Comedy sketches also involve acting and good timing. The line's aren't that bad, but delivery and performance weren't.
They both seem too nervous. That might work a little with the girl, but the camera movement highlights that she would be aware of it and just make it seem unrealistic.
A good attempt, practise makes perfect though. Confidence and delivery will come. Promising.
On December 24,2006 at 8 o'clock in the morning, a young 14 year old boy by the name of Scott Jackson was found dead.Doctors couldn't come up with the cause of his death.His mother checked his emails to see if she could figure out what happened.Turns out he was still signed into myspace.She found he had gone to sleep after he read and didn't repost a chain letter.if you don't repost this to 6 videos a girl with no face will kill you tonight!
A bit pathetic this, really, cos so many of the lines are quite clearly ripped off from The Office and not particularly well delivered either. Sorry but no cigar this time.
hehe its a comedy sketch from someone who watched alot of David Brent from the office it would seem (not because of whats said but the way and actions of it all). :o)
Bob, is what you thinking as some kind of loser. But you all miss the point how to recieve the rejection and the type of word he used to be careless and to hurt her feelings.
I do not know about you guys but this video is theBest Video ever. Why it Teaches boys and men who donot want to be in a relationship instead spending the money you worked hard for on yourself and not on your girlfriend or greedy friends. Who ever post this is a legend, genius. Thank's for posting it online.
Crap script, Crap jokes and your a cheese ranger, More crap jokes. I'm sorry to say but watching your video has really pissed me off and I want to repeat the only guy who makes sense on this comment board. The one who told you to go kill yourself
i'll clap for you just for the effort... but if you really wanna meet someone and get a date, why don't you try online dating instead. webdatedotcom for your case dude..
I think this was a pretty good effort. Just because its not as funny as watching the office or alan partridge, it doesnt mean its shit. Its difficult to do stuff like this, and i think it came off pretty good.
Well in my tags it clearly states "the office style humour" and "alan partridge", so it should be obvious that I was inspired by The Office and Partridge.
It's not like I submitted this to short film festivals, its a 2minute clip for a school project so fcking calm down.
She should have gone with him, at least to make sure he eats something!
At first I was highly concerned about the maiden´s state of health and I wondered if she was suffering from something!
I had to watch the video a second time to find out there was actual another person she interacted with.
Rahmstein 2 months ago
HEY MOTHERFUCKER, YOU'RE NOT FUNNY. HAAAAAAAAAAAA
chumpusmaximusohnose 11 months ago
rubbish
jalidav1 1 year ago
did u actually mean it? or was it a prank?
victoriatoma 1 year ago
pish
partickbateman 1 year ago
Holy fuck ,its the reanimator
sleepless4201 1 year ago
LOL That is very funny indeed.
:D
how many children now you have?
I wonder???
Matey3 1 year ago
i cant hear shit the volume on this is too low i cranked my crap to max
trema12345 1 year ago
dats fucked up
billionsofmoney298 1 year ago
Lol well done
jraybay 1 year ago
Lol quite good. The guy delivered his lines really well i think.
Vire70 1 year ago
this is fake
ilovetheview47 1 year ago
a dork and a dorkess
sholoborx 1 year ago
@sholoborx I would so do the 'dorkess'!
jackal2071 1 year ago
This is risible, albeit, a bit much. Need to find the right balance between awkwardness and fluidity.
itwillbealright 1 year ago
hahahahah what a funny cunt
riz44 2 years ago
fake
Capeau 2 years ago
HAHA WTF!!!
SNORES13 2 years ago
what the hell was his problem?
dai5angel 2 years ago 2
he was talking smut..... I don't care how fucking hot the guy is...., no man will ever speak to me as such
BichGODDESS 2 years ago
just fuck her.....................
100roberthenry 2 years ago
LOL it was funny
Psa1mist9 2 years ago
he looks like harry potter
SomeGuyInWhite 2 years ago 11
@SomeGuyInWhite lmao u crazy
DynastyPrincess912 1 year ago
@SomeGuyInWhite sho do
billionsofmoney298 1 year ago
you forgot to ask her what her favourite sexually transmitted desiese was.
raspberry479 2 years ago 10
I sdissagree with most people acting's decent yet not great... at least the guy's
pyktisthebest 2 years ago
fake....bad acters
TheMegajan 2 years ago 2
Not bad at all!
RICKYMDOGG 2 years ago
Comedy sketches also involve acting and good timing. The line's aren't that bad, but delivery and performance weren't.
They both seem too nervous. That might work a little with the girl, but the camera movement highlights that she would be aware of it and just make it seem unrealistic.
A good attempt, practise makes perfect though. Confidence and delivery will come. Promising.
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On December 24,2006 at 8 o'clock in the morning, a young 14 year old boy by the name of Scott Jackson was found dead.Doctors couldn't come up with the cause of his death.His mother checked his emails to see if she could figure out what happened.Turns out he was still signed into myspace.She found he had gone to sleep after he read and didn't repost a chain letter.if you don't repost this to 6 videos a girl with no face will kill you tonight!
svz09 3 years ago
a copy of gareth, good effort though
s3ansk1 3 years ago
Good effort M8:)
Its ridiculously difficult to "do" Comedy and its pointless comparing a Member Of The Public to Professional Comedians.
Its fine though.
Isleofskye 3 years ago
A bit pathetic this, really, cos so many of the lines are quite clearly ripped off from The Office and not particularly well delivered either. Sorry but no cigar this time.
telboy1966manu 3 years ago
hehe its a comedy sketch from someone who watched alot of David Brent from the office it would seem (not because of whats said but the way and actions of it all). :o)
Paulsb2005 3 years ago
"I brought some food" lol whipped cheese AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! too funny!!
pixiesfantasy 3 years ago
Was it supposed to be comedy then?
Superbad1980 3 years ago
hes like gareth keenan of the office
Zeziamdg 4 years ago
That is brutal I would be too embarrast to pull something like that
caller1d 4 years ago
lol herpes
lksdaklsad 4 years ago
He a right prick. All he does was talk about himself, and he offend the girl. He look like Rodney out Fools and Horse. A right plonker
cian10 4 years ago
It's a comedy sketch. Did you think this was for real?
-jcr
NSResponder 4 years ago
dragon8787 is weird and possibly racist
SxCFrAnKiE 4 years ago
It wasn't my favorite, but I liked it more than some... and the idiots on here are *rude*, wow!
Anyway, it made me laugh - and please don't injure yourself on account of the asshats - it wouldn't be cricket.
JessamynDreamer 5 years ago
good effort
i would like to put my penis in the girl's mouth
innit27 5 years ago
was that in cambridge (england)
mattcunningham 5 years ago
no.
famasfilms 5 years ago 3
Hey man,
Great video, Upload more videos, this time try different girls maybe Asian.
dragon8787 5 years ago
and why is that you like him doin it to an asian??
giansantiago 5 years ago
Bob, is what you thinking as some kind of loser. But you all miss the point how to recieve the rejection and the type of word he used to be careless and to hurt her feelings.
dragon8787 5 years ago
I do not know about you guys but this video is theBest Video ever. Why it Teaches boys and men who donot want to be in a relationship instead spending the money you worked hard for on yourself and not on your girlfriend or greedy friends. Who ever post this is a legend, genius. Thank's for posting it online.
dragon8787 5 years ago
The only thing related to Alan Partridge was "This country."
What a fucking waste of time watching that piece of crap videp.
Blehmaeugh 5 years ago
hmm, pretty good guys :D
MurkProductions 5 years ago
allthough I wouldnt say that.Just injure yourself really badly!and dont do comedy....Stick to being a dweeb.Its what your good at
chrispert23 5 years ago
Crap script, Crap jokes and your a cheese ranger, More crap jokes. I'm sorry to say but watching your video has really pissed me off and I want to repeat the only guy who makes sense on this comment board. The one who told you to go kill yourself
chrispert23 5 years ago
I was on here looking for Alan Partridge and I had the unfortunate pleasure of watching your festering turd of a video!!!
chrispert23 5 years ago
Jesus, what is with all the keyboard critics? It was pretty good. If you can do better, post up, if you can't, shut up.
Dallian 5 years ago
Acting is awful, jokes are badly timed and poorly delivered and the concept is a rip off.
All in all, leave it to the pros!
TimLake 5 years ago
where's the hot girl?
derkoi 5 years ago
oh sweet jesus. what the frig are you?! you act like a cunt. go kill yourself, seriously. i really really mean that.
Sydfrusciante 5 years ago
i'll clap for you just for the effort... but if you really wanna meet someone and get a date, why don't you try online dating instead. webdatedotcom for your case dude..
niccoboi 5 years ago
I think this was a pretty good effort. Just because its not as funny as watching the office or alan partridge, it doesnt mean its shit. Its difficult to do stuff like this, and i think it came off pretty good.
raisedbypuffins 5 years ago
It's the whole "Sloppy Seconds" thing, it's series 2 of The Office. If you haven't seen it, check it out.
Wickerbasket 5 years ago
I don't know what a Gareth Keenan is, but if he did something like this, funny setup.
RoaneSky 5 years ago
Well in my tags it clearly states "the office style humour" and "alan partridge", so it should be obvious that I was inspired by The Office and Partridge.
It's not like I submitted this to short film festivals, its a 2minute clip for a school project so fcking calm down.
famasfilms 5 years ago
Plagerist.
Squemby 5 years ago
In the words of Alan Partridge-
Dalendless shid.
bombblastmen 5 years ago
That was realy really just like Gareth Keenan, not that original... Or funny...
ILiveInMiltonKeynes 5 years ago
crap
crispsandwich 5 years ago
fuckin set upo that was shit
StevilSven 6 years ago
Great piece takes a lot of balls to do that although it looks a tad planned perhaps still great work alan partridge cliche beautiful!
ashforever 6 years ago
I was/am very inspired by Alan Partridge and The Office, although I think my script was original enough to stand on its own.
And yes Spray Can Cheese is real..
famasfilms 6 years ago
stealing a bit from gareth keenan there methinks.
p.s. is whipped cheese a real thing?
barutha 6 years ago