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  • wow joe and brooke really cant keep their mitts off each other for 2 seconds can they?

  • still having déjá vu lol

    Awesome!!!

  • WOAH WOAH WOAH! woah.. lol im so late in these stories..i mean i was in track with them but a month or two not on youtube pulls me way back..im sorry Dx

  • HORNDOGS HORNDOGS HORNDOGS!

  • You can have your opinion about the Jonas Brothers as artists. But they are not gay.

    If you want to hate on them, go elsewhere. No one forced you to click on this video and state your opinion. There are enough hate videos up on YouTube. You can go leave your opinion there. You are not wanted here.

    Enough said.

  • wow. 186 chapters?

    oh boy this is gonna take me all night to read! lol but i will!!

    i really like it!

    well...from what i read lol

    but im sure its gonna be awesome!

  • OH MY GOODNESS!!

    SUCH HORNDAWGS!!

    and AHAHAHAHAH when joe was like Really a black and red thong?? DO YOU WANT ME TO COMBUST?!?!?

    xD loveeeeeeeeeeeeee you em!

  • oh dang!!!!

  • hahaha!! WHO CALLED IT!!! those 2 make out ALOT!! almost every time we read about them. i guess there really is no other way to explain it besides HORNDOGS. lol. xD

  • ummm..okay?

  • oo lala!! haha

  • awesomeee!!!

  • ooh, snap! lol. please post soon!! haha

  • Awesome this is definitally (sp?) my favorite story!!!

  • You can count on Joe and Brooke to give us the Sex moment in the story.....hehe

    Hopefully they don't go too far... or maybe someone will regret it and that can ruin the relationship.....please don't do that

  • ooooo joe is such a horndog lol

  • He better not be planning what I think he's planning. She'd be kicked off of tour! He better not ruin it for her.

  • I loved the mini-marathon. :) which is no surprise since I always love what you come up with! :)

    sorry about camo :( but I'm glad I get to speak to you for a few more days :)

  • ohhh joe...

  • oooohhhhh hahhaa

  • Epic. You're an awesome writer.

  • i love your storys so much ,can u plze post the other 2 today sometime?

  • amazing! can you please post more!

  • Cute!!! hope they dont get caught!!! LOL

  • oooooh

    scandalous ;]

    loved it

  • ooh what have they got planned?!

    amazing loved it =) ♥

  • Ooooooooh, Joe!!! Watcha got planned?! Huh, huh?! tehehhe!!!! Im hilarious...

    Wow, that was the lamest not even a joke joke ever!!! And that didnt even make sense!!! Wow...yeah, its 3AM here in chicago...im sleepy. But, loved the mini marathon!!! Wooooooooooooimfallingasleep..­.

    - Elise <3

  • ohhhh....

  • oooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh

  • Oommgg!!! A marathon yay!! Awesome chapter!!

  • Awweee i can't wait to find out what it is :)

  • way too cute for words...

    AMAZING.

  • ooooooooohhhhhhhhh

  • ooooooooooooo this is gonna get good!!!!

  • Oooooooooooooooo Somethings gunna Happen. :)

  • ahhhhhh

  • dude i looooove it!!! gosh you are AMAZING!!! you never fail to amuse me!!! gosh that was the greatest marathon ever! and the way you write is just awesome!!! you should do a book and get it published!!!! =))))))))

  • a closet joe? really?...a red and black lace thong brooke? really?...hilarious and hot all at once, wonder what they're gonna do later...

  • oh my goodness, i can't believe you ended the marathon here... AH YOU'RE A KILLIER! lol

  • Aw Joe. It's so easy to fall in love with him in this story!

    Awesome marathon!

  • next one please but take yo timeee girl

  • i hope you post the other tomarro

  • why is he such a horndog??? lol

  • OMG! More! :)

  • i cant wait!

  • OK PLZ MORE PLZ I LUV IT!

  • ugh i want MORE

    lol

    its just all so interesting

  • wow joe good going, i hope that door has a lock on it, but i suppose he told the door man not to let anyone through, think know whats planned, lolz.

  • woah!!! haha cant wait for more!

  • hmmmm wonder what hes planing....lol luvd it!

  • ugh oh!! joe and brooke are naughty lol

    great marathon :)

    your seriously amazing

  • dfgdfjgkldfjlgk j ahhhhh oh my goodness joseph is a horny sucka (; haha i love it!! post more! <3

  • awesome :)

  • joe, dirty joe!!! jeje

  • lmfao.

    i hope they're not going to do what i think they're going to do!!

    joe's gotta keep his promiseeeee. :P

    buttt  i loveddd it either way. :]]

    postt soon.

  • i cannnnnnt wait til you post!! drink coffee, or redbull!

  • jajaja that is really funny write soon(:

  • CANT WAIT TIL THE NEXT!!! What does joe have planned???? Ugh I am SO hooked on this series. Not that thats a bad thing. Its a very good thing, actually. I love these. But I cant wait til the next!!!!!! Oooooh. This is hard!! I'm already tired of waiting. Does 12:01 a.m. count as tomorrow? Please? Preeeeeeeeeetttttttttyyyyyyyyy­yyy please with sugar on top??

  • hahaha she gets him so horneyy its hilarious!

    couldn't even wait till after the party LMAO ahah

    woww

  • oh wow, I wonder what Joe got planed out for Brooke

  • yeyyyyyyyyyyyyyy i cant wait for the next episode i loved how this ended !!!!!!!!!!!

  • :O

    OH BABBBYY.

    make the next one!

    amazing! xD

  • hahahaha i loved it

    haha reallly a CLOSET hahahah

    i cant wait till u post :D

  • i loved it! joe is so bad! lol

  • URGH!!! how long do WE have to wait?!?!?!?!?!

  • wow they like to get diiirty! lol

    haha love this story!!

  • Its 1 am there?

    Oh wow.

    Its 7 at nite here.

    Lol.

    Pleaseee postt!

  • AMAZING mini marathon!!

    Joe is being naughty again...but I LOVE it!!!:D

    Post soon plzz:)

  • AWESOME epi, hehe joe os gettin horny lol love it!! more please i loooooove this series i LOVE it sooooo much! xx

  • Meanyy! U just haad to stop there didnt u:P?!? O well i guess il have to wait...

  • WOW!!!

  • i loooooved it! thanks sooo much for the mini marathon!

  • PLEASE POST SOON!!! :D

  • we all have to wait don't we? that is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo­oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo­ooooooooooo mean

  • Joe and Brooke <3

    xDDD

  • oh my gosh your gonna

    leave me hanging like that?

    oh well.. post tomorrow?:D

    thanks so much for the mini-marathon(:

  • whaaaaaat Joe!? Something planned huh ;D its 1 here too.. Im only up so i can read this aha :D

    Loved it!!

  • of course thats going to be joes detour!

    LOVED IT! x x x <3

  • Thanks for the mini marathon! It was great!

    I wonder what the surprise is!

    :)

  • Getting pretty intimate in a closet, huh? It's nice. :) Haha. He really wants her obviously. Question is... Will they go all the way? Hm. Interesting. What will everyone think of that, that is, if they tell them? Haha. Sorry. I must sound weird now.

    But they're getting it on! Of course Joe would pull her away from the party just to be alone with Brooke.

    Love the detail and everything. Thank you so much for the mini marathon! :D

    ~ Aimee

  • WHAT!

    DONT LEAVE ME HANIGNG

    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

    post tomorrow?

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