A Wish
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From: rickyperson
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  • Just that one little thing... the ref to fighting Indians. I'm sure as they listened, they stopped. Careful what you wish.

  • good poem.

  • Ohhh that is very nice! And what a great message! :)

  • Hey Ricky!

    I'm still enjoying this video!!

    Cheers!

     -Bill

  • Hi ya, my creative friend!

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  • beautiful absolutely beautiful

  • Doobie doobie do lala.....Amazing...

  • wonderfull,,bravoo and thx,,you make my heart to feel alive,thx again

  • This is truly an AMAZING poem that you wrote, and the video that you created is SPECTACULAR as well! 5*'s.

    ~OrangeCaesar (Jules)

  • your poem is wonderfull..

    I like it, but i'm french so I don't understand all the poem =(

    so can somebody translate it in french ?

    Thank u a lot. <3

  • Hmm. I used to take french...but I don't think I'm good enough to do that. I can send you the english version if you'd like. That way you can translate it maybe.

    Thanks though for watching. =)

  • yes!! I'd like you to send me the english version !!! =)

    I will try to translate the poem ^^

    Thank you

    and once again, congratulation for this video!

  • This is a very thought provoking video. You are a talented writer and videophotographer.

  • Thanks! I appreciate that!

  • that my friend is so touchingly beautiful, and very true thankyou for sharing it with the masses

  • There's so much truth in this, Ricky. Even when we don't see its presence, that urgent drive to want more is always pushing us. It takes a truly enlightened individual to learn how to enjoy the present moment. And perhaps that enlightenment comes only by living an entire life of being driven to want more. I can't say; I have so many years yet to go.

  • So true. I have found that enjoying where you're at is a key. Even if Summer is your favorite season, you'd better learn to love Winter too.

    Reminds me a bit of Adam Sandler's movie "Click". No need want things to hurry up, life really moves at supersonic speed as it is.

  • Exactly!

  • simply great! and I love the wise you narrate...

  • What a powerful poem, beautiful, and so true.

  • pure, simple, meaningful....from a published poet, a forensic victory got me my varsity letter, reading my own poems at state comp. you are talented, and i am proud to call you friend right now.

  • talent alert!

  • Ricky, nice dude. this is so true to life. Very inspiring man. keep going with this idea.

    --Cam

    Stupid INC Productions

  • An homage to beauty and youth

  • Great poem! When my dad retired I remember him saying, "I still don't know what I want to be when I grow up." Thanks for bringing me back, Ricky!

  • Love this poem!

  • Thanks!

  • I loved the poem.Well done.

  • wow. nice reading. terrific poem...thanks for sending my way, 75cliffe.

  • Excellent Poem! Thanks for sharing this with us! Well-written and delivered!

    5 ☆☆☆☆☆!! Peace!~Ted

  • I'm back.

    I also wanted to say not only are you a good writer but you do a great job at reading it. You get us into your story.. Great poem great story...

    Wendy

  • I can't thank you enough for that. =)

  • wonderful rick i just loved this fantastic work love wee deborah sha sha xoxo ireland

  • Your awesome =)

    Thanks for watching. =)

  • Hahaha. That's funny. You know, the traditional cowboys v Indians. =P

    I wanted to be a policeman when I was little though! Haha

  • 5 star!

  • ur so deep & lovely!! xjoeyx

  • Thankyou Cherri for sharing, appreciated. Well Ricky, what a talented young poet! A lifestory in a poem. My respect to you, very well done! 5***** Be blessed young friend I will be watching for more!......Diane.

  • good stuff mate

  • very nice poem :)

    how long did it take you to to come up with it?

  • beautiful poem and fantastic footage

    xoexo

  • Ricky 5th revisit and I had to comment again: This poem is worthy of being published!! Again I say to one so young, you'll never have to wish, what to become. A writer, director, a poet you should be, you'll entertain million by the time your twenty three. (kinda corny...haha) but I think you've got the stuff. You're awesome dood!!! Gil =o)

  • Great poem Ricky!5*****

  • I am so surprised at the amount of comments I received in the last few hours! =o

    This is awesome. Thanks for sending it out =)

  • How beautiful!

  • Wonderful in every way! Fantastic poem! Wonderful video, perfect match! 5* and in my favouritslist!

    Thank you 75cliffe for sharing this video!

  • Followingmypath, I cant thank YOU enough for coming here to watch it and leaving such a lovely comment! Please keep in touch! =)

  • Isn't our friend, Ricky, something special? Thanks for sharing Ricky, Rosalind:)

  • Stunning and so true.

    thank you

  • very nice

  • Super poem, and a great lesson in there too! keep posting mate! ;)

  • Thank you so much Jane! =) Do you write poetry?

  • Yeah, I do! you can check out my channel, you might find something you like ;)

  • omg luvvv it!!!

  • Absolutely wonderful.

  • You did a great job on this!!!

  • very nice and good message!

  • Very touching poem and really rings true. A Wish is wonderful!

  • Beautiful Poem and Video

  • Thanks =)

  • Hey ricky I am impressed so much insight from a guy so young,  so very well narrated, you deserve more than a 5 , great video altogether,a remarkable work, and what a message to all of us , its true we are never happy always wanting more, we should be grateful for our plate as we have been given it , and live for the moment to the best of your lot.

  • Aw jeez, all these nice comments. I'm totally so happy right now. What a compliment, thank you so much. =D

  • great job!!! =)

  • dear ricky, with your youbg voice and surely age, your words are those of a wise old man. i still say, please wish, go on wishing and dreaming, and make most of them come true. thank you for the beautiful poem and video, and thanks to cherri for sharing it *****

  • Hey Ricky :) Beautiful poem and vid to go with it. An excellent reminder of the need to stay in the present and enjoy what we have here and now as we journey through life. Sunbeam :)

  • This is awesome video :) Thanks for uploading this :)

  • Such a beautiful poem and so well narrated, thank you for sharing it with me.

  • Your poems are always very well written. Also your voice is awesome it matches your poem readings perfectly.

  • spoken very well, your ability to draw the viewer's interest is awesome.

    this footage is very nice...love the back audio

    many stars

    meriah[ i c o E

  • Awesome poem!

  • not a big poem kind of dude...but this was pretty cool!...apeman was here & enjoyed...peace

  • Your welcome David. Way to beautiful not to share!! :0)

  • I can't thank you enough. :)

  • I just really have to thank everyone who sent this video out to their contacts.I really don't think I know everyone who did (because not everyone is my contact), but you don't know how much of a compliment it really is. I've sent out personal thank yous.

  • Rickey..this is amazing my friend..it gave me chills the whole time I was listening to it,let's us not wish our life away,but instead live it day to day!!

    This is Awesome!!

    Thanks David(dlpine)for sharing!!

    5*'s and fav'd.

    ~BJ~

  • Aw thanks! =)

  • you have wowed me again ricky. Awesome poem. You seem wise beyond your years.

  • Beautiful Poem!

    You are so talented!

  • Great going once again Ricky :) I love it Good pacing, meter in the reading of the poem... the visuals serve to keep the eyes busy while you listen without distracting from the poem itself.

  • YOU HAVE A GIFT! What a wonderful poem.  You are a great writter. This is going on my favorites. Thank you so much for sharing this!

    Huggs

    B-)

  • Beautiful Ricky!!!! 5 stars

    Yvonne,Bob and Kazandra

    Ava,Illinois

  • Very good job. You are a great writer.

  • Truly exceptional in every way! From the poem, the reading, the music and the visuals! 5*****

  • wow this poems is soooo nice and beautifull ur soo good @ this stuff!♥

  • very cool poetry!!! you're so cool, cowboy!!!

  • In oh so many words,your poem has hit the mark. I wish only to be a poet, who writes with Ricky Pearson's Heart.

    Great work. Vlogged it!!!

    Gil

  • OBAMA 08.

  • O O

     o Your poetry really is great ricky. And the music + footage = beautiful.

  • Terrific!!! 5*****

  • Outstanding, it may be! Maybe from a fan you see. It's you that has the key, so maybe, outstanding it will be. For a fan I am you see and 5 stars it will be.

  • LOL. 4u2know, that was awesome. =)

  • Wow, this is a beautiful video! Great poem

    God bless

    In Faith, Amanda

  • nice man

  • This is amazing!! You have a gift!! I love it!!

    5*****

  • Wow - fantastic. Something for all of us to think about.

    There are a lot of creative competitions floating around YT. This should be in them.

  • What a wonderful video, what a wonderful poem, you must be a wonderful person to have such insight at your young age! :) Jack

  • OMG! It's good! You Got Talent composing poem! Later i'll send you mine! Keep it up! God Bless!!

  • OMG ! I dont know what to say! Fantastic Ricky! Im sharing this one. WOW! :D

  • You're going to share it? Thank you so much!

  • I already have and your Welcome! Super Job!

  • loveeely

    *****

  • Respect!

    Love

    CDmagz

  • Wow... man that's excellent!! -Bill

  • Ricky .. that was exceptional!!!

  • Brilliant - absolutely brilliant my friend!!!

    Dave:)

  • I'm...nearly speechless. How could one so young have gotten it so right?! May I have a copy of your poem?

  • I might post the words on the side in a little bit. =)

  • Thank you so much muzical. You rock. I have other poems on my page, too.

  • excellent man.

    -absolutely exellent.

    nice video footage and a great poem.

    c ya soon,

    XEM

  • As John Lennon said: Life is what happens when your busy making other plans.

  • That's an awesome quote.

  • beautyfully ;o)

    Hugs, Irene

  • Your composition is beautifully written and heartfelt. The video is wonderfully done, however; your narration creates a spellbinding visual all its own. Thank you for sharing this brilliant work of art.

  • This is just great and super

  • Rick, that was just beautiful. Just beautiful beyond your years. I wanted to be an astronaut, I married at 38, I inherited two kids, who went to college, and I turn 50 this year. I am happy to say I have not wished my life away, and by best years have both already been spent, and are yet to come! What a heart you have! Beautiful footage, beautiful poem. Just beautiful. Take your own advice, young man.

  • What a remarkable talent you possess!!!

    I do hope you will continue to write as this is excellent!!

    You have a great speaking voice as well.

    Bravo!! Well done!

    Heart hugs~Nancy

  • hi bro,

    that was really agreat poem.that happens to people alot.i know of a few that did that very thing.they just wished and never got any where,didn't have any thing or any one.

    they wasted there lives.don't waste yours,stay in school get a good job,be somebody.you rock.

    later bro.

    patrick.

  • cool

  • That was so beautiful. I loved the azeleas,

    it looked like Virginia. Your poem was

    beautiful and I hope you do have a happy life.

    Thanks for sending,

    joanie

  • Very good poem!! Your speed/flow were perfect!!

    Can't wait to hear more, seriously!! 5*****/in my faves!!

  • 5 STAR!

  • nice love it!

  • you do a good job, ricky.

    very nice.

    you read, write and express these beautifully.

  • rickyperson..if you wrote this poem, great stuff, if not...your wording of it is just as great...the lyrics generate so much interest.

    your film footage is most fitting.

    many stars.

    meriah[ i c o E

  • Yup, I did write it. Thank you. =)

  • Ok, great poem. Seriously.

  • Thank you very much.

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