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  • Favorite chapter of all. I don't want to say it's beautiful or precious because I don't want to sound redundant, but wow...

  • Wow your such an amazing writer. The is NO one else I know that writes stories the way you do.

    I wonder what's up with miley. When she was being sick I also thought she was gonna be preggors ;) amazing I'm gonna tell everyone about your stories :D

  • Aww, thanks girl! I appreciate the support :]

  • ahmazing

    im scared haha ;]

  • oops i mean freaking out!

  • omg wat the hell happened her? im freakout out!! xx

  • That was intense. I wanna know what's wrong with her :/

    But this was another one of my favorites! You never fail to please me, do ya Elle?

  • Greatest chapter so far!!! <3

  • WOAHHHHH.....*jaw dropped* OMFG ELLE YOU ARE THE MOST TALENTED KID EVER.....*mouth still opened* this is CERTAINLY my favest chap too....WOW,,,,

  • Omg this is too good,amazing!!!! I hope mileys ok!! Ohh nick was soo swt! Ur such a great writer with incredible ideas cant wait for d next!!

  • beautiful!!!

  • hmmm

  • Huh?

    What's going on with her? She was scaring me for a minute there.

    Can't wait to find out.

  • whoa babbbbbaaayyy.

  • *gasp*

    that was unexpected! whats wrong with her??! great, suspenseful, yet cute chapter :)

    and once again, i need a man like nicholas.

  • ahhhh, next chapter i'm begging you! explain why she's sick pweaseee :)

  • my favourite chapter :)

  • nick would be so perfect as a husband <3

  • This is definetly my favorite chapter. It was so good!

  • great! as usual. but, i'm just as confused as the rest.

    She's sick but, of what? it's not the stomach flu. Nick knew, exactly what to do. I'm gonna go out on a limb with this and say this has something so do with her being, hypoglycemic? yeah? or no?

  • omgosh. i've been wondering when this would come about. and you did it so well. :D :D

    i'm so ready for the next chapter.

    beautifully written giirl.

  • Woah! I don't get what she was sick with, or if it even matters, but Nick was soo sweet to her :P

    Loved it! Made my day, I read the first part when I came home from school, before doing homework, then 4 1/2 hrs later I checked again and read the 2nd part, like a treat for getting all my homework done :)

  • what was she sick with? thats the only part im confused with

    it was amazing as usual

  • This was perfect. The way he took care of her just made him seem so...like he'd be such a perfect husband, or father. He's so sweet to her

  • wow, i did not see that coming.

    i love this chapter! like seriously i looove it.

    im glad you posted both parts today (:

  • I'm confused.

    why did she need to take a cold shower?

    how did nick know what to do?

    what's wrong with her?

    i loved it, i didn't get it, but i loved it! lol

  • oh shnap.

    intense.

    but loved it.

  • aww, what the hell is happening with her. Im really worried, that was so scary geez. I was like OMG. Nick was perfect, he is so careful, so amazing. He knows what to do and that make him HOTTER. But seriously, what the hell Miley :( Poor her, she was so miserable. Im really worried about her :(. Hope she's gonna be okay. Love you girl. Thanks to post it. It's was REALLY good even if im more worried LOL.

  • oh damn! that's definitely not good. thanks so much for posting :) <3

  • Whoa I'm suprised Nick knew what to do. I LOVE THIS EPISODE!!! It was so freaking amazing...

  • Okay, so not the first comment cause my comp is retarded! haha but anyways.. i loved it!

  • wait..im confused.

    wats wrong with miley?

    and why is she in a cold shower?

    huh? xD

  • First comment! Woah, that just blew me away! You're making me love Nick more than I use to with the waty you have him taking care of Miley. He really is her Prince Charming. :) Thank you SO much for updating again today! After the last chapter I was so pumped for the next & I gotta say this was amazing! <3

  • Thank you!

  • OMG!! i was totally wrong.

    whats wrong with miley???

    aahhhh..

  • What are you talking about? You didn't see Jesus chillin the background? :p

  • i read it again, i'm still confused. what does "color suddenly returned to her cheeks in the worst of ways. " mean? i'm just confused which i hope i shouldn't be but can you explain please?

  • She was pale, and then her cheeks got super rosy quickly. A sign that she's sick.

  • She should've jumped into an ice bath like me. Ahahah ;] Pools are WONDERFUL in September for reasons like this.

  • whaaaa?

    whats going on with miley?

    is she sick or somethingggg.

    im so confused!! haha.

  • WHOA! what happened?! i have to read it again. i'm confused. what's going on with her?!

  • YAY thankyou for posting it today! <33

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