Wow your such an amazing writer. The is NO one else I know that writes stories the way you do.
I wonder what's up with miley. When she was being sick I also thought she was gonna be preggors ;) amazing I'm gonna tell everyone about your stories :D
great! as usual. but, i'm just as confused as the rest.
She's sick but, of what? it's not the stomach flu. Nick knew, exactly what to do. I'm gonna go out on a limb with this and say this has something so do with her being, hypoglycemic? yeah? or no?
Woah! I don't get what she was sick with, or if it even matters, but Nick was soo sweet to her :P
Loved it! Made my day, I read the first part when I came home from school, before doing homework, then 4 1/2 hrs later I checked again and read the 2nd part, like a treat for getting all my homework done :)
aww, what the hell is happening with her. Im really worried, that was so scary geez. I was like OMG. Nick was perfect, he is so careful, so amazing. He knows what to do and that make him HOTTER. But seriously, what the hell Miley :( Poor her, she was so miserable. Im really worried about her :(. Hope she's gonna be okay. Love you girl. Thanks to post it. It's was REALLY good even if im more worried LOL.
First comment! Woah, that just blew me away! You're making me love Nick more than I use to with the waty you have him taking care of Miley. He really is her Prince Charming. :) Thank you SO much for updating again today! After the last chapter I was so pumped for the next & I gotta say this was amazing! <3
i read it again, i'm still confused. what does "color suddenly returned to her cheeks in the worst of ways. " mean? i'm just confused which i hope i shouldn't be but can you explain please?
Favorite chapter of all. I don't want to say it's beautiful or precious because I don't want to sound redundant, but wow...
florencie123 1 year ago
Wow your such an amazing writer. The is NO one else I know that writes stories the way you do.
I wonder what's up with miley. When she was being sick I also thought she was gonna be preggors ;) amazing I'm gonna tell everyone about your stories :D
utubestorys 2 years ago
Aww, thanks girl! I appreciate the support :]
elleisforlovee 2 years ago
ahmazing
im scared haha ;]
xHARM0NiiZ3xM3x 2 years ago
oops i mean freaking out!
pineappple101 2 years ago
omg wat the hell happened her? im freakout out!! xx
pineappple101 2 years ago
That was intense. I wanna know what's wrong with her :/
But this was another one of my favorites! You never fail to please me, do ya Elle?
supplaauren 2 years ago
Greatest chapter so far!!! <3
amysammut 2 years ago
WOAHHHHH.....*jaw dropped* OMFG ELLE YOU ARE THE MOST TALENTED KID EVER.....*mouth still opened* this is CERTAINLY my favest chap too....WOW,,,,
harrypandmileycfan 2 years ago
Omg this is too good,amazing!!!! I hope mileys ok!! Ohh nick was soo swt! Ur such a great writer with incredible ideas cant wait for d next!!
lovemileyselenademi 2 years ago
beautiful!!!
Dedeitaly92 2 years ago
hmmm
TatianaSabaxTragedy 2 years ago
Huh?
What's going on with her? She was scaring me for a minute there.
Can't wait to find out.
sj23564 2 years ago
whoa babbbbbaaayyy.
xobec21 2 years ago
*gasp*
that was unexpected! whats wrong with her??! great, suspenseful, yet cute chapter :)
and once again, i need a man like nicholas.
JBFanpire11 2 years ago
ahhhh, next chapter i'm begging you! explain why she's sick pweaseee :)
AmazedBySmiley 2 years ago
my favourite chapter :)
kaiTlynxo2 2 years ago
nick would be so perfect as a husband <3
harrysayerschica 2 years ago
This is definetly my favorite chapter. It was so good!
florencie123 2 years ago
great! as usual. but, i'm just as confused as the rest.
She's sick but, of what? it's not the stomach flu. Nick knew, exactly what to do. I'm gonna go out on a limb with this and say this has something so do with her being, hypoglycemic? yeah? or no?
Gotmegoingcrzy 2 years ago
omgosh. i've been wondering when this would come about. and you did it so well. :D :D
i'm so ready for the next chapter.
beautifully written giirl.
fishclown33 2 years ago
Woah! I don't get what she was sick with, or if it even matters, but Nick was soo sweet to her :P
Loved it! Made my day, I read the first part when I came home from school, before doing homework, then 4 1/2 hrs later I checked again and read the 2nd part, like a treat for getting all my homework done :)
Donthatanyone 2 years ago
what was she sick with? thats the only part im confused with
it was amazing as usual
OmGiHeArTyOuToo 2 years ago
This was perfect. The way he took care of her just made him seem so...like he'd be such a perfect husband, or father. He's so sweet to her
jlbarasch27 2 years ago
wow, i did not see that coming.
i love this chapter! like seriously i looove it.
im glad you posted both parts today (:
hellloooxsunshineee 2 years ago
I'm confused.
why did she need to take a cold shower?
how did nick know what to do?
what's wrong with her?
i loved it, i didn't get it, but i loved it! lol
millstown680 2 years ago
oh shnap.
intense.
but loved it.
BreezexoLove 2 years ago
aww, what the hell is happening with her. Im really worried, that was so scary geez. I was like OMG. Nick was perfect, he is so careful, so amazing. He knows what to do and that make him HOTTER. But seriously, what the hell Miley :( Poor her, she was so miserable. Im really worried about her :(. Hope she's gonna be okay. Love you girl. Thanks to post it. It's was REALLY good even if im more worried LOL.
MissNaleyy 2 years ago
oh damn! that's definitely not good. thanks so much for posting :) <3
teenfanvids 2 years ago
Whoa I'm suprised Nick knew what to do. I LOVE THIS EPISODE!!! It was so freaking amazing...
sofbalcrazy05 2 years ago
Okay, so not the first comment cause my comp is retarded! haha but anyways.. i loved it!
nileyislovee 2 years ago
wait..im confused.
wats wrong with miley?
and why is she in a cold shower?
huh? xD
xxemiix3 2 years ago
First comment! Woah, that just blew me away! You're making me love Nick more than I use to with the waty you have him taking care of Miley. He really is her Prince Charming. :) Thank you SO much for updating again today! After the last chapter I was so pumped for the next & I gotta say this was amazing! <3
nileyislovee 2 years ago
Thank you!
elleisforlovee 2 years ago
OMG!! i was totally wrong.
whats wrong with miley???
aahhhh..
oOSTiiLLOo 2 years ago
What are you talking about? You didn't see Jesus chillin the background? :p
elleisforlovee 2 years ago
i read it again, i'm still confused. what does "color suddenly returned to her cheeks in the worst of ways. " mean? i'm just confused which i hope i shouldn't be but can you explain please?
mileyfreak06 2 years ago
She was pale, and then her cheeks got super rosy quickly. A sign that she's sick.
elleisforlovee 2 years ago
She should've jumped into an ice bath like me. Ahahah ;] Pools are WONDERFUL in September for reasons like this.
xoPONEDox 2 years ago
whaaaa?
whats going on with miley?
is she sick or somethingggg.
im so confused!! haha.
funnymonkey1013 2 years ago
WHOA! what happened?! i have to read it again. i'm confused. what's going on with her?!
mileyfreak06 2 years ago
YAY thankyou for posting it today! <33
xxemiix3 2 years ago