You are tuned to a beautiful channel and I found this so beautiful. There was a time long ago when it would have helped me go on and I am sure it will help many who are in a place like I used to be. Thank you
Hello :) Thank you for such a beautiful comment. I understand completely and indeed, feel I could only write and post this poem, as I am on the other side of that 'place' too now. I appreciate you stopping by. With kind wishes, Sunbeam :)
Your imagery was amazing and so inspiring. I love how you captured the innocence of a pure heart with young children. Thats very touching and emotional. Very beautiful poem.
Very nice Jill. It makes me think of the dependence we have on our mums, and how some of us yearn for that support our entire lives, but that at some point it's not possible anymore. Where are we without our moms? What a huge void to fill. Is there be any larger void to fill in our entire lives? :)
Hi :) I think that sooner or later we have to become our own parents and that happens differently for each person, if they recognise it at all!....Ultimately, only we can fill anything we perceive as a void in our lives - no other person can. Just my opinion of course!! :)
Wow! That is a progressive concept for someone like myself, but it makes perfect sense and something for me to think about and work toward. Thank you once again for some valuable insight. :)
I like the way that you have expressed yourself in this video poem. Wonderful usage of photos of the child - and yourself. I feel that you have an innate ability to pour forth your talents through this format. It will be interesting to watch your future pieces. I hope that your audience grows over time and that your movies touch the lives of many people.
This made me cry. :) beautiful. My mom is a single parent and I remember saying these types of things to her whenever things wouldn't work out just as planned. 5 stars. lovely
MahinaSinger: Hello again :) Your comment is so very touching and wonderful feedback for me. Thank you.
I feel this poem was born out of my own experiences growing up and since I myself became a mum. It was very healing to write somehow and I am just delighted seeing it touches others too. Thank you so much for your support and comment!!
What strikes me most is the idea of a child feeling some need to return the loving kindness her mother has shown in a time of crisis, an awareness that they are connected. This is the essence of humanity in a nutshell.
Hello :) Thank you. I didnt think your poem related to this one so removed it as a video response - but thank you for favouriting this poem. All the best. Sunbeam :)
Awe, this is such a touching poem...and oh so true. On the rare occassion that I did show that I was upset about something, my kids were full of hugs and concern. Instant cure! Thanks for your beautiful poety!
Hi Karen :) Am so glad you liked this. Yes - being a mum and still being human about our own sorrows is a delicate balancing act. TY so much for watching and commenting. Sunbeam :)
WOW!! This poem is very sad. It seems like the parent was having a breakdown which forced the child to grow up too soon and worry about mummy. Children shouldn't worry about anything. Very heart-felt!
Hi Shane :) Great to see you! I am off to Ontario on Thursday...so exciting!! I thought about your snowy video! Luckily I guess it wont be like the next few weeks :)
Yes on the poem - it is sad in that way. My original title for this was 'old too soon'. Children shouldnt have to worry about such things - but life is often very REAL and situations not those Happy Ever Afters etc. This poem was cracking open that idea and shining a light on those I see as sometimes hidden, 'invisible angels'.
LittleMickyFingers2: Hello again :) Thank you very much for stopping by. Creativity is a magical thing and we all seem to have our own paths with it somehow. TY for such a supportive comment! Sunbeam :)
My Father told me, long ago, that most of peoples' misery is self inflicted. That poor decisions, lack of planing, and laziness was the root problem. BUT~ there is another side..the children who are caught in the mess adults create. Beautiful poem, and sweet pictures in the video.
Ill post my personal poems on my channel when I get enough poems in my brain. It took me fifteen minutes for the smile one, and Im all out of ideas for now! Heres a mini poem ill write as a quick, later alligator :D Its my silly poem ill make up as i go! ______ Later Alligator The alligator stomps, The alligator bites, The alligator can climb, up to great heights, He can say hello, and he can say goodbye, But this is what alligators say, and nobody knows why! Later Alligator! -S. :D
Aww..thank you. Now, young lady, I have some news coming soon about getting a first poem published...and I am working on getting things set up for my first poetry book. It will happen and YT people will probably be some of the first to know :) Thanks for all your support and encouragement!
And Buttercup is the most wonderful name for a cat :) I have my new kitten Sammy on my lap and he is sleeping so cant say 'hello' back but I am sure he would if he could :)
Hi :) Oh - I am glad you got into a few...lol..Sometimes YT plays up etc....Yes - this is a very personal one - inspired by both my own childhood and raising a son alone - plus just life generally!! Thanks for watching! Sunbeam :)
Hello :) Thanks so much for stopping by and watching. Tears are always healing in one way or another. I am so glad it moved you in some way - you inspire me with your beautiful videos...I may post that 'Flowers in Her Hair' poem one day!! :)
That is a sad poem.. I hope I never make my daughter feel that way. The way that she'd have to look after me and make me feel good. I always try my best, no matter what, to put on a happy face for her..
Hi Wendy :) Yes - it is sad in a way. Sometimes life can be tough, I guess and things happen people don't expect and they end up in situations where they can't always be as strong as they set out to be.
Thank you so much for watching and adding your perspective though - I really enjoyed reading it and you gave me more food for thought - maybe another poem will come out of that one of these days!! :)
Hello :) Thank you so much for your feedback - it truly means a lot to me. And for adding this poem to your favourites....I am honoured!! Here's wishing you a wonderful day!! Sunbeam :)
Hello!! Welcome to my Channel :) Thank you so much for taking the time to watch, comment and star rate - much appreciated!! With kindest wishes, Sunbeam :)
Hello again!!! Thank you so much!! Am very pleased you liked it. This was quite a hard one to share on here for some reason - but am so glad I did - many people seem to have got something from it - which is just GREAT!!...With best wishes, Sunbeam :)
When first we look into our children's eyes, we see there all the hope we ourselves see in life, yet unformed. It takes shape in like measure as the love and respect we also see in them. How important it is then that our eye be true to both ourselves and our children. You have painted such a tender portrait of the maternal bond, Sunbeam, where hope lives on, and is returned.
Beautiful comment, Michael - thank you. Being a parent is such a gift - more challenging than anything else, but more rewarding than anything else too, on so many levels.
Such is the path of the most beautiful life experiences of this world, methinks...Challenge/Reward...Sadness/Joy and so on...A big balancing act of extremes at times....Sigh. See where your comments take me?...lol...Off flying on tangents!! :)
Hi Dave :) Thanks for stopping by. Yes - I agree. Children and parents can be a real team often, especially when times get tough. Glad you liked it! Sunbeam :)
Thank you :) When I just listened to your whispered poem / monologue - it reminded me a little of when I recorded this and had to 'get in character'...:) Isn't it wonderful how much we can all explore and create through poetry?...Thanks so much for stopping by! Sunbeam :)
Hello :) Yes - holding a hand when someone needs it can make them feel immeasurably better somehow :)
Thanks for stopping by and listening to one of my poems :) Glad to see you are around the database again...that really is a wonderful resource for us all to share and find each other - thank you for that!! Sunbeam :)
im honoured =) its out there and breathing and with any luck it will continue to grow for the benefit of of all those interested in poetry. its a pleasure hearing the work submitted
The strength a mother has is something we all take for granted until one day she needs strength. I remember how strong my mother was and I also remember the day she needed someone. It broke my heart but I also gained an appreciation for one of the greatest gifts in life and that is a strong, loving mother!
Hi Brad :) Thanks for watching and sharing what thoughts it brought up for you. It sounds like you have been blessed with your mum, as we all are, I think, in some way or another. Thanks for watching and commenting! Sunbeam xoxo
Hi,Another great Poem straight from your heart, as we all can tell! You truly have an incredible way with words Jill! Such brilliant and clear pictures of the child at different stages just added to such an emotional Poem! In societies all over the world as we all know "Single Parenthood" is abundant an so are the trials and tribulations that go with that vast responsibility! Thanks for sharing. Ethan.
Hello Ethan!! Lovely to see you :) Thank you for your feedback.
Adults can find themselves alone with the responsibility for a child/children for all sorts of reasons. That can be so isolating at times - I guess that is what I was trying to capture a little here. Also, people can become 'invisible' in our societies in all sorts of ways as well - this being but one, I guess.
This one felt like it came from a very personal place. I know that can be a little uncomfortable to share but by the looks of the comments many people really connected with your feelings. Thanks for sharing Sunbeam!
Hi Rob :) This one just shot at me like a thunderbolt while I was working on something entirely different!! Sometimes these poems have a mind of their own!! Thanks for stopping by - lovely to see you, as always :) Sunbeam xoxo
As a former single mom, I can vouch for the truth of this poem. Being alone together in this way can be a terrifying and daunting ordeal, and you have captured these feelings very accurately.
As you have so perceptively portrayed, sometimes the child takes courage from the parent, and other times, the parent gains courage from the child. Somehow, you make it through, together. Beautiful words and lovely thoughts here.
Hello Nancy :) 'Terrifying' - that really is a great word here to describe how some of the moments in this situation can be...both for parent and child. But also so are the notions of 'gaining courage' from each other and 'making it through'. Somehow that happens!! Thank you for expressing identifying in some way with this poem - much appreciated. Sunbeam :)
A lovely poem - it states the delicate battle of strength and weakness as a parent. Often, we struggle to shield our "angels" of heart-ache and fear. This poem captures the emotion of that struggle nicely.
Such an emotional piece. The images... are so vivid. I've often wished to write something so emotional. I tend to be one step back from most of my poems.
Hi Steve! Interesting...sometimes I wish I could be more 'detached'. I seem to most times write about things so close to my heart in some way, my heart 'cracks open' a little more with each creation.
Detachment and emotional involvement - such a delicate balance for us in our poetry!! Sunbeam xoxo
Hey Sunny:) Wow another beautiful poem by a Sunbeam. I always know when I read one of your poems or as in the case now, hear you read them my heart will be touched in some way. Thank you my friend, I look forward to your next one.
Hello sir:) Welcome to my Channel :) Now - what a great idea....!! I am up for collaborations - so maybe the music muse will strike you - if so, email me!! :)
Hi Jane! Thanks! Yes - it can be like that - things can seem a lot more straightforward from a child's point of view - that can help! Lovely to see you :)
Wow Sunbeam this is such a touching poem! Your poetry has a beauty that is so unique to your style! I just really love this one and the way that you use a child's perspective really makes it what it is! Fantastic job once again and another 5 stars from me my friend, Tamara xxxx
Oh Sunbeam a charming poem. I have no children, but a borrowed grandchild. This said so almost this resembles one year ago to me when my husband separated from me. Your poem touches my heart very much.
Hello Heidi! What a lovely start to my day to see you :) Thank you for your comment. I feel honoured that my words have touched you in some way :) (((HUGS))Sunbeam xoxo
Hi Sunbeam, a really good reading voice and the photographs of the children were so moving. When a child asked if we're going to lose the house, I'm reminded of many good people losing their homes here in the U.S. , a neighbor right across from us for example. I like your putting the words up. You write deeply moving poetry. Thanks so much. Frank, a newer subscriber.
Frank - How great to see you :) Yes - losing their home is a real fear for many children in a variety of situations. One that it is so hard for a young mind to cope with.
Thank you for your feedback on my poetry - it means a lot to me. Warm welcome into my sub 'family'. Love Sunbeam xoxo
That was really wonderful, Jill. Lovely images you put with your words too. You've got so many suubscribers now! I knew you wouldn't remain a secret for long! (((hugs)))
Hello my friend xx Yes - they are climbing! I am so grateful for the wonderful souls here that enjoy the poems - I couldnt wish for better feedback. I see yours have gone along well too since I hit the button at the 100 point! Wonderful! Lovely to see you :)
Hello :) Yes - I do...I called the poem this as I felt mothers and children in these situations are often 'angels' to each other and in the world in a way no one else sees...'invisible' to the outside world - isolated. But I agree - there are the other kind of invisible angels too!! :) Sunbeam xoxo
Hello :) I was just thinking about you and your Channel the other day - I will pop over soon. What a beautiful comment. Although sad in one way, I guess I had a sense of the love that must have gone into that child from the mother for her to be able to return it so - thanks for sensing that in some way :)
Hi :)Thank you for watching and your comment. I'm really finding how much the visuals can enhance poetry - it's a wonderful opportunity on here to bring the poem to life more...With best wishes, Sunbeam xoxo
What you've beautifuly illustrated and sequenced here, is probably a thing that happens in many children's mind every day.. Young and vulnerable, they often keep it inside however, and then it takes many years for those lacks, to get on surface.
The title let us hope that obviously; we'll make it through(parents and childrens)
Hi Phil :) Lovely to see you, my friend...I need to pop over and listen to you singing before I head to bed...:) I love visiting your Channel!!
Anyways, thank you for your comments. I guess more people can relate to these words in some way or other than I thought. Comments like yours make me very glad I posted this poem. Thank you for taking the time to watch and share your thoughts.
Hi Sunbeam. This was very moving. I think everyone has felt this way as a child at one time or another, and a lot of us more intensely than others. It's a fine poem, and the images are very effective as well. Thanks, -Ron
Hi Ron :) Yes, I agree...It is all part of life's rich tapestry, I guess. Thank you so much for stopping by and watching! Great to see you :) Sunbeam xoxo
It's ok xx You are No 7 - that's not so far off :) Thanks for watching and commenting...You know how it makes me smile to hear from you...another penny well-earned ;)
Jack...It is always so lovely to see you :)I have come to really look fwd to your feedback! Thank you for your comment. Truly - it means a great deal to me to know you got something from listening to it :) Sunbeam xoxo
I was listening to it, and i suddenly dropped everything, crawled in front of the screen, took my pillow on my lap, hugged it, and silently listened to the whole poem again...
It really touched me, because I can so totally relate to it...
You've really touched me deeply, thank you, for those inspiring words.
Again, thank you... you posted this, just when I needed it the most...
Mich....((HUGS)) You know how much I value our new friendship :) You are one special, gentle and inspiring soul. Keep being you - I am touched my poem touched you. Thank you for letting me know - it means a lot to me. With best wishes, Sunbeam xoxo
Hey you!! :) Well, thank you, kind sir :) It was hard to write that one - came out easily - just kind of upsetting. You know how I like to stay 'sunny'....:)
Thank you Jill for sharing this beautiful poem with me. I think such moments appear more than once in a live and then we should never forget that we are not alone and God helps us on our way and we can always share his love...thanks.
Thanks this hasbeen added to our playlists, thanks....
PoetryETrain 5 months ago
Sad but lovely!
TeresaSemenuk 1 year ago
You are tuned to a beautiful channel and I found this so beautiful. There was a time long ago when it would have helped me go on and I am sure it will help many who are in a place like I used to be. Thank you
HeraldSunshine 2 years ago
Hello :) Thank you for such a beautiful comment. I understand completely and indeed, feel I could only write and post this poem, as I am on the other side of that 'place' too now. I appreciate you stopping by. With kind wishes, Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 2 years ago
Very emotional & simply Superb
A truly beautiful poem x x
WAVE119119 2 years ago 2
Thank you! I have so enjoyed sharing this delicate little poem with so many here on YT. I appreciate you stopping by and listening :) Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 2 years ago
so beautiful
reliablebow 2 years ago 2
Thank you! It came straight from my heart :) Welcome to my Channel :)
Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 2 years ago
It's beautiful.
BigPrairieDude 3 years ago 2
Thank you!! :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
i love it
loveyourposture 3 years ago 2
Thank you sir - I hope you are having a good week :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Another amazing piece of work.
Your imagery was amazing and so inspiring. I love how you captured the innocence of a pure heart with young children. Thats very touching and emotional. Very beautiful poem.
One of my favourites.
ChuckEssential 3 years ago 2
Hi Chuck :) I am honoured you like this one. It was quite emotional to write as it flew in to me. Thanks for listening :)
Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Very nice Jill. It makes me think of the dependence we have on our mums, and how some of us yearn for that support our entire lives, but that at some point it's not possible anymore. Where are we without our moms? What a huge void to fill. Is there be any larger void to fill in our entire lives? :)
FrancisRidley 3 years ago 2
Hi :) I think that sooner or later we have to become our own parents and that happens differently for each person, if they recognise it at all!....Ultimately, only we can fill anything we perceive as a void in our lives - no other person can. Just my opinion of course!! :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Wow! That is a progressive concept for someone like myself, but it makes perfect sense and something for me to think about and work toward. Thank you once again for some valuable insight. :)
FrancisRidley 3 years ago 2
So touching!
Danny
JusRay718 3 years ago 2
Thank you!! :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
I like the way that you have expressed yourself in this video poem. Wonderful usage of photos of the child - and yourself. I feel that you have an innate ability to pour forth your talents through this format. It will be interesting to watch your future pieces. I hope that your audience grows over time and that your movies touch the lives of many people.
peterswoorld 3 years ago 2
Hello again :)TY for such a kind comment...I am working on getting my poems published - that way I can touch more hearts, I hope :)
Thank you for watching :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
This made me cry. :) beautiful. My mom is a single parent and I remember saying these types of things to her whenever things wouldn't work out just as planned. 5 stars. lovely
MahinaSinger 3 years ago 2
MahinaSinger: Hello again :) Your comment is so very touching and wonderful feedback for me. Thank you.
I feel this poem was born out of my own experiences growing up and since I myself became a mum. It was very healing to write somehow and I am just delighted seeing it touches others too. Thank you so much for your support and comment!!
Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
This is very beautiful ! You sure write from your heart ! 5 stars
Cliffbrock 3 years ago 2
Cliffbrock: Hello again :) TY very much - yes I do! Really appreciate your stopping by! Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
What strikes me most is the idea of a child feeling some need to return the loving kindness her mother has shown in a time of crisis, an awareness that they are connected. This is the essence of humanity in a nutshell.
leftysergeant 3 years ago 2
Hello again :) TY for such a thoughtful and sensitive comment. I hope you are doing well! Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
This is lovely and rather melancholy.
I hope you don't mind. But I wanted to post one of my videos as a response. favourated anyhow :o)
ellyunfortunetly 3 years ago 2
Hello :) Thank you. I didnt think your poem related to this one so removed it as a video response - but thank you for favouriting this poem. All the best. Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
quelle magnifique vidéo un vrai plaisir kisssssss
kestellekif 3 years ago 2
kestellekif: Merci beaucoup!! :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
excellent!
lelouchemile 3 years ago 2
lelouchemile: Thank you so much!! Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Awe, this is such a touching poem...and oh so true. On the rare occassion that I did show that I was upset about something, my kids were full of hugs and concern. Instant cure! Thanks for your beautiful poety!
Hugs
Karen
oldiesedit 3 years ago 2
Hi Karen :) Am so glad you liked this. Yes - being a mum and still being human about our own sorrows is a delicate balancing act. TY so much for watching and commenting. Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
This is so lovely...tnx for great poem! :)
ladydawn1973 3 years ago 2
Hello :) Thanks very much for watching and taking the time to comment! Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
hey just wanted to say great poem i loved it xxxxxxxxxxx
beckyangel2008 3 years ago 2
Hello :) Thank you so much for stopping by here. I am so glad you enjoyed this poem!! With best wishes, Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
WOW!! This poem is very sad. It seems like the parent was having a breakdown which forced the child to grow up too soon and worry about mummy. Children shouldn't worry about anything. Very heart-felt!
Shane
ripper778 3 years ago 2
Hi Shane :) Great to see you! I am off to Ontario on Thursday...so exciting!! I thought about your snowy video! Luckily I guess it wont be like the next few weeks :)
Yes on the poem - it is sad in that way. My original title for this was 'old too soon'. Children shouldnt have to worry about such things - but life is often very REAL and situations not those Happy Ever Afters etc. This poem was cracking open that idea and shining a light on those I see as sometimes hidden, 'invisible angels'.
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Some of the best creative ideas "fly in" ... there's a sense of sponteneity and the ideas flow.
It's a gift I've never really been able to master and I admire those who can.
5* for a beautiful, touching poem.
LittleMickyFingers2 3 years ago 2
LittleMickyFingers2: Hello again :) Thank you very much for stopping by. Creativity is a magical thing and we all seem to have our own paths with it somehow. TY for such a supportive comment! Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
beautiful!
amccann7 3 years ago
Thank you!! :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
My Father told me, long ago, that most of peoples' misery is self inflicted. That poor decisions, lack of planing, and laziness was the root problem. BUT~ there is another side..the children who are caught in the mess adults create. Beautiful poem, and sweet pictures in the video.
moondogg55 3 years ago
gogrillz 3 years ago
In a while crocodile....lol
Remember you can just post one - and then another and then another - you dont have to do loads - one or two are a perfect start!
With best wishes to you today!! :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
The first part made my eyes water, with the sad girl pictures! Sunbeam, your poems touch hearts!
Hurry up and write that poem book!
You have fans waiting!
Lol, My cat is watching me type! Her name is Buttercup, and she says "Hello!!"
-S. :D
gogrillz 3 years ago
Aww..thank you. Now, young lady, I have some news coming soon about getting a first poem published...and I am working on getting things set up for my first poetry book. It will happen and YT people will probably be some of the first to know :) Thanks for all your support and encouragement!
And Buttercup is the most wonderful name for a cat :) I have my new kitten Sammy on my lap and he is sleeping so cant say 'hello' back but I am sure he would if he could :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Very heart felt poem. Love it
christopherinsc1981 3 years ago
Hi :) Oh - I am glad you got into a few...lol..Sometimes YT plays up etc....Yes - this is a very personal one - inspired by both my own childhood and raising a son alone - plus just life generally!! Thanks for watching! Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
This moved me to tears... it's beautiful.
rutlegirl 3 years ago
Hello :) Thanks so much for stopping by and watching. Tears are always healing in one way or another. I am so glad it moved you in some way - you inspire me with your beautiful videos...I may post that 'Flowers in Her Hair' poem one day!! :)
Have a wonderful Wednesday! Love Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Yes, they are very healing...I thank you for it and for your beautiful poems.
I would love to hear the 'Flowers In Her Hair' poem, I hope you do post it :)
Thank you, have a beautiful sunshine day!
rutlegirl 3 years ago
That is a sad poem.. I hope I never make my daughter feel that way. The way that she'd have to look after me and make me feel good. I always try my best, no matter what, to put on a happy face for her..
Great poem though. I really like it..
Wendy
PoohBear02003 3 years ago
Hi Wendy :) Yes - it is sad in a way. Sometimes life can be tough, I guess and things happen people don't expect and they end up in situations where they can't always be as strong as they set out to be.
Thank you so much for watching and adding your perspective though - I really enjoyed reading it and you gave me more food for thought - maybe another poem will come out of that one of these days!! :)
Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
This is really lovely thank you for posting
I have just added it to my favourites
km1951 3 years ago
Hello :) Thank you so much for your feedback - it truly means a lot to me. And for adding this poem to your favourites....I am honoured!! Here's wishing you a wonderful day!! Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Wow...Jill,you are an angel.
This really touched my heart.
~BJ~
smileyface83 3 years ago
Hi BJ :)
You saw me, huh?...lol...I am so glad you liked it. Thank you for taking the time to watch it and let it move you in some way :)
Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
This is just so beautiful. Thank you for posting. 5*****'s
broncose1 3 years ago
Hello!! Welcome to my Channel :) Thank you so much for taking the time to watch, comment and star rate - much appreciated!! With kindest wishes, Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Just SUPER!! to my favorites!!
oldcountrytunes 3 years ago
Hello again!!! Thank you so much!! Am very pleased you liked it. This was quite a hard one to share on here for some reason - but am so glad I did - many people seem to have got something from it - which is just GREAT!!...With best wishes, Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
really beautiful sunbeam!
Proshka 3 years ago
Hi beautiful lady!!! :) Thanks so much for watching! Have a great day!! Love Sunbeam xxoo
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
nicely done.
dmio2 3 years ago
Thank you kindly!! :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
When first we look into our children's eyes, we see there all the hope we ourselves see in life, yet unformed. It takes shape in like measure as the love and respect we also see in them. How important it is then that our eye be true to both ourselves and our children. You have painted such a tender portrait of the maternal bond, Sunbeam, where hope lives on, and is returned.
harleynanda 3 years ago
Beautiful comment, Michael - thank you. Being a parent is such a gift - more challenging than anything else, but more rewarding than anything else too, on so many levels.
Such is the path of the most beautiful life experiences of this world, methinks...Challenge/Reward...Sadness/Joy and so on...A big balancing act of extremes at times....Sigh. See where your comments take me?...lol...Off flying on tangents!! :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Then by all means, give voice to that tangent. I hear another verse in the making!
harleynanda 3 years ago
insightful.
clayLavl 3 years ago
Hi!! Thanks for taking the time to watch and comment :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
This is really wonderful - it is amazing how children have the capacity to take care of us when we feel week:) Loved it!
Dave:)
TrentDonovan 3 years ago
Hi Dave :) Thanks for stopping by. Yes - I agree. Children and parents can be a real team often, especially when times get tough. Glad you liked it! Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Nice poem and nice reading...very melancholy
purefilmphoto 3 years ago
Hi Teddy! Yes - it is a little melancholy in parts! Thanks very much for watching and commenting! Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Wow, this is beautiful!!
AliasSpecWriter 3 years ago
Thank you :) When I just listened to your whispered poem / monologue - it reminded me a little of when I recorded this and had to 'get in character'...:) Isn't it wonderful how much we can all explore and create through poetry?...Thanks so much for stopping by! Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
WOW, Dear Jill, you have the Heart of an Angel! :)
5***** and sub for me!
CHEERS
ifxman 3 years ago
Shush sir...don't tell everyone my secrets ;)....
Thanks very much for the stars etc - much appreciated!! With kindest wishes to you today, Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Hello NWM!! Lovely to see you :) Thank you for watching and commenting. It came from a very soft place this one, I think....Sunbeam xoxo
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Maravilloso poema, bellamente ilustrado por hermosas imágenes, creando una simbiosis perfecta.
Enhorabuena.
Saludos cordiales, José Luis León (Arpista)
arpajlleon 3 years ago
Hola! Muchas gracias por un comentario tan amable. Es mucho apreciado. Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Sunbeam - I really enjoyed this - the music, words and imagery complement each other very nicely.
kansaslo 3 years ago
Hi Ken :) Thank you very much for watching and commenting - much appreciated. So glad you enjoyed it!! Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
the love and strengh that is shared in the holding of a hand illustrated beautifully
1imageofme 3 years ago
Hello :) Yes - holding a hand when someone needs it can make them feel immeasurably better somehow :)
Thanks for stopping by and listening to one of my poems :) Glad to see you are around the database again...that really is a wonderful resource for us all to share and find each other - thank you for that!! Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
im honoured =) its out there and breathing and with any luck it will continue to grow for the benefit of of all those interested in poetry. its a pleasure hearing the work submitted
1imageofme 3 years ago
this is just lovely....so nice the way u did this.
kudos!
michael
mettanc 3 years ago
Hi Michael :) Thank you for watching - so glad you liked it...With best wishes, Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
The strength a mother has is something we all take for granted until one day she needs strength. I remember how strong my mother was and I also remember the day she needed someone. It broke my heart but I also gained an appreciation for one of the greatest gifts in life and that is a strong, loving mother!
Great poem!!
kermi1072 3 years ago
Hi Brad :) Thanks for watching and sharing what thoughts it brought up for you. It sounds like you have been blessed with your mum, as we all are, I think, in some way or another. Thanks for watching and commenting! Sunbeam xoxo
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Hi,Another great Poem straight from your heart, as we all can tell! You truly have an incredible way with words Jill! Such brilliant and clear pictures of the child at different stages just added to such an emotional Poem! In societies all over the world as we all know "Single Parenthood" is abundant an so are the trials and tribulations that go with that vast responsibility! Thanks for sharing. Ethan.
icast4majors 3 years ago
Hello Ethan!! Lovely to see you :) Thank you for your feedback.
Adults can find themselves alone with the responsibility for a child/children for all sorts of reasons. That can be so isolating at times - I guess that is what I was trying to capture a little here. Also, people can become 'invisible' in our societies in all sorts of ways as well - this being but one, I guess.
Really appreciated you stopping by, sir :)
With best wishes, Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
This one felt like it came from a very personal place. I know that can be a little uncomfortable to share but by the looks of the comments many people really connected with your feelings. Thanks for sharing Sunbeam!
dr1ve1 3 years ago
Hi Rob :) This one just shot at me like a thunderbolt while I was working on something entirely different!! Sometimes these poems have a mind of their own!! Thanks for stopping by - lovely to see you, as always :) Sunbeam xoxo
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
As a former single mom, I can vouch for the truth of this poem. Being alone together in this way can be a terrifying and daunting ordeal, and you have captured these feelings very accurately.
As you have so perceptively portrayed, sometimes the child takes courage from the parent, and other times, the parent gains courage from the child. Somehow, you make it through, together. Beautiful words and lovely thoughts here.
nllleonard 3 years ago
Hello Nancy :) 'Terrifying' - that really is a great word here to describe how some of the moments in this situation can be...both for parent and child. But also so are the notions of 'gaining courage' from each other and 'making it through'. Somehow that happens!! Thank you for expressing identifying in some way with this poem - much appreciated. Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
A lovely poem - it states the delicate battle of strength and weakness as a parent. Often, we struggle to shield our "angels" of heart-ache and fear. This poem captures the emotion of that struggle nicely.
MsWriteNow 3 years ago
Hi Tina :)Thanks for stopping by and watching!! Yes - hard to get the balance right...if there even is a 'right' in these things!! :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Such an emotional piece. The images... are so vivid. I've often wished to write something so emotional. I tend to be one step back from most of my poems.
thefetusboy 3 years ago
Hi Steve! Interesting...sometimes I wish I could be more 'detached'. I seem to most times write about things so close to my heart in some way, my heart 'cracks open' a little more with each creation.
Detachment and emotional involvement - such a delicate balance for us in our poetry!! Sunbeam xoxo
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
This has so so much, to view this once would not be enough..this goes beyond the editng and spoken words.
my friends. our hats are off.
you have our admiration, love and respect.
thanks for sharing. all our brightest stars.
sincer
mike [ i c o E
Celebbb 3 years ago
Thank you for coming back for more...lol!! Really glad you liked what you found here. With kindest wishes to you today, Sunbeam :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Wonderful SunBeam thankyou for this beautiful poem xoxoxoxox soft light always close upon you :)
EnchantinGoddessSoul 3 years ago
Hello :) Thank you for your kind comment and wishes. You always add more peace to my day. ((HUGS)) Sunbeam xoxo
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Hey Sunny:) Wow another beautiful poem by a Sunbeam. I always know when I read one of your poems or as in the case now, hear you read them my heart will be touched in some way. Thank you my friend, I look forward to your next one.
Ron/Wyo
3616297058 3 years ago
Hi Ron :)Thanks for stopping by and your comment!! Always great to see you :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Wow It's like a little movie. Very beautiful. Thanks*****
yogaduke 3 years ago
Hiya Duke :) Thanks for your comment - glad you liked it!! xoxo
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
What a beautiful poem..I can't wait to hear your others..:) Thank you..:)
shadow6326 3 years ago
Hello Eva!! Thank you for stopping by - lovely to see you here :) Glad you liked my poem!! Sunbeam xoxo
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
what a great work, words and vid .. all too real
mel.
encinitasmel 3 years ago
Hi Mel!! Thank you kindly, sir :) Lovely to see you - hope you're feeling better :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Thank you i am ... "it lives" :))
encinitasmel 3 years ago
oh man!what a wonderful poem!i love this.someone should turn it into a song
coolanddark 3 years ago
Hello sir:) Welcome to my Channel :) Now - what a great idea....!! I am up for collaborations - so maybe the music muse will strike you - if so, email me!! :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Very good poem, and it does seem that's what happens the children consoling the adults!
5 stars *****Jane
Cameragirl803 3 years ago
Hi Jane! Thanks! Yes - it can be like that - things can seem a lot more straightforward from a child's point of view - that can help! Lovely to see you :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Wow Sunbeam this is such a touching poem! Your poetry has a beauty that is so unique to your style! I just really love this one and the way that you use a child's perspective really makes it what it is! Fantastic job once again and another 5 stars from me my friend, Tamara xxxx
RossiSinger 3 years ago
Hi Tamara : Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving such a wonderful comment! With best wishes to you today!! Sunbeam xoxo
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
You are more than welcome, this video is great! Tamara xx
RossiSinger 3 years ago
Oh Sunbeam a charming poem. I have no children, but a borrowed grandchild. This said so almost this resembles one year ago to me when my husband separated from me. Your poem touches my heart very much.
Love and warm hus to you my dear friend
fariethesun 3 years ago
Hello Heidi! What a lovely start to my day to see you :) Thank you for your comment. I feel honoured that my words have touched you in some way :) (((HUGS))Sunbeam xoxo
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Hi Sunbeam, a really good reading voice and the photographs of the children were so moving. When a child asked if we're going to lose the house, I'm reminded of many good people losing their homes here in the U.S. , a neighbor right across from us for example. I like your putting the words up. You write deeply moving poetry. Thanks so much. Frank, a newer subscriber.
fechmb0749 3 years ago
Frank - How great to see you :) Yes - losing their home is a real fear for many children in a variety of situations. One that it is so hard for a young mind to cope with.
Thank you for your feedback on my poetry - it means a lot to me. Warm welcome into my sub 'family'. Love Sunbeam xoxo
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
That was really wonderful, Jill. Lovely images you put with your words too. You've got so many suubscribers now! I knew you wouldn't remain a secret for long! (((hugs)))
ravensky23 3 years ago
Hello my friend xx Yes - they are climbing! I am so grateful for the wonderful souls here that enjoy the poems - I couldnt wish for better feedback. I see yours have gone along well too since I hit the button at the 100 point! Wonderful! Lovely to see you :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
extremely well done BRAVO awesome
refici222 3 years ago
Hello :) Welcome to my Channel!! Really glad you liked it so!! With best wishes, Sunbeam xoxo
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
did you know that their really are invisible angels,that can appear to us occasionally?
refici222 3 years ago
Hello :) Yes - I do...I called the poem this as I felt mothers and children in these situations are often 'angels' to each other and in the world in a way no one else sees...'invisible' to the outside world - isolated. But I agree - there are the other kind of invisible angels too!! :) Sunbeam xoxo
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
well you inspried me to creat a song about invisible angels due out soon thank you for the inspitation
refici222 3 years ago
A child supported and loved, is a child who returns in support and love . . .
BL*M
PeaceProfit 3 years ago
Hello :) I was just thinking about you and your Channel the other day - I will pop over soon. What a beautiful comment. Although sad in one way, I guess I had a sense of the love that must have gone into that child from the mother for her to be able to return it so - thanks for sensing that in some way :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
That's a sweet lovely poem!
Moving and strong
*****
xoxo
Mary
MaryAsinger 3 years ago
Hi Mary :) Great to see you xx Thanks for watching - much appreciated!! Sunbeam xoxo
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
A lovely and sensitive poem, Jill, wonderful!
Roeleke
Twirretwarre 3 years ago
Hi Roeleke - Lovely to see you :) Thank you very much for your comment! Sunbeam xoxo
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
very sincere with deep thought, this demands the viewers attention. very well done
many stars, the film footage talks volumes.
mike [ i c oE
Celebbb 3 years ago
Hi :)Thank you for watching and your comment. I'm really finding how much the visuals can enhance poetry - it's a wonderful opportunity on here to bring the poem to life more...With best wishes, Sunbeam xoxo
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Touching, loved it.
ScrewTime 3 years ago
Hi Michael :) So great to see you on my comments :) Thanks for taking the time to watch - have a great evening! Sunbeam xoxo
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
What you've beautifuly illustrated and sequenced here, is probably a thing that happens in many children's mind every day.. Young and vulnerable, they often keep it inside however, and then it takes many years for those lacks, to get on surface.
The title let us hope that obviously; we'll make it through(parents and childrens)
Thanks for sharing, :)
Phil
Erphilfarry 3 years ago
Hi Phil :) Lovely to see you, my friend...I need to pop over and listen to you singing before I head to bed...:) I love visiting your Channel!!
Anyways, thank you for your comments. I guess more people can relate to these words in some way or other than I thought. Comments like yours make me very glad I posted this poem. Thank you for taking the time to watch and share your thoughts.
With best wishes, Sunbeam xoxo
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
You're very welcome ;)
Have an awesome weekend,
Phil
Erphilfarry 3 years ago
POWERFUL POEM!!!
Our innerChild may speak to us like this at times?
Thanks Jill!!!
JaiMaJames 3 years ago 2
Hello...Welcome to my Channel :)
Yes - I think you are right...such poems can be healing on the inside and the outside :) Thank you for sharing that thought. Sunbeam xoxo
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Hi Sunbeam. This was very moving. I think everyone has felt this way as a child at one time or another, and a lot of us more intensely than others. It's a fine poem, and the images are very effective as well. Thanks, -Ron
rhopen 3 years ago 3
Hi Ron :) Yes, I agree...It is all part of life's rich tapestry, I guess. Thank you so much for stopping by and watching! Great to see you :) Sunbeam xoxo
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Excellent my sweet friend God bless! ~rajesh
hannahmontanarox3409 3 years ago 3
Hello Rajesh :) Lovely to see you...thank you for watching and commenting :)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Hi Jill, that was so touching.. yes, Someone is always watching over us, the little girl said it right. :)
Well done Sunbeam ! sending you lots of positive energy,
Best wishes,
Anindya.
InnocentMalin 3 years ago 2
Hi Anindya :) Thank you for watching and thanks for the great energy...back at ya ---> ((HUGS)) Have a wonderful day, sir xoxo
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
You truly are a sunbeam. Your words and sweet,soothing voice reach out to all who are lucky enough to breathe in your poetry.
magictricks3 3 years ago 2
Hi Delilah :)What a beautiful comment - you brought a tear to my eye. Thank you xx
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
SORRY i missed the first comment moment. I loved this video...you d wonders to poetry and poems. Fabulous job
shanethepoet 3 years ago 2
It's ok xx You are No 7 - that's not so far off :) Thanks for watching and commenting...You know how it makes me smile to hear from you...another penny well-earned ;)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
I don't know what to say about this.
Perhaps it's too close to my own experience, but you really captured the raw emotion.
I just love to hear you read your poems; your voice is so worldly yet soothing at the same time :)
Regards, Jack
lindapinda 3 years ago 3
Jack...It is always so lovely to see you :)I have come to really look fwd to your feedback! Thank you for your comment. Truly - it means a great deal to me to know you got something from listening to it :) Sunbeam xoxo
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Wonderful poem...
I was listening to it, and i suddenly dropped everything, crawled in front of the screen, took my pillow on my lap, hugged it, and silently listened to the whole poem again...
It really touched me, because I can so totally relate to it...
You've really touched me deeply, thank you, for those inspiring words.
Again, thank you... you posted this, just when I needed it the most...
michske86 3 years ago 3
Mich....((HUGS)) You know how much I value our new friendship :) You are one special, gentle and inspiring soul. Keep being you - I am touched my poem touched you. Thank you for letting me know - it means a lot to me. With best wishes, Sunbeam xoxo
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Beautiful and powerful, like someone I know
;-)
DaringDaveT1962 3 years ago 3
Hey you!! :) Well, thank you, kind sir :) It was hard to write that one - came out easily - just kind of upsetting. You know how I like to stay 'sunny'....:)
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Thank you Jill for sharing this beautiful poem with me. I think such moments appear more than once in a live and then we should never forget that we are not alone and God helps us on our way and we can always share his love...thanks.
Chris :o)
CNZ19 3 years ago 3
Hi Chris...Lovely to see you :)I agree with everything you said!! ((HUGS)) to you today xoxo
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
very veru beautiful, really sad, but nice written...
Rugbymania1986 3 years ago 3
Hello :) Thank you for watching! With kindest wishes, Sunbeam xoxo
xxxSunbeamxxx 3 years ago
Very powerful. I love the 'princess smiles'. :)
Sad, but there's a ray of hope at the end, like it should. Together is so much better than alone.
janeczka 3 years ago 2