I enjoyed your poem. I hope that you write as make more poetry based films. By the way, the word Helpness one the palm of the hand was a good touch for this poem. The lack of music made it more real to me.
wow. i really loved it. i also write some stuff like this smtimes. i'm also bulimic. i hate that and i feel just the same as you do, i think. id love to hear more from you :)
Wow
s16penser 1 day ago
loved it
sasysuen13 10 months ago
I enjoyed your poem. I hope that you write as make more poetry based films. By the way, the word Helpness one the palm of the hand was a good touch for this poem. The lack of music made it more real to me.
deathwalk60 1 year ago
this is really good! It would make a GREAT song!!
TaylorLynnRoxSox 1 year ago
that was so good..
kylieandsusie 1 year ago
You could easily make this into a song of your own :)
xox
Satine5Syd 2 years ago
It's good mate!!
Check mine..
/watch?v=1f_9ZwirUes
scrappymeat 2 years ago
@scrappymeat Thanks! : )
hahaha667 1 year ago
amazing poem<3 you're really good :)
Mileschild27 2 years ago
@Mileschild27 Thank you :D
hahaha667 1 year ago
wow. i really loved it. i also write some stuff like this smtimes. i'm also bulimic. i hate that and i feel just the same as you do, i think. id love to hear more from you :)
hug
ayedaydreamer 2 years ago
i really like this
i write similar stuff and i think you are realy talented
keep writing i want to hear more
-allison
allisonftw18 2 years ago 4
wow great job on the poem
we havent talked i a while how are you?
monkeydemonanime 3 years ago
i like it
I happen to write poetry myself and i also have that same "problem"
xolova11 3 years ago