ATLA Sozin's Comet Aftermath Fanfiction Ch. 33

[XavierDarkhand]

I simply have to assuredly say ....

VERY nice series. I've been enjoying it, it seems pretty well planned out and keeps a lot of characters quite similar. It does pose a feel that it could be a follow-up, nicely written!

Hopefully your life'll free up enough to give you time to keep making them :D I'd hate if this were the last chapter I got to see. Congrats to a well designed story.

[MiddleEasternBorder]

@XavierDarkhand

Hey there!

Thanks for your comment. Good News, ATLASCA has finally resumed and its next episode is being worked underway. I hope you'll be able to watch it surely for this month. Keep your hopes up and thanks for you continuous support!

[MiddleEasternBorder]

@NewYork4Life98 It's from a video game that I turned into a story.

[gohan734]

HOW COME YOU CAN ANSER THE COMMENTS AND YOU CANT MAKE A VIDEO IM NOT QUESTIONING YOU OR ANYTHING

[MiddleEasternBorder]

@gohan734 I'm busy with my real work right now. + i'm sick. I'll try to make one next month. I just have a pending art project right now.

[KhaosofCall]

4 months after i saw it, i remembered, and try to see 34 and ya still didnt finish the 34, that made me sad =/

[MiddleEasternBorder]

@KhaosofCall Sorry. :( with my new work, I've got awfully alot of things to do.

[gohan734]

how do you record a video from a olympus camra

[MiddleEasternBorder]

@gohan734 you can't expect a good record from a camera. It's like recording a TV show.

[gohan734]

how do you make the camra only on the game how do you make the camra still

[MiddleEasternBorder]

@gohan734 you need to install a program that will record anything that's in front of your monitor

[gohan734]

who ever adds me as a friend or suscribes me ill give you 5 stars add you as a friend and suscribe oh give me 5 stars or at least 1 star

[gohan734]

how do you upload a game

[gohan734]

which is better birning earth for ps2 or into the inferno

[MiddleEasternBorder]

@gohan734 well burning earth is based from book 2 and into the inferno is based from book 3. of course with new sequels, you expect it to be better than the last one.

[gohan734]

danks



[MiddleEasternBorder]

For Ps2, there's the "Burning Earth" which is the same Title, and "Into the Inferno"

[gohan734]

do you know any avatar games for ps2 that you can play as more than 5 charcter or play as all the charcter

[gohan734]

that are about ang adventure to fight the fire lord

[gohan734]

what are some  avatar the last airbender games for gba

[gohan734]

whT IS THIS GAME THAT YOU COPY FROM AND IS THE PUPLE SHOWDOW TRUE

[MiddleEasternBorder]

@gohan734 1st of all pls. fix your commenting. You type as if you're shouting. Thank You.

The game is A:TLA Burning Earth from game boy advance.

Of course this is fanfiction, hence the purple shadows are not part of the original series.

[gohan734]

HOW DO YOU PLAY THIS GAME OR HOW DO YOU MAKE THIS GAME

[MiddleEasternBorder]

@gohan734 It's from Gameboy Advance. I played it on Emulator and edited from screen capture.

[gohan734]

is this game gonna turn into a tv how

[gohan734]

AND WILLL TOUGH FIND HER PARENTS

[MiddleEasternBorder]

@gohan734 Of course she will

[gohan734]

HOW DO YOU PLAY THIS GAME

[gohan734]

AWSOME VIDEDO ANYWAY WHEN ARE YOU GONNA DO THE NEXT VID EP 34

[MiddleEasternBorder]

@gohan734 Got lazy these past few months plus I have a new job. Hopefully for next month. *cross fingers*

[kgurlybrat]

how much longer is this STORY?!!? DX

[avatar4life91]

ohh my gosh awesome vid momo kicks ass in this one lol i love tophs tude towards sokka in this one about not geting himself killed awesome tokkaness!!!

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[KhaosofCall]

@MiddleEasternBorder

hauahua nice, i'll wait the next one to see aang, but to be honest, i like more Toph then aang =D

But Of course that my favourity character is katara xP

[mayqute]

OMEGAH O o O....

TIS' TEH MOMENT I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR!!!!!

sokka having a speech effect on Long Feng:))

AWESUM!!!! EPIC WIN!!!!!

[KhaosofCall]

ATLASCA RULES!

nicely done! it was a prety good continues ^^ too bad it was a fast one, it didnt show what happens to Aang, ohh i wanted to see the cookiebender xP

[MiddleEasternBorder]

@KhaosofCall

I was supposed to add Aang's scenario, as he's definitely also "a defiled legend" but the time is too short in this episode. He won't fit in the 10 minute mark. :( Perhaps next time I can show what happened to him.

[leron1994]

will mai and suki team up with sokka and the others when they are rescued

[MiddleEasternBorder]

@leron1994

Yes they will.

[leron1994]

@MiddleEasternBorder yay cn't wait for that moment ohh and also can't wait for riley and his friends to figure out they are being played

[Godof0Thousand]

The action was fast paced and the music choice really helped that along. However, gags like the sweeping hand freeing the prisoners broke the building tention. You don't need the jokes like that, they are a dramatic detrament. In addition, I can see your skills improving (by leaps and bounds in this chapter) with your editing. Do continue!

[MiddleEasternBorder]

@Godof0Thousand

It simply just means that I don't have to take these things seriously, and it's not just another boring dramanovela fanfic. I have my own way of putting gags but not in the way of interfering with the plot.

[Godof0Thousand]

You're not interfering with the plot but it broke the tension in a dramatic scene. A gag like Sokka's rock session worked because even in a strictly serious production that would have been used to diffuse the tension. The gag in this episode broke up the pace of the action. I say this because it is a light-hearted series, but you still had a fittingly tense episode for the end of a major plot point.

[MiddleEasternBorder]

@Godof0Thousand

It's not important to worry after that scene. Even if it's a scenario fight with zhu, I would still think of something unnatural to happen. If you think I already ruined the story, You should've quitted reading by now because I included a chocobo character.

If I cut off all the gag scenes from the whole chapters, I would still obtain a decent story.

[Godof0Thousand]

I don't think you ruined it, chill out! The gags are fine, I'm only SUGGESTING that you don't rely on them (because you don't need them). To make a story told in this format to build tension is nigh impossible, but you did it. All I was saying was there's a time and a place for the gags and you made a rare miss. If I had a problem with the gags on princapal I wouldn't have wathced this far. I tryed to give you constructive critisisum, I wasn't flameing you!!

[MiddleEasternBorder]

@Godof0Thousand

Well, there's no way I can tell myself when or where I can place a comedic relief. It's completely random. *shrug*

[Godof0Thousand]

Than my suggestion is this, take a look at the part of the story you are trying to tell during each chapter.  Ask yourself if you are dealing with a tense situation or a major plot point. If you are place your gags at the begining or end of the event. My guess is it would work well at the end (In this case when Zuko joins Sokka and Toph). That way you keep the action moving and still keepthe light feel to it.

[MiddleEasternBorder]

@Godof0Thousand

Thanks for suggesting but Typical. I can't promise you that, in case a gag comes as an opportunity. Imagine a scenario that's perfect to put some comic relief in it even though its serious. C'mon man, haven't you watched action comedy movies, they also do that stuff. Maybe you're the only one that has problems in it. I don't see anyone else bothered by it. I've been doing this stuff like tokka going down the elevator or sokka's nightmare. it ruins the mood but it still works.

[Godof0Thousand]

Listen to what I say (or read what I type, I guess)!!

I DON'T think you ruined it, and I don't need you to promise me anything. I'm just saying cinimaticly that ONE SPASIFIC moment was off!! This is your story not mine! I was just trying to help you improve it for the future.

[MiddleEasternBorder]

@Godof0Thousand

Hmm... alright then. Let's hope I match your expectations next time.

[leron1994]

YES very amazing chapter

[MiddleEasternBorder]

@leron1994

DANX! ^_^

[Bahamut16FF]

awesome i can see what u mean by how it now flows better nicly done ^____^

[MiddleEasternBorder]

@Bahamut16FF

Aww DANX! :)

[JanettesMyName]

-still terrified with Mai gone-

D:

[GakaSakuseisha]

FABULOUS, as per usual. :D Can't wait to see what happens next!