oh my GOD. this is exactly the same as deus ex machina. absolutely everything, including the music and most of the plot, is a shitty copy of that incredible machinima that should have never been copied. fuck.
u must read this. once u have started there is no turning back. a little 10 year old girl was raped and murderded in 1945. her body was not found until 1947. then a boy last week read this and did not copy and paste this message. the dead girl appeared in his room haunting him and killed him. if you do not copy and paste this onto 10 vidoes in 30 minutes the dead girl will apear in your room tonight and haunt you and kill you. well you better start to copy and paste to be saved
srry, kno this probably isn't real, just need closure
in 1908 a lady named sally rusa was in the woods looking for a dog until a ghost came and killed her so if ur reading this u will find a bloody body in your closet hanging there haunting you and will kill you and ur family and if u want to stop this just sends this to 6 videos in 30 mins or this will happen good luck!!
wow i cant beleive how much U FUCKING COPIED DEAX EX MACHINA ITS SET IN THE SAME PLACE THE FUCK TART CALLED MICH ASWELL, GET A FUCKING LIFE U CANT DO FUCKING MACHINIMA WITHOUT FUCKING COPING THE FRIKIN LEGEND U ARE A FUCKING FUCKER FUCK TARTED FUCK FACE DIck SUCKIN PEICE OF SHIT, DONT MAKE SERIOUS MACHINIMA CAUSE UR ABSALOUTLY SHITE. have a nice day. LOL i was jokin its good cant wait 2 ep 2
@xmunxica this is made by machinima you dipshit! aka the exact same people who made deax ex machina do some very minor research before you insult a great video
@900000Lol Machinima didnt make dues ex machina Digital Ph33r did..machinima just supports it by letting it be on its website where a bunch of other machinima directors post their work. do yor research before u insult someone.
@ganas3 this is made by machinima you dipshit! aka the exact same people who made dues ex machina do some very minor research before you insult a great video
i have to say this is a good first episode and its not a cheap copy of deus ex machina because it has a different meaning to it remember cant judge a book by its cover......
i think this series is inspired by deus ex machina there trying to make simalar but not exactly the same story i mean think best friend micheal last city and the name is is somewhat similar to salvation city but other than that i dont see no plomblem or copyright of anykind because look it has a different name and different story with different names so all you idiots who think there copying deus ex are idiots this is technacly a complemient to digitalph33r cause there showing insparation
yeah this voice acting was a tad bit ehh :/ i say this about alot of machinimas the voice acting dosnt fit the situation or the person doing the voice acting does a poor job :/ but yeah just work on fitting the voice acting into the situation the charecters are in
btw i meant word and another tip is to work on the voice acting especially when some dies "he's dead but i'LL GIVE A CRAP LATER" BUT YEAH YOURE GOOD AT THIS
ok to all the people who think this is a deus ex rip off dont be fuckin retarded..the story the names and especially the acting (no offense) are complletely different...so just shutup
i dont think it is a "rip off" but you cant just say that he didn't take the main plot from Deus ex. I mean cmon, last city, best friend, invasion of aliens/super humans. I respect that he is trying to tell a story but it is very VERY inspired by Deus ex. Oh and lets put some more heart when some one dies lol
I just think you need to come up with different vioces and your story is very similur to Dues ex machinia but you r trying to tell a good story so i respect that.
work on voice acting i know if some one over heres u so serious yelling these things they'll make fun of u or something but it will be worth it trust me it will make the thing seem a lot better
dude this vid is perfect in just about every way, exept for the voice acting. they talk in the same tone for like every situation. but besides that its freakin' sick.
shut the fuck up retards,, this is no copy of dues ex machina,, u guys are fucking stupid,, so maybe he used the same map the guys best frend is named micheal the rest is a whole fucking different gosh u guys are gay
How is it stealing...Sure its on the same map but so what. Think about it if this came first all you people would say that dues ex machina was a rip of this vid...
Will you quit your whining about "Oh M Gee it are Dayis ex mackinuh." He actually has a friend named Michael and HE HAS gone through school with him. The style is so similar because unlike you pathetic twats he knows Digital Ph33r. Thus him being his mentor the styles will be similar. Give it a rest you idiots.
Nitro, personally I think this is very well done and not bad for your first machinima. Let me know when we start filming episode three.
Ok, wtf? That raven thing made no sense, the two main charaters got owned like 3-4 times in that scene, and also, WTF? They hit the staircas and he jumps out of it like, 3 seconds after the blast all fine. I still have no clue but the intro and shit was all a big copy from Dues Ex Machina, so bullcrap.
i liked it, 4 starts, it needs a little something to seperate it from other story lines though. voice acting needs a little work to. other than that, great job.
It's Ok but the voice acting need A LOT! of work especially at the bridge "I'm Trying, I'm Trying" and to me it made him look like a FIRST CLASS RETARD!
nothing is original you put in laid to rest by lamb of god... that song is a tip off of Testaments into the pit... i did'nt expect you to know that.. it's just ironic
That was....n't the best. To be honest it felt like a complete rip-off of DEM. Christ, even his buddy, who he'd been through school with was called 'Michael'
ur good at this kind of stuff no mattr wat it is me and my friend are working on something lik this but its just the two of us but anyway u did a really good job
Hmm. It's actually pretty good to me. It does, like many others, make me thing of Deus Ex Machina. But that was a very good start with a suspencful ending. Nice ;).
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Hey guys, Its Me Nitro ugg look this was my first Machinima so i'm sorry that it seems very Amature also I really didn't think of Deus Ex when I made this it just came to my mind alright
dude spartans didnt go into unsc to become spartans..they were raised as supersoldiers since they were freaking six and were givin chips to they heads making them super
dude it is just a story to entertain people just because the maker of the story gets something wrong doesn any sould point something out. you dont like someone pointing out when your at the zoo the elephants throw peanuts at you do you
Nice, although the plot isn't so original, this was nicely done. My favourite part was when the mongoose got blasted and the two guys on it flew and smacked right into a wall.
It wasn't bad all together, but it was (similar) to Deus Ex Machina. Make the story more in-depth to the soldiers, and more into the war they're fighting... You made them sound like rookie guys who're in the army. (plus just put a little more Enthusiasm when in dialogue or saying "HOLY CRAP")
WOW EPIC PHAIL RAVENHOLD XD u stole a name from HL2 called RavenHolm god come up with ur own matirial and ya i agree with every body this is a VERY bad knockoff of Deus ex Machina 0.5/5 for the little effort made.
Dude that was reallly bad. I mean I can respect the guys who made this for trying, but come on. I couldn't get through half of this it was that terrible.
1: The acting was horrible. Like when that guy got shot, and you said "Holy crap." That was just phoney and underplayed.
2: Last Human City? Best friend named Mike? I mean the real Deus Ex Machina wasnt good! Why copy it?
3: The fighting scenes were like the other 100 bad machinimas I've seen. Nothing special.
It is a bit like Deus ex machina
OmaBuddha 1 year ago
that was sweat ^_^
terrence627 1 year ago
LAY THIS 2 REST!!!!
JakexBFMV 1 year ago
i like it overall but the meaning in the words is bleak no emotion
RossoCola1 2 years ago
holy shit i love this music
And502 2 years ago 2
this is stupid, Spartans dont have houses.
MagnumEncarta3 2 years ago
500th rating :)
bobslay12 2 years ago 3
RVB FTW!!!!
MagnumEncarta3 2 years ago
pretty good
munishion 2 years ago 2
oh my GOD. this is exactly the same as deus ex machina. absolutely everything, including the music and most of the plot, is a shitty copy of that incredible machinima that should have never been copied. fuck.
ClunkenDFC 2 years ago 2
OMFG. This is exactly like dues ex machina. Just aboot everything, including the muse-sick! (i <3 muse) and the plot. This needs to be destroyed!
lmao your a lame version of me XD
(this video is a joke, look what it's a reply to)
george6490 2 years ago
LMFAO the video this is a reply to is even a digital p33r knock off.
george6490 2 years ago
What is the connection with them and DigitalPh33r exactly? I'm not seeing it.
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leonkenneddy 2 years ago
whats the song at 6:20????
pettifretti 2 years ago
i loved it. it was alot like dues ex machina but its your own little setup i guess.
lol. HOLY CRAP! hes dead.
32seamus32 2 years ago 2
not bad
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u must read this. once u have started there is no turning back. a little 10 year old girl was raped and murderded in 1945. her body was not found until 1947. then a boy last week read this and did not copy and paste this message. the dead girl appeared in his room haunting him and killed him. if you do not copy and paste this onto 10 vidoes in 30 minutes the dead girl will apear in your room tonight and haunt you and kill you. well you better start to copy and paste to be saved
jeremiahwaits0555 2 years ago
MORE MOTHER FUKA MORE!!!
sukhdeep6312117 2 years ago 2
mofo i h8 u
u copied digitalph33r
slifer967 2 years ago
srry, kno this probably isn't real, just need closure
in 1908 a lady named sally rusa was in the woods looking for a dog until a ghost came and killed her so if ur reading this u will find a bloody body in your closet hanging there haunting you and will kill you and ur family and if u want to stop this just sends this to 6 videos in 30 mins or this will happen good luck!!
taa347 2 years ago
Wow you people really are digitalph33r nerds.
fahuem1 2 years ago
wat about ep 2?
buttnuggets123 2 years ago
What are Shade Soldiers ?????
xUnrealDR4GEx 2 years ago
wow i cant beleive how much U FUCKING COPIED DEAX EX MACHINA ITS SET IN THE SAME PLACE THE FUCK TART CALLED MICH ASWELL, GET A FUCKING LIFE U CANT DO FUCKING MACHINIMA WITHOUT FUCKING COPING THE FRIKIN LEGEND U ARE A FUCKING FUCKER FUCK TARTED FUCK FACE DIck SUCKIN PEICE OF SHIT, DONT MAKE SERIOUS MACHINIMA CAUSE UR ABSALOUTLY SHITE. have a nice day. LOL i was jokin its good cant wait 2 ep 2
xmunxica 2 years ago 10
@xmunxica this is made by machinima you dipshit! aka the exact same people who made deax ex machina do some very minor research before you insult a great video
900000Lol 1 year ago
@900000Lol Machinima didnt make dues ex machina Digital Ph33r did..machinima just supports it by letting it be on its website where a bunch of other machinima directors post their work. do yor research before u insult someone.
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@ganas3 this is made by machinima you dipshit! aka the exact same people who made dues ex machina do some very minor research before you insult a great video
900000Lol 1 year ago
you made your characters sidestep way to much and the voice acting wasnt very good. nice try though.
ADxTygon 2 years ago
HE COPIED DIGITAL PH33R
xmunxica 2 years ago
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TVTycoon2 2 years ago
wers episode 2
chris1522 2 years ago
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xmunxica 2 years ago
its a good story but for real the voice acting sucks
FrickenPope 3 years ago 2
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xmunxica 2 years ago
I hate them
snozer2 3 years ago
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lol this is so crap. You'd think it would be a spoof but lol this is actually shit.
jameston91 3 years ago
You had lamb of god on good choice.
pen5221 3 years ago
its not a rip its just a little simlar
Daffiodle3 3 years ago 3
This is such a rip off of Dues Ex Machina.
Luis965 3 years ago
shad is cool
HappyHaloPersons 3 years ago
it was ok...sorta a cut off of DEM but it was pretty good 4/5
bones8726 3 years ago
this is Okay........ but it still needs work but its not bad
nubcake531 3 years ago
I would prefer the production logo if the word "Productions" was slanted to the right instead of the left.
480p 3 years ago
ur sad if ur that picky bout a freaking logo!
toa395 3 years ago
its ok but why didnt the voices like have any effort? they kist talked didnt try and make it realistic?
oldgloke 3 years ago
"This is the same thing that happened at Ravenhold City five months ago!"
FIVE MONTHS AGO
Jatc93 3 years ago
wow nice acting... good story no passion in words
nakhsa18 3 years ago 2
nice ending at the end of he episode after the credis. Who could it be?
PraetorSlayer2 3 years ago
Good story, but your voice acting really sucks, so yeah 3/5
jameston91 3 years ago
CLIQUE!!!!!
kingw2nd 3 years ago
that like deus ex machinima but different story line nice work
main1995 3 years ago
woah! that was a good episode, looking foward to the other ones!
DoubleAAz 3 years ago 4
i have to say this is a good first episode and its not a cheap copy of deus ex machina because it has a different meaning to it remember cant judge a book by its cover......
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NitroProductions1 3 years ago 2
Can't wait until the next one
28Jazz 3 years ago
i think this series is inspired by deus ex machina there trying to make simalar but not exactly the same story i mean think best friend micheal last city and the name is is somewhat similar to salvation city but other than that i dont see no plomblem or copyright of anykind because look it has a different name and different story with different names so all you idiots who think there copying deus ex are idiots this is technacly a complemient to digitalph33r cause there showing insparation
cowboygruntfilms 3 years ago
its trying to be as good as dues ex machina but its not try to do better
MiddleSchoolHumor 3 years ago
i dont like the main guys voice
FireFart179 3 years ago
I see potential, script needs alot of work, and the voice acting could be better
Saurian3 3 years ago 4
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Ripoff of Deus Ex Machina.
T3hPwnz012 3 years ago
How? It's nothing like Deus Ex Machina.
Dark94Flame 3 years ago 9
He called him Harry!
oobilator111 3 years ago
Deja Vu? Deux Ex Machina? Last city? Best Friend Michael?
anthraxgoon 3 years ago 4
omfg of course hes dead he got shot in the fucking face
jeffhardyfan150 3 years ago 3
omg every one tellin me about how wrong i was just shut up.after one guy tellin me i understand you dont all have to g tellin me.
jeffhardyfan150 3 years ago
Dues ex Machina??
codpwnshalo 3 years ago 3
It's decent but the voice acting does need work. Hope to see more from you. Improvements included ;)
ManInDuctTape 3 years ago
nevermind lol
gameplaya1313 3 years ago
if anyone knows wat program they use 4 effcts message me plz
gameplaya1313 3 years ago
yeah this voice acting was a tad bit ehh :/ i say this about alot of machinimas the voice acting dosnt fit the situation or the person doing the voice acting does a poor job :/ but yeah just work on fitting the voice acting into the situation the charecters are in
Nutmikk 3 years ago 2
this feels like a cheap knock off of Deus Ex =/
Nutmikk 3 years ago
wow this is awesome keep it up but as a wors of advice try to use different camera angles
FilmRangers 3 years ago 2
btw i meant word and another tip is to work on the voice acting especially when some dies "he's dead but i'LL GIVE A CRAP LATER" BUT YEAH YOURE GOOD AT THIS
FilmRangers 3 years ago
ok to all the people who think this is a deus ex rip off dont be fuckin retarded..the story the names and especially the acting (no offense) are complletely different...so just shutup
raskittleman 3 years ago
i dont think it is a "rip off" but you cant just say that he didn't take the main plot from Deus ex. I mean cmon, last city, best friend, invasion of aliens/super humans. I respect that he is trying to tell a story but it is very VERY inspired by Deus ex. Oh and lets put some more heart when some one dies lol
dkuch45 2 years ago
HE COPIED DIGITAL PH33R
xmunxica 2 years ago
how exactly???
ADxTygon 2 years ago 3
I just think you need to come up with different vioces and your story is very similur to Dues ex machinia but you r trying to tell a good story so i respect that.
KillerGrimer 3 years ago
decent but a lot like deus ex machina
caboose478 3 years ago
work on voice acting i know if some one over heres u so serious yelling these things they'll make fun of u or something but it will be worth it trust me it will make the thing seem a lot better
Phizzzzy 3 years ago
never mind it seemed like that at the beginning
Phizzzzy 3 years ago
bull crap rip off of deus ex machinima
Phizzzzy 3 years ago
everyone is trying to make serious halo machinmas now what happened to the funny ones?
Really theres just RvsB, pregame lobby, arby and the cheif, and some others
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Proudn00b 3 years ago
Some stuff is like Deus ex but most of it is original!
EpicStudiosMagnum 3 years ago
Deus ex rip off!
Tanblan2 3 years ago
i want to join a machinima gamertag: alieniod123
alieniod123 3 years ago
This is like Deus Ex Machina
SpartanChief177 3 years ago
this is a bit off of due ex machinma
jem07621 3 years ago
cant wait for the next episode
117rob 3 years ago
good most serious machinima is crap but this is better keep it up it very good
TehMoMoman 3 years ago
dude this vid is perfect in just about every way, exept for the voice acting. they talk in the same tone for like every situation. but besides that its freakin' sick.
SAMEJSEXY69 3 years ago
shut the fuck up retards,, this is no copy of dues ex machina,, u guys are fucking stupid,, so maybe he used the same map the guys best frend is named micheal the rest is a whole fucking different gosh u guys are gay
SoNewSkool 3 years ago
How is it stealing...Sure its on the same map but so what. Think about it if this came first all you people would say that dues ex machina was a rip of this vid...
DragoonxKnight 3 years ago
Kinda of a Deus Ex rip-off, but that isn't really important. It still sucks either way.
dgasgrlmkagklnternk 3 years ago
that rip off of micahel form deuz ex machina.
PraetorSlayer2 3 years ago
could somebody tell me how in the world this is a rip of deus ex machina because your all saying it's a rip, but your not saying why!
Bl00dyBizkitz 3 years ago
might as well be called deux ex machina alternate storyline but very good altogether for a first next episode make it vary plz
Lrak1193 3 years ago
to me this feels nothing like dem....but w/e
GloomKilla 3 years ago
lol stealing bastard !!!!!
GreenTwister23 3 years ago
song called dare me to walk throw fire yea i have it on ipod
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thats the gayest ripoff i bet digitalp33r thinks its gayer cars the movie
FA00002 3 years ago
its a coppy of deus ex machina >:(
joeismint118 3 years ago
holy crap, hes dead. show some emotion
CrazySevenUK 3 years ago
wtf this is rip off
thePimpmonster 3 years ago
the beginig kind`va reminds of Deus
sergiu1231 3 years ago 2
Will you quit your whining about "Oh M Gee it are Dayis ex mackinuh." He actually has a friend named Michael and HE HAS gone through school with him. The style is so similar because unlike you pathetic twats he knows Digital Ph33r. Thus him being his mentor the styles will be similar. Give it a rest you idiots.
Nitro, personally I think this is very well done and not bad for your first machinima. Let me know when we start filming episode three.
ecwfiend 3 years ago
omg even the best friend has the same name as the deus ex machina series
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Ok, wtf? That raven thing made no sense, the two main charaters got owned like 3-4 times in that scene, and also, WTF? They hit the staircas and he jumps out of it like, 3 seconds after the blast all fine. I still have no clue but the intro and shit was all a big copy from Dues Ex Machina, so bullcrap.
NumbSmile09 3 years ago 2
1 word:AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
bluewave9 3 years ago
i liked it, 4 starts, it needs a little something to seperate it from other story lines though. voice acting needs a little work to. other than that, great job.
HGpally 3 years ago
this is a complete copy of deus ex machina
johnnyorangeseed 3 years ago 2
too samey
EvilDeevil94 3 years ago
This series is inconsistent. Spartans don't have civilian lives. Spartans are tools of war that fight to the last bullet and breath.
Ghostrecon989 3 years ago
It's Ok but the voice acting need A LOT! of work especially at the bridge "I'm Trying, I'm Trying" and to me it made him look like a FIRST CLASS RETARD!
shkdbsahbdlabf 3 years ago
this is good !!!!
3m1rfile 3 years ago
pretty cool man I look forward to your........... next one I just saw that last part MR.REED
Randarserous 3 years ago
why do most halo machinimas now a days sound like the voice acters are saliva mouth filled nerds?
wildernessB69 3 years ago
Because you have a dick in your mouth
shkdbsahbdlabf 3 years ago
that was pretty good
keep it up!
noobzATG 3 years ago
awsome keep it up man :)
pspboy139 3 years ago
deux ex machina rippof
deathhoundpack 3 years ago
nothing is original you put in laid to rest by lamb of god... that song is a tip off of Testaments into the pit... i did'nt expect you to know that.. it's just ironic
vicrattlehead2 3 years ago
i liked the intro
master0of0mojo 3 years ago
wow u even ripped off americas own story line ...(the soldiers are coming) sound familiar (the red coats are coming)
vicrattlehead2 3 years ago
wow Deus Ex Machina rip off dude you just copied everything he said and replaced eache word with a synonym. learn how to write original matertial!
vicrattlehead2 3 years ago
That was....n't the best. To be honest it felt like a complete rip-off of DEM. Christ, even his buddy, who he'd been through school with was called 'Michael'
iaingee92 3 years ago
haha deus ex machina much?
Isinthas6744 3 years ago
machinima is the best
narutoman555 3 years ago
ur good at this kind of stuff no mattr wat it is me and my friend are working on something lik this but its just the two of us but anyway u did a really good job
spartangecko 3 years ago
Hmm. It's actually pretty good to me. It does, like many others, make me thing of Deus Ex Machina. But that was a very good start with a suspencful ending. Nice ;).
artiste45 3 years ago
Yo give the guy a break it was his first one, it'll get better I bet
Baller0328 3 years ago
what a cliff hanger but still awesome
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FireFart179 3 years ago
this is pretty cool. Looks like mediocre Deus Ex to me but otherwise its awesum! 4/5
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FireFart179 3 years ago
is there a second episode?
D0NALDRay2 3 years ago
it was okay... not nearly as good as Deus Ex Machina or anything, but good try
theonex50 3 years ago
hey man i thought it was pretty sweet great story line/action
JRAxeAuctions 3 years ago
lol halo story
KingFuchisia 3 years ago
Hey guys, Its Me Nitro ugg look this was my first Machinima so i'm sorry that it seems very Amature also I really didn't think of Deus Ex when I made this it just came to my mind alright
NitroProductions1 3 years ago
dude spartans didnt go into unsc to become spartans..they were raised as supersoldiers since they were freaking six and were givin chips to they heads making them super
halo3war788 3 years ago
dude it is just a story to entertain people just because the maker of the story gets something wrong doesn any sould point something out. you dont like someone pointing out when your at the zoo the elephants throw peanuts at you do you
sirmike123456 3 years ago
DUUUUUDE ITS HIS STORY
necrosasuke 3 years ago
not much good but keep trying
plus there was a guy glitching in the background while they were trying to make the bridge snap and fall
MentalF33r 3 years ago
this kinda has the same plot as deu ex machina.
KungFuSamauri 3 years ago
meh :/
awesomeman142 3 years ago
for a serious machinima its not bad, but it kinda looks like a parody of deus ex machina
Tonytherocker 3 years ago
omg ... a new Deus Ex ...the story is fuckin the same xD lol
Ch1llma3xtr3m 3 years ago
its well done.....serious machinimas are hard to nail
majorsplooge 3 years ago
*in a calm voice* hurry dude their right behind us... show some emotion in the story plz
eeff4 3 years ago
Nice, although the plot isn't so original, this was nicely done. My favourite part was when the mongoose got blasted and the two guys on it flew and smacked right into a wall.
chooxz1 3 years ago
god i love the choice of music
darkassian111 3 years ago
good wrk sloppy and dues ex machina copy butt still good
darkassian111 3 years ago
5/5 .....
What? I have nothing to say....
gber1 3 years ago
Deus Ex Machina Copy cat
kewl bt to focused on same story as deus ex
3/5
assassinsfriend 3 years ago
I like it. It's like Deus Ex Machina.
jhkiller263 3 years ago
great but it reminds me to much of dues ex machina
Shinyx26 3 years ago
Nice !!
kevinljd 3 years ago
Why do all these machinimas have bad acting..
nilsjevivderilsje 3 years ago
these pple be representin the cock damn anti-poon
taylork23 3 years ago
omg dude congrats that was really kool lol
abuttss 3 years ago
I liked it voice are fussed out but not weak stupid critics
OPOSSUMS13 3 years ago
4/5. if the voice acting was better, it would have been 5/5.
noahcomix 3 years ago
this was good but some parts need fixing but otherwise good job
mayembros3 3 years ago
dude machinima means game shows/movies retard so
he cant make animation because his name is machinima retard
blowitallaway 3 years ago
jesus man atleast come up with your own animation instead of using halo.... pathetic!
Twopecshaker 3 years ago
voices need some work but other than that its not bad
chichopaintballer 3 years ago
It wasn't bad all together, but it was (similar) to Deus Ex Machina. Make the story more in-depth to the soldiers, and more into the war they're fighting... You made them sound like rookie guys who're in the army. (plus just put a little more Enthusiasm when in dialogue or saying "HOLY CRAP")
Ryuthecool 3 years ago
at 4:53 i like the song he uses
ShitalpeA3Videos 3 years ago
the story was kinda interesting, but the vioce acting and movement of the characters wasn't too good. Keep trying though.
str8pr0duct 3 years ago
have you seen or heard of deus ex machina??
JustCallMeSoupLad 3 years ago
omg i finished to movie and he said
Hairy before the soldies come LOL
ionkill43 3 years ago
WOW EPIC PHAIL RAVENHOLD XD u stole a name from HL2 called RavenHolm god come up with ur own matirial and ya i agree with every body this is a VERY bad knockoff of Deus ex Machina 0.5/5 for the little effort made.
ionkill43 3 years ago
yeah this wholes thing is copied
JustCallMeSoupLad 3 years ago
Dude that was reallly bad. I mean I can respect the guys who made this for trying, but come on. I couldn't get through half of this it was that terrible.
1: The acting was horrible. Like when that guy got shot, and you said "Holy crap." That was just phoney and underplayed.
2: Last Human City? Best friend named Mike? I mean the real Deus Ex Machina wasnt good! Why copy it?
3: The fighting scenes were like the other 100 bad machinimas I've seen. Nothing special.
Better luck next time.
Light654123 3 years ago
wut i notice right off the bat is that the voice acting is weak and the diologue/story is weak as well.
just like wut digitalpheer said, glad that u put in the effort to make machinima but it still has a way to go.
gamermasterL 3 years ago
that was awsome i love it
CantTouchThisH3skill 3 years ago
story wasn't that great and the acting wasn't very good
TEChNoGAmeR1337 3 years ago
Wow a lot of hard comments from people who can't even make half of something like this. I thought it was pretty decent for the beginning of a series.