rand0l - Closer To My Dreams Remix

[rodgely1]

I was sent a message about this and I was gonna reply and accidentally hit the delete button, but this video,s pretty good to me.

[Superzavin327]

pretty good.....

[sharlyboy2020]

good...



[OfficialCMO]

Nice check me out man

[MsCidon]

i liked keep going youll get there;)

[NOV3LTY]

You need to work on how you deliver..

[adanse360]

keep going

[TheRetana14]

Nice man

[x3Krissyx3Rocksx3]

Yew are ahmazing definitely keep it up! Remember everyone has to have criticism just means you're doing a good job at what yew do :)

xoxo Krissy

[mystictwilightfanme]

to be honest thers thousands of wanna-be-rappers out there n ther eint nothing special bout u...dnt get me wrong ur good...but theres nothing i havent heard before...

[TEEUNIT360]

Very nice all i can say you can flow keep it up..i sub 

[BabieeBlinnx2792]

Awesone xD Aha Thats Pretty Awesome :D

[fm01tt01]

ull make it. N ILL C U THERE OKAY XD im also working but not to be a rapper. i send demos to funimation and pray and cross my fingers every day ill be there as a voice actress every day. ill give u my luck and people can get any were in life if they really want to, so u will

[246schoolgal246]

Awesome! x

[PNI8799]

keep it up homie...u'l get there

[draussie]

Sorry not into Rap, but the tones are sweet :)

[Cicily121]

wow! ur so GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO­OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!! XD i better heard u on the radio!

thumbs up if u wanna hear him on the radio!

[saphiremoon230]

i like it thank you for sharing it with me. keep it up your good fuck the haters

[WhoAmI215]

nice man.. its good to know that people out there r chasin there dreams no matter the age..

[1Mousiie4]

I liked it.

[miranda0708nj]

To the people who talk down this great video.. your insecurities mean nothing! Really i know you wish u had the same talent but its ok some people just dont have it and Rand0l does! Cool?

[vabeatsonthenet]

.nice vibe..these haters need to go back to making game vids

[ThissIsMyUserName123]

Omg , your actually pretty good 

[kweezish]

its alright i geuss :/

[SmileFuckersF0rCamra]

I don't like nigger music.

[Nixom1334]

little short, but I like it

[TheSolidMind]

You wont be famous, you will be a stupid crack head bum laying on the streets.

[MyDeletedVideos]

Blazing Hot! Thumbs Up!

[lycox]

Fairly decent.

[skit11105]

keep working BROSKIE!!!!

[TheGlammqueen]

You look like my cousin, LMAO

[TaniquaBabesxx]

thats brilliant :) you're really good at rapping :) did you put that music together all by yourself??

[ricebowls101]

Nice but your speech is lifeless it is your early work though imma keep watching

[HMusikk208]

Your pretty chill ... Im 16 too . Check me out ! [[: Wont let you down. GO!! Click !! :P

[CaliMadeDoll]

^.^ Onee Yuhhh is Cue .

Two , i like it . but needs more life to it , <3

Not hatting ima subscribe

[poetsprophet73]

Take a minute to hear my poetry. I will greatly appreciate it.

Peace N Luv

-Phenomenal

[poetsprophet73]

Needs more energy. If you sound the dead, then the audience will be dead. They follow you. Also, ALWAYS MEMORIZE YOUR WORDS. You can develop better delivery and you will develop character

[eli98preiss]

I LIKE IT <3<3<3

[SuperVikingsbeast]

you cant lip sing at all

[MrDBrown25]

why is the focus on the phone who cares! keep doing you bro good shit

[Tacos2332]

sound happier :D but other then that i like! also smile ya know? its a dope song so put attitude in(: can you check out my vid also? thanx in advance!

[mizakzee]

1) Always memorize your lyrics (for future reference)

2) Your voice seemed to drone especially towards the last few bars. Remember, it's not just what you say, but how you say it. If you need to change the lyrics a few times to make them sound better when you animate them, then do it. It will pay off. You don't need 100 okay songs, 10 amazing songs would make a better album.

3) Also, get more into the lyrics. Practice this one song a bunch of times if you like it. And you will be animated.

[poetsprophet73]

@mizakzee

I told him the same. Constructive material is always needed..no matter how professional one is. Take a minute to listen to my poetry. Thank you

-Phenomenal

[JDMvsADM]

sumnliiii give the kid props

[rowevans13]

i like it its good

[MrCrazyc23]

its iight, but u sound as if u are reading..this is a heart felt type song, so u have to approach the song as if your talking to somebody. and when ur talking to somebody u dont sound like ur reading. you also want the listener to relate to you and what you stand for. if this is a hobby for you, i would say its cool, but if ur trying to do this to get noticed. then you have a long way to go! mainly work on your delivery and approach to the mic! just my thoughts hommie from a rapper to another.

[MsNicole2413]

nice not bad bro but try raping from more your heart don't try to make your voice something its not :) i think your super cute and you have some really good talent so keep it up :) i already subscribed :)

[LOST777ANGEL]

your awesome :)

[LilLobo21]

eyy mayn first off u mexican? anyways u sound a lil like Don Cisco just sayin mayn

[SmileyTatyful]

(:

[babythenumber1]

nice

[zzHBKzz]

Lol. Aight, well good bro. Good luck

[AMAZINJOKER24]

But it was good shit bro.

[AMAZINJOKER24]

Bro, honestly gotta lay off on the autotune. U gotta spitt with ur normal vocals. 2nd try not to copy rappers now a days that read off there phone, last fix up ur syllables

[rand0lTv]

@AMAZINJOKER24 ight bro im just gonna clear this up so people dont get the wrong idea. 1st there is no autotune on this none at all. 2nd i read off my phone because its better to do that then to write it on paper, and its more convenient, 3rd this was like the first song i released, the stuff thats going to be on the mixtape is going to be 100x better but anyways, thanks

[DreCope]

@rand0lTv my bad it took me forever to check this out....! I like it man - considering this is bout' 3 months old now I'm sure you got way better send me something else... keep up the good work, be sure to send some feedback on a few of my songs while you at it!

[8322036123]

@rand0lTv hey you kinda remind me of this rapper...i dont think you know him his name is lil crazed you should listen to his raping its really good. and so is yours !

[rand0lTv]

@8322036123 Yeah i know who lil crazed is lol But thanks! i appreciate it!

[Jplicit]

@8322036123 There is no resemblance.. need to work on how to compare/contrast. No offense Rand0l, Lil Crazed has been in the game for many years and his experience and flow is up on the chart, and you're not quite there yet. Yes, I know you're gonna combat me by saying that you're just starting.. good for you, I already put that into consideration.

[x0ska8rgirl0x]

@8322036123 love lil crazed :P

[emill40]

@rand0lTv

Fuck off no autotune

[BloodSpear316]

@rand0lTv it does sound like auto tune tbh but I think its your mic though but everything else wuz good.

[YungRay06]

Who cares if he's readin from his phone? The vid never said it was a freestyle. This is good man im likin the flow keep up the good work

[BlackMagic2703]

wicked tune...

[Vannah4561]

cool :D

[Jasonswag1995]

its not really the voice being the problem just the flow is ,....well weak



[corruptsolja]

u dont have the voice for it

[t061793]

hey you good...but i just wanna help you out...your lyrics are good but sometimes it just doesnt flow together well..i think you might have to cut some out or just add lil words here and there...and your voice needs to have more emotion to it when you rapping...js. you dont have to take it to consideration...but you pretty aight though...

[floreance]

Sounds good keep up the good work

[David2sickGutierrez]

Not bad keep goin ull only get bttr wit time

[xboxgirl22]

not 2 bad 4 sure hes pretty mint :)) keep up da raping ur pretty good at er ☺

[cooke890]

Great video, lyrics, and voice! Keep it up man!

[123greenhouse]

GO ON MY PAGE I HAVE THE BEST FREESTYLE TO THIS ON YOUTUBE

[NerdyNub]

^_^

[2biggkills]

dang dawg, potential written all over it, props.. btw where you stay at?.

[DakotaHillrapping]

Nice lyrics bro hey im a rapper to im coming out with more stuff just trying to get the producing and all that stuff but i meean alot if you tell people about me and all that i will do the same for you andn keep going for your dream man never stop

[6399juany]

HEY SUENA BIEN ..SOBRE TODO EL INCIO ME GUSTO MUCHO PERO DURA MUY POCO.!!:/

[reddragon500]

a man this is fye keep it up hommie and I love this song real talk

[SuSu19955]

This is really good keep it up :)

[britishvietnamese]

good stuff man! keep ya head up. youl be famous in no time

[sammy73211]

cool man keep it up

[ChaoticMatters]

pretty good

[BboyLonely25]

Not bad

[kieshaunyoungblood]

good shit bro , check ma trackz out

[likeDennis]

Nice one ;) !!!

[whiteknight1000able]

nice thumps ups dont hate

[willxxxlife]

this song is ill

[LucilleRose66]

Practice makes perfect! Don't let all the haters get to you! ^.^

[BRUTE4THELOSE]

Sounds like u can't breath, keep practicin' on that,



[BigBDizzle]

Bad.... NEVER inbox me a fucking song again

[blablayoyo100]

nice



[AdnanIsForeverAbbasi]

Acutely sloppy...but all in all it's good (: keep it up man!

[robertothejoker]

hey not bad at all man. keep it up. Maybe we could colaborate in the future.

[SuperTexasbeast]

Dude u were reading it from your phone

[rand0lTv]

@SuperTexasbeast yeah its not a freestyle or anything

[cooke890]

@SuperTexasbeast The Game read martians vs goblins off his phone when they recorded, what's the big deal?

[jakeTHEsnake809]

yo wat is this beat?

[bknoxy88]

yo good song bro, ima emcee also, check out some of my stuff!

[eg6allday1]

Good stuff yo keep at it. Kidd Craze

[blackchinachina2010]

I like it! Keep it up!

[mrsmilly12345]

good enough

[chelsdream4eva]

Your really good, juss be more energetic and powerful but other than that you nice :)

[IDancerKidd]

Sounds like ur regular talking put energy into it js.

[BlackBandanaFlyin]

Keep spittin' homie. I feel where you're comin' from.

[Dkw2431]

YOUR SO GOOD BRO

[zachviq]

Nice I like it

[olan88]

You can only get better. Great job

[leyvatron]

keep at it bro. Don't let nobody bring you down.  Living Legends beat.

[Differindividual]

You're good man. Keep it up.

[streethustler9229]

Not bad man. but ya memorize the lyrics next time it makes the video and u sound more confident ! Great job keep it up !!!

[dontcare696]

not the worst.

[xraidedlok]

bitten

[INDAHOUSE9999]

its pritty good tho

[DaddyRob04]

lyrics ok.. delivery needs to be more on point.. check out my page too G

[TheHDEnt]

Dido @truespit95

[truespitsince95]

Be more aggressive anybody can spit mad lyrics but it takes attitude to make u want to listen to someone ex:kreation she sucks but her spunk gives her an advantage

[VeanaMarie]

Nice..... but memorize your shit then rerecord it. you sound unsure and confidence is what your gonna need to keep goin forward since you already got the skillz....

[Xtuxo]

Thanks for sharing this with me (: good job..

[supradrift500]

thats tight A'f

[FrivolousShara]

I love the original song, pretty nice remix.

[DrewParks011]

good stuff just keep working hard ill be puttin up music soon so return that feedback.

[Storch04z]

more heart bro spit those lyrics out!

[shelby7936]

Tbh,,,You need a little bit more practice! Keep it up though.

[OFissoprestigious]

Swagg. Keep it up, and remember, ignorance is bliss. Don't go after the deal with the most money. Just do what makes you happy, signing to a contract wont achieve that.

[gilligan106]

Pretty good bro. Keep it up and be careful about falling into the traps that every young man faces! I'll pray for your success and safety! . . . Mr Archuleta is my name!

[TheSuperbrock11]

Omg this is so awesome u sound like a pro u rock

[StriDeR1217]

Its Koo I Like it! Great talent for ur age group. Be great if u finished it. u got my vote though

[swagiswhatigot]

niceeee.(;

[UOSPINOY]

THIS IS SHIT IS THE BOMBBBBB! NICE FLOWW MAN!

[deathtotheweak11]

great job bruh.

[kitty07227]

AWWWWSOMMMEEE XD

[JeffTmusic810]

good shit

[ShacklesENT]

goin ham bruh...

[LaShygurl10211]

Aww your so cute :D

and you got talent <3 i love it .

[dylanwaynescovel]

very nice man! props

[SandyIgnalski]

I loveeeeeeeee your Flow and yeah your are different to others =))

Loveeeee it why no full =)) ahaha

[PoeticAspekt]

i like that your flow is constant. Lyrics and delivery could use some work. I love this beat by drake, but i just didnt feel the emotion in your voice.

[rand0lTv]

Thanks to everyone for any support you have given me, i really appreciate it. To the ones that have sent me things and i haven't replied its because it doesn't show me your username, so if i never replied, im sorry but this is the only way i could think of responding to most of you. When you want to send me a message try creating a new one or composing a new one, anyways thanks for the support!

@irandol

[FLYBOYENTdena]

Its allright like the other comments from ppl that wrote u comments , bro u gotta sound more natural instead of sounding like if ur reading it off paper u feel me but keep it up u got some pretty dope lines on da track just try n go wit the beat more check out my videos if u like subscribe n thumbs my shit up too stay up bro

[gregfranchisemusic]

you got potential bro, just try to put more emotion into it and you could make it man

[MistroMizzy2012]

dope as kush

[410Gato]

well i like your perspective and what your going for but you didnt quite execute it well and your lyrics were lacking a bit of spark. id say go back and review your sheets and try to find something that others would like to hear instead of what you would like to hear feel me? but in overall 6 out of 10

[RealOAHUBOY]

@410Gato yea i was thinking the same

[ryankellyproductions]

heard better but you're pretty damn good. thanks for the link.

[lopezwest213]

Good lyrics gotta calm flow !!

[VenomousVitus]

Pretty sweet bro! Check out my stuff!

[markworlding]

nice remix bro keep it up

[J2JWA]

Jus read tht share u sent, good lyrics bro. keep doin what u do man.

[manonpXX]

really good, keep doing yout thing!

[BreatheEazyKid]

nice stuff dude check me out and like/comment/subscribe too !

[176tonyd]

hey keep doing ur thing bro.. HIP HOP ALL DAY EVERY DAY.. fuk wat a hater gata say

[DaYoungFlash]

Ey Bro You Good You Sound Kinda Like SPM thanks for sending me this video thanxs i liked and subscribed

[JAYSWAGGUTUBE]

Keep trying!! I like bc u have effort...

Work on a strong delivery

Make it sound smoother

Everything comes with time!!!

[boyfromzambia]

pretty good :D work on your presence while rapping but you're really good! i love the beat too, just had to add it lol

[yuungAB]

nice!!!

[Blademuzic]

You got soul. I'm feeling it.

[TGUNNS8711]

Straight ahead. Aim high

[23LJKing]

Good Job Keep It Up

[iyadTV]

That was dooopeee!!! U just need a bit more confidence that's all.

[UppergroundEntTV]

dope keep it bro dont stop

[ilikegrass123]

Great job ! I think you might have a chance to be noticed

[ilikegrass123]

Dude, great job ! Keep on going I think you have a chance to be noticed !

[ggggvtkd]

虽然听不懂英文，但是，还是支持一下~~

Can not read English

From China

[veee14]

good job aii, keep it up and hope you succeed :)

[NewFlowzEnt]

We checked it out and we loved it! Keep on grinding bro and your dreams will come true! Make sure you come check us out! New video every wednesday and saturday! New vid up tomorrow!

[thegreatsamuel239]

This remix is dope. Keep it up

[Kramerbb2014]

I want to marry your voice. <3

[greenthumb858]

give it all u got performin your shit when im recording my producer tells me louder louder get into ur shit and then kill it

[Jdog305Cubanito]

Good track mane nuff said keeps it up "DALE"

[JasminePrettyDillard]

You Good ^__^ i know your going to make it. <3 keep up the good work

Imma FAN ! [:

[BigTruThRap]

collab? 

[BeautifiedSMILE]

AWESOME! I know you'll become famouse someday (;