr! or two years ago for my audition [: i remember it perfectly
juicyyyx0x 2 years ago
Yea, I luv the facial expressions!
AnaParvankin26 2 years ago
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not bad at all:) good job! check out my videos and let me know what u think.
blumetjegrun 2 years ago
you seem professional really well done love the face expression and the way you act,please check out me doing my monologue and let me know what you think:) thanks
DeborahEmily 2 years ago
hey, u did good!
zartita 2 years ago
I'm reading that monologue right now! Love it!
AriaInTheSky 2 years ago
ive done this monologue before...so ya it is a bit overused but i really liked good job!
angleonthemoon 2 years ago
haha.
that was awsome.
and funny.
JoieGurl3 2 years ago
Nice job!
Lisa13245 2 years ago
hahaha i love the way u say iron
CynaRed 2 years ago
haha
i think it's funny that you find it funny. haha
i didn't realize it was saying it weird :P
AlejandraVer 2 years ago
lol its not wierd, its just with an accent. wow u have a lot of comments
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wow. great work!!
luckeycraig 2 years ago
good but keep trying, i can see you acting one day :) (btw your name is really pretty) but good job though!!
lexipooh22095 2 years ago
thank you! :) i really appreciate the constructive criticism. and thanks :D i used to hate my name, but now i really like it. haha
AlejandraVer 2 years ago
for the love of god.. forth wall??? moment before???
katchitifyoucan 2 years ago
sorry?
AlejandraVer 2 years ago
moment before is the event that just occurred right before your monologue..
I wasn't sure who you were talking to? another teen? your mother? boyfriend? ..this is important because the way that you speak to your mother is different than if you were speaking to a friend...
play the event that just happened before the monologue and then begin your delivery, you'll see a difference...
finally, in your intro, don't tell us its a comedy or drama.. as we wouldn't know by your performance?
katchitifyoucan 2 years ago
you remind me so much of amanda seyfried =)
amuda1 2 years ago
haha really?! that's one i haven't heard before. thanks! :) i think she's really cool...
AlejandraVer 2 years ago
haha good job and I agree with that 100%being a teenager is sooo confusing
sacura160 2 years ago
omg, you know it. haha
and thank you :)
AlejandraVer 2 years ago
esta de la puta mare
walter0755 2 years ago
de la puta madre bueno o de la puta madre malo?
ummm... no se si quiero oir la respuesta siquiera. jaja
AlejandraVer 2 years ago
great job you made it all really natural and funny!
StarBright1231 2 years ago
aw thank you!!! :)
you boost my confidence :P haha no, really, thanks. i needed that...
AlejandraVer 2 years ago
diction diction diction
there are times when your words are slurred and its hard to hear what your saying
don't be afraid to make bigger choices with your character
very good though!
gimmegimmemoore 2 years ago
thanks so much, really. the help is appreciated.
i'll keep that in mind next time :)
AlejandraVer 2 years ago
this was wonderful!
you got right into it you were good
hey, were all aspiring actors
who are trying to get their start somewhere
and what i always tell myself is never give up!
at times it may seem like youve lost but just keep
trying and never stop! But again, amazing job
i loved it :]
rockdude94 2 years ago
aww thank you! :D
yes, that's so true. young actors seem to be giving up on their dreams too soon. it's great to see people like you, who inspire all of us to turn back and follow them again.
you're awesome.
thank you! :)
AlejandraVer 2 years ago
goooooood!
almita661 2 years ago
thaaaaaaaaaaaanks! haha ;P
AlejandraVer 2 years ago
This is fantastic. :D
FascinatingLee 2 years ago