hi girls, trois, said what i couldn't say. she reminded me. this is what i mean by breathing from the stomach.
Well... Get them to take air close to the diaphragm (which is the upper part of the stomach) — they should feel the tension there, and not at the throat.
hope you can understand this better. it helps when you switch notes & make you less breathless when u need to hit a high note.
Mixing is great — first voice is tender, but pitching is off. Second voice has good pitching and sounds quite happy, but could do with a bit of expression necessary for the song. Timing is off towards the middle of the song, but you guys got it back.
Keep on singing, and I trust both of you will get there! ^_^
@TroisNyxEtienne : Thank you for your critique! I think I always have a problem with getting the right pitch. Is there a way to improve it? Thanks! :)
@kikiworld10: Heh, don't mention it ^_^ The best way I can think of would be to go through with someone who knows the tune, and/or is pitch perfect. The instrumental for the piece can help a bit — there's a melody track somewhere, and I can hear it, but it's faint. Try comparing the pitch of your voice to that, and if they do sound the same, pitch-wise, then you're good to go.
i think u need work, when u change notes. a bit shaky. 2nd singer voice is strong but 2 stiff. sounds like she's just reading it fast & a bit unnatural.
sorry if i said anything 2 offend any1. nice job on the mix, i like it.
this is my own opinion, others may like it just fine, but i'll not lie & get ur hopes up high 4 a fall. with some work, u gals can b great.
@kikiworld10 u welcome ^_^ glad u gals r not upset w/my comment. if & when u r ready, i can recommend some1 else 2 listen 2 ur song. may b she is better 2 give ya a straight answer. a stranger is best in giving u an honest answer & may b able 2 express what i am lacking in wanting 2 say.
@kikiworld10 well i do have some1 in mind. i came about her by some1 else site that wanted my opinion. my opinion may b bias a bit & may not come out with an answer that will help u improve where u need improvement. so when u r ready go send ur work 2 this person. troisnyxetienne's channel. good luck ^_^
@11dreamingofu That second person would be me and since this is the first time am singing Cantonese in my whole life I don't sound native but I did try my best haha. Don't worry u didn't offend me! Love u!!:)
@EverisingStar1 well, i guess that explains it, a bit. yeah, it sounds like u were having a problem singing it. i thought it was ur breathing. well then u should stick 2 ur own language that u r comfortable with. cos d break/hesitation makes it sound not so good. ^_^
@11dreamingofu I understand ur argument but if I don't try then I won't ever improve and I want to give my chance to do this as I do speak a little Cantonese in everyday life as well. And ouch sorry to say so but that did hurt.
@EverisingStar1 no, i don't mean to give it up, but work on ur own language 1st. work with what you are comfortable first. then when your Cantonese improve, you will find singing it easier and smoother.
i'm so sorry. didn't mean it for it to hurt your feelings. i don't want to lie and then some 1 else comes along & tell you. if i offend ya, i'm sorry., but you must keep your chin up & keep working at it. you girls have potential. and cos you love to sing, you can do it.
@11dreamingofu Never mind la it's fine am overeacting haha. Thnx for ur support always and ur enthusiasm to help us become better singers thankyou!!(^ ^)
@EverisingStar1 nope, i'm the one to say sorry. no kind of offense to either one of you.
one last thing i do want to say is that i remember my daughter's music told my girls that if you record your own singing & listen to it with an earphone then you may be able to pick up the notes where you may need improvement. hope this will help.
good luck & i'll be rooting for you two to do well & become famous so i can brag that i know you gals.
@kikiworld10 oh you welcome, just glad that you don't hate me by what i said. hope i can be a help with my words, of some wisdom but lol, really half remember advice from my school days. wish you both good luck. ^_^
@11dreamingofu thnx ur so sweet and great advice will try doing that from now on!! So headphones as opposed to listening to recordings outloud right? X
@EverisingStar1 yes. ^_^ cause it will eliminate other sounds & you can focus on what you are singing & hear clearly & not so distracting on recording. you can also try sing with the ear phone on as well as recording it at the same time. like for example, i use to play my favorite singer's song & follow their lead & try to copy them. then you see it makes it more competitive or motivate ya to keep up. ^_^
@EverisingStar1 : Thank you for being in this collab with me! You're a great singer! Looking forward to our next collab...p.s- I probably won't be able to send you the recording until the end of June. Is that alright with you?
@kikiworld10 Perfect!! I don't have time until then either!!! I haven't even started practising yet cuz of exams but am sure I will be ready by then!! I love singing with u too!! Maybe we can do some mando covers!!
This is very beautiful! ^_^
your voices are very beautiful on Kitkat's instrumental! <3
UnicornWannaDance 4 weeks ago in playlist Collaborations
@UnicornWannaDance : Thank you Melody!
kikiworld10 4 weeks ago
I just love to listen to you...
XChaoticComposerX 8 months ago
@XChaoticComposerX : Thanks!
kikiworld10 8 months ago
This is very good indeed! :)
Maxridex 8 months ago
@Maxridex : Thank you!!
kikiworld10 8 months ago
@prislsl : Thank you!!
kikiworld10 8 months ago
I definitely think your two voices have created the harmony I had in mind when I worked on this instrumental^^
You made something happening in my heart, something beautiful and deep, meaningful ^____^
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kikiworld10 8 months ago
hi girls, trois, said what i couldn't say. she reminded me. this is what i mean by breathing from the stomach.
Well... Get them to take air close to the diaphragm (which is the upper part of the stomach) — they should feel the tension there, and not at the throat.
hope you can understand this better. it helps when you switch notes & make you less breathless when u need to hit a high note.
11dreamingofu 9 months ago
Mixing is great — first voice is tender, but pitching is off. Second voice has good pitching and sounds quite happy, but could do with a bit of expression necessary for the song. Timing is off towards the middle of the song, but you guys got it back.
Keep on singing, and I trust both of you will get there! ^_^
TroisNyxEtienne 9 months ago
@TroisNyxEtienne : Thank you for your critique! I think I always have a problem with getting the right pitch. Is there a way to improve it? Thanks! :)
kikiworld10 9 months ago
@kikiworld10: Heh, don't mention it ^_^ The best way I can think of would be to go through with someone who knows the tune, and/or is pitch perfect. The instrumental for the piece can help a bit — there's a melody track somewhere, and I can hear it, but it's faint. Try comparing the pitch of your voice to that, and if they do sound the same, pitch-wise, then you're good to go.
TroisNyxEtienne 9 months ago
@TroisNyxEtienne : Okay. Thanks! :)
kikiworld10 9 months ago
i think u need work, when u change notes. a bit shaky. 2nd singer voice is strong but 2 stiff. sounds like she's just reading it fast & a bit unnatural.
sorry if i said anything 2 offend any1. nice job on the mix, i like it.
this is my own opinion, others may like it just fine, but i'll not lie & get ur hopes up high 4 a fall. with some work, u gals can b great.
11dreamingofu 9 months ago
@11dreamingofu : Thank you for your advice! :)
kikiworld10 9 months ago
@kikiworld10 u welcome ^_^ glad u gals r not upset w/my comment. if & when u r ready, i can recommend some1 else 2 listen 2 ur song. may b she is better 2 give ya a straight answer. a stranger is best in giving u an honest answer & may b able 2 express what i am lacking in wanting 2 say.
11dreamingofu 9 months ago
@11dreamingofu : That would be nice...I definitely want to learn how to improve on my singing. :) Thanks!
kikiworld10 9 months ago
@kikiworld10 well i do have some1 in mind. i came about her by some1 else site that wanted my opinion. my opinion may b bias a bit & may not come out with an answer that will help u improve where u need improvement. so when u r ready go send ur work 2 this person. troisnyxetienne's channel. good luck ^_^
11dreamingofu 9 months ago
@11dreamingofu : Thank you! :)
kikiworld10 9 months ago
@kikiworld10 u welcome. fighting! ^_^
11dreamingofu 9 months ago
@11dreamingofu That second person would be me and since this is the first time am singing Cantonese in my whole life I don't sound native but I did try my best haha. Don't worry u didn't offend me! Love u!!:)
EverisingStar1 9 months ago
@EverisingStar1 well, i guess that explains it, a bit. yeah, it sounds like u were having a problem singing it. i thought it was ur breathing. well then u should stick 2 ur own language that u r comfortable with. cos d break/hesitation makes it sound not so good. ^_^
11dreamingofu 9 months ago
@11dreamingofu I understand ur argument but if I don't try then I won't ever improve and I want to give my chance to do this as I do speak a little Cantonese in everyday life as well. And ouch sorry to say so but that did hurt.
EverisingStar1 9 months ago
@EverisingStar1 no, i don't mean to give it up, but work on ur own language 1st. work with what you are comfortable first. then when your Cantonese improve, you will find singing it easier and smoother.
i'm so sorry. didn't mean it for it to hurt your feelings. i don't want to lie and then some 1 else comes along & tell you. if i offend ya, i'm sorry., but you must keep your chin up & keep working at it. you girls have potential. and cos you love to sing, you can do it.
11dreamingofu 9 months ago
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EverisingStar1 9 months ago
@11dreamingofu Never mind la it's fine am overeacting haha. Thnx for ur support always and ur enthusiasm to help us become better singers thankyou!!(^ ^)
Sorry Kiki for previous comments!!
EverisingStar1 9 months ago
@EverisingStar1 nope, i'm the one to say sorry. no kind of offense to either one of you.
one last thing i do want to say is that i remember my daughter's music told my girls that if you record your own singing & listen to it with an earphone then you may be able to pick up the notes where you may need improvement. hope this will help.
good luck & i'll be rooting for you two to do well & become famous so i can brag that i know you gals.
11dreamingofu 9 months ago
@11dreamingofu : Thanks for all these advices!
kikiworld10 9 months ago
@kikiworld10 oh you welcome, just glad that you don't hate me by what i said. hope i can be a help with my words, of some wisdom but lol, really half remember advice from my school days. wish you both good luck. ^_^
11dreamingofu 9 months ago
@11dreamingofu thnx ur so sweet and great advice will try doing that from now on!! So headphones as opposed to listening to recordings outloud right? X
EverisingStar1 9 months ago
@EverisingStar1 yes. ^_^ cause it will eliminate other sounds & you can focus on what you are singing & hear clearly & not so distracting on recording. you can also try sing with the ear phone on as well as recording it at the same time. like for example, i use to play my favorite singer's song & follow their lead & try to copy them. then you see it makes it more competitive or motivate ya to keep up. ^_^
11dreamingofu 9 months ago
@11dreamingofu Sure I will give that a try!! X
EverisingStar1 9 months ago
Ohh, nice collab! Both of your voices sounds great!
I love the parts where you both sang differently xD
sammiiboox 9 months ago
@sammiiboox : Thank you!
kikiworld10 9 months ago
@sammiiboox Thnks so much this is encouraging!! :)
EverisingStar1 9 months ago
Go us!! Love all the cute pics!!We sound awesome!!! Thanks again to u and Kitkat!!
EverisingStar1 9 months ago
@EverisingStar1 : Thank you for being in this collab with me! You're a great singer! Looking forward to our next collab...p.s- I probably won't be able to send you the recording until the end of June. Is that alright with you?
kikiworld10 9 months ago
@kikiworld10 Perfect!! I don't have time until then either!!! I haven't even started practising yet cuz of exams but am sure I will be ready by then!! I love singing with u too!! Maybe we can do some mando covers!!
EverisingStar1 9 months ago
Thanks my two awesome singers here, you have been wonderful, I'm very very happy of this outcome today, also it means so much for me^^
Mixing both of your voice was a great moment of pleasure and now seeing this cute video, I'm truly enjoyed^^
I love this collab ^______^
KitkatWorlds 9 months ago
@KitkatWorlds : ♥ Thank you, Kitkat!! ♥
kikiworld10 9 months ago
@KitkatWorlds Thanks!! I love it too!! Had so much funthnx to the two of u!!:)
EverisingStar1 9 months ago