not gonna lie when you said you didnt have the voice but you had the lyrics i thought it would be whack... but i checked it out and its pretty your flow is on lock goes great with the beat and the lyrics are pretty good already but will get better in time
only thing for you voice is sometimes you over anunciate words put a lil more slang and "street" sound if you can but other than that its good shit
"i aint tryna bring you down cause your already on the floor" ... dope
thanks for the comment man, and yeah true i should do that but i dont talk like that so then it'll sound like im trying too hard. but thanks again for listening and commenting
Oops I'm really sorry I didn't mean to say that, I don't no why I even did. Sorry. Work on your flow, and keep your voice up so we can hear. Otherwise keep it rollin'.
LMFAO! ... motha fucka!! this is wat im talkin bout .. you need to start doin this shit more often .. iight this is where its at .. nice job man fuckin sick.. Props
work on ure flow man .
sneakerchamp23 1 year ago
@sneakerchamp23 this was 2 years ago, listen to my newer songs, my flow's improved
ShaheemA13 1 year ago
nice mane
check out my tracks shaheem
chizzle72 2 years ago
this is pretty sick and the rap i made waswnt suppose to be seroius
officialEKchannel 2 years ago
lol yeah i figured that haha and thanks
ShaheemA13 2 years ago
shaheem broo
amazin lyrics
this is too slick
X2theZPulkit 2 years ago
Fuck man... You just keeeeep gettin' better.
Lol.
PATrikzMusic 2 years ago
"So if my art is a masterpiece, you can call me Picasso
And if I were paintin a picture of you, itd be an asshole"
realli siik
KingKK99 2 years ago
big fan man check out my new track sometime, not as serious as your stuff but you might like it
DDEMONTSS 3 years ago
thats sickk dude...like ppl said all u need is tha Slangg my brotha
douchie22 3 years ago
not gonna lie when you said you didnt have the voice but you had the lyrics i thought it would be whack... but i checked it out and its pretty your flow is on lock goes great with the beat and the lyrics are pretty good already but will get better in time
only thing for you voice is sometimes you over anunciate words put a lil more slang and "street" sound if you can but other than that its good shit
"i aint tryna bring you down cause your already on the floor" ... dope
BankRow 3 years ago
thanks for the comment man, and yeah true i should do that but i dont talk like that so then it'll sound like im trying too hard. but thanks again for listening and commenting
ShaheemA13 3 years ago
LMAO YES BRO sick shittttt
hotimran2 3 years ago
LOL thanks imran
ShaheemA13 3 years ago
lmao thanks for pointing out ur not indian cause indians girls drink my piss, they dont like theyre husbands little circumsized dicks lmfaooo
Joking123456789 3 years ago 3
I put this in my favorites because it made me laugh
MrGeetarDood 3 years ago 3
damn, fuckin sick.
keep at it, fuck all the haters that hatin, keep doing what you do.
coolio25o7 3 years ago
"And like Jay-Z and Em, Im a mothafuckin renegade"
great song em killed him on it though
DDEMONTSS 3 years ago
fuckin idian. lol
jsk289 3 years ago
im not indian
ShaheemA13 3 years ago
Oops I'm really sorry I didn't mean to say that, I don't no why I even did. Sorry. Work on your flow, and keep your voice up so we can hear. Otherwise keep it rollin'.
jsk289 3 years ago
LMFAO! ... motha fucka!! this is wat im talkin bout .. you need to start doin this shit more often .. iight this is where its at .. nice job man fuckin sick.. Props
Tupac876 3 years ago
lol mec
marcoligNo 3 years ago
yes shaheem =D
~Charles~
somethingg93 3 years ago