The invention

[Stephie91]

I like your story!:D you should do more of these:)

[Imbealkariel]

Hummmm... waiting for part II.

[MuddyTonic]

Love it

[AnarchyInYourHead]

Is this the story of the creator of Edward Scissorhands?

[AnarchyInYourHead]

I hope you don't get stopped at the Canadian border for being a subversive like the Motor Home Diaries crew did. Well, I mostly hope you don't. If they won't let you back in, you may have to move to Keene, NH.

[Mastikator]

I look forward to part two.

[TheAist]

it was kool

[gombet]

Truly Excellent and relevant for today.

Thank you.

[ModelAnarchist]

PLEASE POST PART II NOW

[swingdocta]

thought u were mr cropper for a second

[WorBlux]

Very good story.

[ks100001]

Sorry, but all I see here is a narcissistic display filled with pretentious nonsense.

[Luke12000]

People who are so pathetic that they feel the need to write out a comment like the one you just made only depress me, seriously, what is the point of your existence? To just be a dick and try to take people down a notch? Why? Does this make you happy? You must be a very sad and lonely person to spend your time like this. Don't you think you could find a better path in life?

[ks100001]

I'm sorry if my comment offended you in some way, but that's how your video - not just the story - looks to me.

Many people seem to have liked it, but I didn't. I genuinely felt like you were describing things that you have only heard of in rather trite fashion.

Would you prefer it if your viewers only wrote positive comments? I really don't see how such a thing could be constructive in the long run.

Writing takes time to learn, and you won't improve if your misses get praised as hits.

[Luke12000]

Your comments are not constructive. Fine, I'm a Narcissist, what now? I love the idea I am expressing in this story, it is very meaningful to me. If you think it is nonsense then just don't watch, I see no value in what you are doing. If you were to tell me WHY you don't like it, that would be different, but as it stands I can't be bothered to take you seriously.

[ks100001]

I'll PM you if you would like me to elaborate, because 500 chars is not enough to make any proper critical comments.

I get the idea behind the story, which is the main reason why I called it narcissistic.

[idontgiveashit0930]

You improve if you get constructive criticisms, but not with some random childish insults..you did not write any points in which he can improve upon...thus your comment is utterly useless. "You are full of shit" -- try improving yourself with this comment. See how well you do..and yeah youll prob find wisdom and knowledge in it.

[ks100001]

Constructive criticism goes both ways.

It does not actually help either if people don't tell what they liked about the story.

I admit that my 1st comment wasn't a criticism, but as a first opinion, it is just as valid as "really great".

[Luke12000]

Knowing people find value in what I'm doing helps me because it gives me confidence. They're saying, "keep doing what you're doing" and I feel stronger with their support. But simply saying you don't like it does NOT help me. The only thing you might accomplish is making me feel bad about what I'm trying to achieve. So no, it's not the same.

[ks100001]

Could you please elaborate what it is you are trying to achieve?

[Luke12000]

Writing a creative short story that expresses an under-recognized aspect of life. In this case i'm trying to express that we tend to become what we see in others.

[ks100001]

OK.

My interpretation was that of a parent-child relationship.

The child reacts to parental abuse in a violent/emphatic way, is subsequently left alone or abandoned and left floating in a repressed and bewildered emotional state.

[ZullGostnu2]

but what happens to the robot? And the little kids? The must be a little boy or girl who gets lost and explores the castle? The story must go on, we must have it...now... ok, when you are ready to give it to us Luke.

Good work my friend. I enjoyed the story.

[Luke12000]

thank ye kindly

[jrnesbit]

lol your story doesnt sound very original. Sounds like a combination of a couple of old sci fi tales.

[5jeanbittersweet]

Yes, more, What happens to the robot? I feel like a kid around the campfire. You are a great storyteller!

[Luke12000]

Thank you very much!

[podrag]

Luke you're a real inspiration in this brutal world. I hope you realise how much your efforts mean to those who watch you... I don't comment much because I often don't know what to say after I've watched one of your videos... I'll just kinda think about it for a few hours.

Have fun in Boston and thank you.

[TheRightDecision]

sooo true!

[Luke12000]

No, thank you. I don't comment much either but you have no idea what it means to me to know that people get inspiration from what I say. It can be a brutal world can't it, but maybe if we work together we can change that.

[PeaceProfit]

With... The*Doctor gone, i*have become, that which i*am...

C.H.A.O.S.

[FriendOregon]

That doctor is a control freak and a jerk! pitch fork him!

[VirtualHolocaust]

MOAR STORIES AND SONGS PLOX btw im an anti statist now luke

[Frettsy]

to me this story says: 9/11 was an inside job.

[anonforuz]

keep going