oh I didn,t write here.Oh sorry thought I did.Is really swell how you did this .How far would you go to be with me and you kinda have it dreamy sorta woundering with this questions.
Thanks for the share, kinda nice actually- you need to work a bit on your voice...Awake it more, Give it some more Voice! since it sounds like you are between whispering and singing...
Incredible! Your musical inspirations shine through your music clearly, yet you still have an original sound. Where are you from? I'd love to hear more of your music.
This song demands more voices- you would love to have a backup singer- he/she could really bring out new atmosphere in this particular song. I like your stuff- very new order influenced, but I wouldn't use that as a calling card.
Great thanks! Next time try to tell a little story in your video. Boy, girl, together, apart, something like this... you know what I mean :-) Go ahead!
I wish you a "scandalous gourgious" all carrying element within your piece like the first strophe of "shout" and then some of the exciting stuff like they have at the middle/end of their song. Today, where there are so many singers, bands etc., I would only think of an album when having killersongs. Whether you like it or not, "moves like jagger" was such a compelling hit, try to create the perfection AND the compelling hit-arrangement. So work hard now and harvest later!
Thank you for the video! I like that kind of music. Melancholic and spacy, but with propulsive rhythms. Reminds me of the A-ha-ballads and a little bit of Coldplay. But it´s all you.
at least up from 1:10 or so a little bit more instrumental variation, the singing should be either more strict or more dynamic (which you by intention obviously do not want) or only more varied by loud/silent or so
I kept waiting for a powerful bridge section that never came. You need something to take it to that next level otherwise you will wright songs that just drone instead of exploding. Sorry-you did ask for criticisms.
Listening while watching the Celtics play the Knicks...
Tears for Fears made some great music, but hearing a lot of mid 80's U2 (good thing)..
Hey, not bad!
Do your thing, what you like is what others like. Kind of wished the beginning got into the drums sooner (we're subconsciously trained 4 it), but when they did - fun! Or if keep the intro add or take a Little something from it. Bieberish - don't hate he's doing something right.
Hello! :) I was able to discover your music thanks to your message. I thus answer your questions! Then, yes, your music is great, very original, given rhythm, you have some voice(vote), it is brilliant, I like! :)
i would go as far as to say that it is almost up to professional standards, is it really all that good ehh its pretty good i like the song tho. you asked for a critic you got one, 3.5/5 stars in my opinion. send another one if you want criticing. -alapone
Hey man sorry it took so long to see this but I had college and work so I can't really do much things in my free time. Anyways I love how you made this and I want you to keep making videos and music like this. It's good to see there's still hope for music nowadays.
Wonderfull song, thank you for sending me an e-mail with your song. Your singing is just like hearing The Chills from New Sealand, well done and i wish you the best, and hopefully a big career. Greetings from Eric, Vorstenbosch, Holland.
Very good... A bit of Inception feel, amongst the other influences people have mentioned. All the best. Here's some hopefully constructive critique ... For the video, would be nice if you had some landscape or urban night shots (with the blurry lights in the distance kind of thing) ~ to give more variety to the shots. Also, the vocal treatment is good but maybe certain sections could have it tighter with less reverb/chorus, though I like the super dreamy feel of the vocals. Enchanting.
it's good you just need to be a bit louder cause you sound kind of shy and yeah thats about it and it needs more meaning put into it like you'r really into it
It's 2:49 am and I'm on utube...anywho...your music is beautiful! Never stop doing what you love! You will be recognized one day...get your big break...millions will watch and listen to your music ...thanks for sharing! Great sound!
Sorry I haven't been checking out my account in a while. I must say it's very impressive. Feels touching and a great "in the mood" song. Best of luck continuing :)
i enjoy this! it's something i can see myself listening to when i'm in one of "those moods", when i just want the world to go away for a little while. i'm really digging your voice, it's unique but i hear a little of the twang that tears for fears had in their vocals. keep up the good work my dear!
You sought me out from the New Order video. I am super impressed by this and I am in my late 30's. You have tremendous potential. Markets are eventually efficient and you will be recognized.
I'm an 80' and a Hard Rock fan. Seisend, thanks for the theme and the tune. For me - it should have followed with a massive drum BANG. But it is not you. You are realy good. Keep it on. I have no means to produce, just the empowerment to encourage you.
Hi there, the music was awesome, one of those tunes you get stuck in your head. Mad props for being the one and only musician!!! A bit of criticism though..... I felt your lyrics could be a bit more polished. I myself write poetry, short stories, ect... So that might be why I noticed. Sometimes to really get something perfect you have to inject that "totally you" aspect, which often times will not make perfect sense to others, yet they like it. Does that make sense? Lol.... Hopefully you get wh
@curebaby1 im almost postive that i know exactly what youre talking about. ive written a lot of "poetry" in the past but with no musical abilities ive never put any of them into song form. Anyway by the "totally you" part of the comment i hope you meant: completely personal.
I found a link to this one in my inbox... and yes: ME LIKES! There's just one little thing I would've done differently: In my opinion the drums should 'open up' (get more crisp and forceful) halfway through the song. Apart from that it's very well done. All there's left to do is bookmark you and hit the 'like' button!
Oh my lord, it is very charming, i really enjoyed it. Already spammed all of my friends in livejournal, Facebook and Twitter. Now I am your fan, Raphael.
oh I didn,t write here.Oh sorry thought I did.Is really swell how you did this .How far would you go to be with me and you kinda have it dreamy sorta woundering with this questions.
7466309change 2 minutes ago
Simple smooth melodic. Kind of a cross between Depeche Mode and Coldplay. I like it.
easyamp123 32 minutes ago
very good man ,really enjoyed it ,cheers for the share
cavanyid 1 hour ago
Love this! you're amazing! Keep doing your songs, and keep updating me ;) xxx
MissBaileysLyrics 1 hour ago
Thanks for the share, kinda nice actually- you need to work a bit on your voice...Awake it more, Give it some more Voice! since it sounds like you are between whispering and singing...
But the music is good, and the lyric is great!
Wharwulif 2 hours ago
great song keep it up
spikmarne 3 hours ago
Incredible! Your musical inspirations shine through your music clearly, yet you still have an original sound. Where are you from? I'd love to hear more of your music.
seanalf 3 hours ago
its good man your Tears for Fears influence shines through very nicely
best of luck with your sound brutha Peace\,,/
hippypower69 3 hours ago
Very Nicely Done!
djfoil 4 hours ago
nice ...keep it up.....did a great job......thanks for the msg
affanmansoor 4 hours ago
really really good music wich style is it ??? where r u from ????
drexmistyca900 4 hours ago
thank u so much seisen
drexmistyca900 4 hours ago
I like it, just it repeats itself more than I would like.
cobranox15 4 hours ago
This song demands more voices- you would love to have a backup singer- he/she could really bring out new atmosphere in this particular song. I like your stuff- very new order influenced, but I wouldn't use that as a calling card.
lightlittlebrownboy 4 hours ago
doesn't sound too bad although i don't see how this sounds close or related to the cure
sounds more like the new wave of hipsters or whatever, such as the minks, beach fossils, french films etc
simionTheOne 5 hours ago
Very good to me!
order57 6 hours ago
thanks for the link,i hear the inspiration, from Tears for Fears, & The Cure (like lxLove,said), very cool song man!!!
wsmhawaii50 6 hours ago
Very good song. Besides that you were inspired by Tears for Fears it also has something that sounds like The Cure.
IxLove 6 hours ago
well that,s terrific.Dreaming about how far she,d go to be with you.A real winning song.
7466309change 8 hours ago
I like it, It sounds very well
:)
lareineforever 9 hours ago
Me gusta. Espero que tengas muchos éxitos.
mrcrrclraacm 10 hours ago
Awesome!
7789antonio 11 hours ago
Great thanks! Next time try to tell a little story in your video. Boy, girl, together, apart, something like this... you know what I mean :-) Go ahead!
MeinErsterFilm 11 hours ago
Thank you for letting me experience your music I liked very much //**\\
mrshoudini1 12 hours ago
Wow... I like it :)
ColinJackson69 13 hours ago
very nice!!! thx 4 sharing!!:)
mjbaybgurl 14 hours ago
Excellent job, you are indeed very talented and yes I like the song. thank you very much
tejeffers1 14 hours ago
Nice song bro, thanks for sharing it with me.
AlexRC113 14 hours ago
Like i meant to say sorry about the misspelled word.
Grandtimelord 16 hours ago
Like,sorry about that misspelled word.
Grandtimelord 16 hours ago
That's brilliant,I really Luke the song keep it up.You have my support.
Grandtimelord 16 hours ago
Your voice have a nice under tone to it...very nice though =]
queenjo718 16 hours ago
Thanks for spamming me. Great song. Subscribed.
LloydChristmas777 16 hours ago
Excellent tune. Haunting and beautiful. New Order for 2012 :)
mikeinbc 16 hours ago
Very nice....
VenetianSymbol 16 hours ago
nice dude i aprove
XemoRainx 17 hours ago
Relaxing, nice, good letter, you are very good, keep going!
977matias 17 hours ago
Thanks for the msg and bringing me here. Nice song. very catchy.
SenorEd 17 hours ago
thanx for sending me this!!
theateam2012 17 hours ago
Very goooood!
jreginapsicologia 18 hours ago
cool stuff!
alexcubs25 18 hours ago
Thank you for your info about your music. Really like this song! I look forward to listening to more of your music.
lchabrak 18 hours ago
Cool! Who is the singer and who wrote the song?
spideraxis 18 hours ago
this is awesome! well done, thanks for the invite :) x
aussiebella1 19 hours ago
I ADORE this song :) Thank you for inviting me!
lemerick100 19 hours ago
Thanks for the invite. Great song! Good job.
lissakr11 19 hours ago
tryin 2 figure out which coldplay video it was?. Awesome :)
mtneilly221 20 hours ago
Hey I got ur message I will look at it later I'm in the car with my aunts and cousin
sk8er1234girl 20 hours ago
nice song, congrats you do a great job!
xXAnthonyKingsXx 20 hours ago
simply beautiful
plushoom 20 hours ago
nice, thanks for sharing !
andina18 20 hours ago
This has been flagged as spam show
Thanks for sending me this vid, I like the song its nice.
blades34AK 21 hours ago
Thanks for sending this to me. I stopped watching it seconds in to the video and just listened. I love it!
Monkofmagnesia 21 hours ago
I like it, kind of haunting..
dusty825 21 hours ago
Good rhythm
rh1507 21 hours ago
Very cool song. I like it, but maybe more dynamic changes with your voice? Nice work though :)
littlemissred12 22 hours ago
sweet your REALLY talented. Im a fan ^^
xXCrazyBemoUnicornxX 22 hours ago
I wish you a "scandalous gourgious" all carrying element within your piece like the first strophe of "shout" and then some of the exciting stuff like they have at the middle/end of their song. Today, where there are so many singers, bands etc., I would only think of an album when having killersongs. Whether you like it or not, "moves like jagger" was such a compelling hit, try to create the perfection AND the compelling hit-arrangement. So work hard now and harvest later!
Pianda 22 hours ago
Thank you for the video! I like that kind of music. Melancholic and spacy, but with propulsive rhythms. Reminds me of the A-ha-ballads and a little bit of Coldplay. But it´s all you.
I would sing the vocals more clearly.
Citylight74 22 hours ago
at least up from 1:10 or so a little bit more instrumental variation, the singing should be either more strict or more dynamic (which you by intention obviously do not want) or only more varied by loud/silent or so
Pianda 22 hours ago
Nice work!
Simonefunkydrummer 22 hours ago
This isn't bad at all. I think it's very good as a matter of fact. Thanks for the reccomendation.
Ricktor902 23 hours ago
not bad at all. thank u for reccomending this to me :)
Pricey1081 23 hours ago
I kept waiting for a powerful bridge section that never came. You need something to take it to that next level otherwise you will wright songs that just drone instead of exploding. Sorry-you did ask for criticisms.
gtrwarriordon 23 hours ago
Dude, you've actually done a sweet job. The guitar segments are pretty inspirational too. Earned yourself a subscription from me :)
DaRkPlUm 1 day ago
Con mucho cariño para mi princesa....
ljacome1971 1 day ago
Thanks for messaging me. I'm glad I checked you out. Your very talented. I'll be a fan! :)
bronzesel 1 day ago
Listening while watching the Celtics play the Knicks...
Tears for Fears made some great music, but hearing a lot of mid 80's U2 (good thing)..
Hey, not bad!
Do your thing, what you like is what others like. Kind of wished the beginning got into the drums sooner (we're subconsciously trained 4 it), but when they did - fun! Or if keep the intro add or take a Little something from it. Bieberish - don't hate he's doing something right.
Much success, don't sell your soul to Hollywood.
GOD bless!
southsidesman 1 day ago
Sounds great, I will be looked into your account ;)
cinekg 1 day ago in playlist Liked videos
Kind of hypnotic.
halfcabdisaster7 1 day ago
realy good ile listen to a few more a think cheers cocka
jaba392 1 day ago
Awesome, love it, thanks!!!
leeannimals 1 day ago
sounds pretty good!!
sundance4400 1 day ago
And there's some Yazoo in there too :)
blueray1969 1 day ago
Very 808 State meets Duran Duran meets Depeche Mode meets Stone Roses. Loved it - thanks for sending me the link :)
blueray1969 1 day ago
Hello! :) I was able to discover your music thanks to your message. I thus answer your questions! Then, yes, your music is great, very original, given rhythm, you have some voice(vote), it is brilliant, I like! :)
Here is!
Emma Lalilala
emmalalilala 1 day ago
I love the mood and feel. It has a bit of The Cure feel in the guitars. Very professional production. I'll check out your other songs.
rodbender1914 1 day ago
it's fairly good, simmering along
mrcodhead67 1 day ago
next time include scenes of places and spaces, more like of a DURAN DURAN Video look alike
topshoptights 1 day ago
808 STATE lift 1991
topshoptights 1 day ago
dope!
MrEliVallejo 1 day ago
You are fucking good!! congratulations!
SuperDemential 1 day ago
Awwwwsomeeeeeee!!
MrsElvis4277 1 day ago
Film: The horizontal effect is good but overdone.Less is more.
The intro is sedate and too long. The song doesnt kick off at 2.48 enough.Need
some bollocks.
Mi : Its a bit like listening to a sponge.
Song: needs more of a hook.
[Music film critic.]
TheRadioheadVideos 1 day ago
Great video, I have a feeling we'll be seeing and hearing a lot more from you... Good Luck my friend..... ;-)
WealthLetter 1 day ago
This is fucking great. Just sayin
recklessroad86 1 day ago
Well done man. Really great. Greetings from Athens, Bill
Billmg81 1 day ago
you should be on MTV
WeirdMrBilly 1 day ago
great music and vid! :D Like your style very much.
LaFa661974 1 day ago
Good potential
bbluvvame 1 day ago
i would go as far as to say that it is almost up to professional standards, is it really all that good ehh its pretty good i like the song tho. you asked for a critic you got one, 3.5/5 stars in my opinion. send another one if you want criticing. -alapone
MyDickAvalon 1 day ago
nice vid, nice song. Thanks for sending it to me. :-)
gretings from Argentina.
miguel20769 1 day ago
you have that vibe nailed perfect, great job!
Jahnli 1 day ago
Love the music, the singing & the visual effects.
A very good work of art, my friend.
Thumbs up!
Flashpoint
Futurepast1000 1 day ago
love it - keep trying...!!!
beyonose 1 day ago
nicely done...
IamSteelManS 1 day ago
Cool tune! I like the video work too:)
Keep up the great work...
64m >:-)
64mung 1 day ago
Really great bro!! Honestly, your stuff is surreal. Thanks for sending it to me. I'll listen to anything you bring my way.
martinjmcnamara 1 day ago
Absolutely fabulous!! WELL DONE!!
darren1naudi 1 day ago
hi bro, did you write this too? its very very good****** ;-D
buderboi 1 day ago
Sorry to make an off topic comment, but he kind of looks like a greaser, subculture from around the 50s.
wendysdrivethrudude 1 day ago
That's really cool thanks for sending me link, like your stuff
niwith1 1 day ago
Hey man sorry it took so long to see this but I had college and work so I can't really do much things in my free time. Anyways I love how you made this and I want you to keep making videos and music like this. It's good to see there's still hope for music nowadays.
danmanscan 2 days ago
Great song!! well done!
lifenyc 2 days ago
You had a good song as inspiration, it's nice to hear something new ^ ^
XxnutellaOoframboise 2 days ago
This is awesome man!
numisone 2 days ago
nice
sandman481000 2 days ago
Wonderfull song, thank you for sending me an e-mail with your song. Your singing is just like hearing The Chills from New Sealand, well done and i wish you the best, and hopefully a big career. Greetings from Eric, Vorstenbosch, Holland.
ericaper1 2 days ago
fantastic....
onceuponatime65 2 days ago
this is geat
anthony15241 2 days ago
Also, you should definitely be on film and game soundtracks. Hope that happens sometime, in addition to your main goals.
nvidia20082008 2 days ago
Very good... A bit of Inception feel, amongst the other influences people have mentioned. All the best. Here's some hopefully constructive critique ... For the video, would be nice if you had some landscape or urban night shots (with the blurry lights in the distance kind of thing) ~ to give more variety to the shots. Also, the vocal treatment is good but maybe certain sections could have it tighter with less reverb/chorus, though I like the super dreamy feel of the vocals. Enchanting.
nvidia20082008 2 days ago
wow amigo mio esto es genial!!!!!!
marto2008marto 2 days ago
Nice song , bravo !
DENISDNSM 2 days ago
it's good you just need to be a bit louder cause you sound kind of shy and yeah thats about it and it needs more meaning put into it like you'r really into it
caitypoo11 2 days ago
it´s great
tamiking84 2 days ago
Nice. I hear New Order's influence. Keep going with it and you'll go far.
pt8648 2 days ago
It's 2:49 am and I'm on utube...anywho...your music is beautiful! Never stop doing what you love! You will be recognized one day...get your big break...millions will watch and listen to your music ...thanks for sharing! Great sound!
urancel 2 days ago
You are awesome =)
unorthodoxmuse 2 days ago
Sorry I haven't been checking out my account in a while. I must say it's very impressive. Feels touching and a great "in the mood" song. Best of luck continuing :)
praisedaura 2 days ago
i really love it best of luck dude!
Richard5239 2 days ago
sorry it took me so long to check this out. i just wanna say that this is really good and i'm glad you shared this with me.
theiNZANEone1 2 days ago
i enjoy this! it's something i can see myself listening to when i'm in one of "those moods", when i just want the world to go away for a little while. i'm really digging your voice, it's unique but i hear a little of the twang that tears for fears had in their vocals. keep up the good work my dear!
Little9Lottie6 2 days ago
You sought me out from the New Order video. I am super impressed by this and I am in my late 30's. You have tremendous potential. Markets are eventually efficient and you will be recognized.
hedgefundanalyst 2 days ago
I'm an 80' and a Hard Rock fan. Seisend, thanks for the theme and the tune. For me - it should have followed with a massive drum BANG. But it is not you. You are realy good. Keep it on. I have no means to produce, just the empowerment to encourage you.
MrMaukka10 2 days ago
Nice work
Bassai 2 days ago
You definitely have a talent --never give up your dreams
aussiexlguy 2 days ago
very nice indeed
texas4christ 2 days ago
Liked it. Thanks for sending it my way.
SheyOneTen 2 days ago
idea is good but i dont like voice realy much its ok song
MusicLord1000 2 days ago
While so many people of this young man's generation slam the 80s, this kid totally gets it and pays homage with this really sweet new song.
nauort23 2 days ago
Great new idea. Voice needs little work
ruviol 2 days ago
Good shit man.
IxLoveXkelseyX 2 days ago
It's a good song!! I love it! Congratulations! :D
flopotof 2 days ago
=) =,)
Cinthia1414 3 days ago in playlist Liked videos
Hi there, the music was awesome, one of those tunes you get stuck in your head. Mad props for being the one and only musician!!! A bit of criticism though..... I felt your lyrics could be a bit more polished. I myself write poetry, short stories, ect... So that might be why I noticed. Sometimes to really get something perfect you have to inject that "totally you" aspect, which often times will not make perfect sense to others, yet they like it. Does that make sense? Lol.... Hopefully you get wh
curebaby1 3 days ago
@curebaby1 im almost postive that i know exactly what youre talking about. ive written a lot of "poetry" in the past but with no musical abilities ive never put any of them into song form. Anyway by the "totally you" part of the comment i hope you meant: completely personal.
isolationeitheror 3 days ago
very good,well done!
zebraspot69 3 days ago
thanks for the nudge, will keep an eye out for you...
tomedian 3 days ago
Please can you play with : ColdPlay + Lana Del REY + New Order + The XX and You !!!
Great song, Hello from France
supermoto1966 3 days ago
not bad not bad at all thanks for letting me know
itsonlyoldskool 3 days ago
I found a link to this one in my inbox... and yes: ME LIKES! There's just one little thing I would've done differently: In my opinion the drums should 'open up' (get more crisp and forceful) halfway through the song. Apart from that it's very well done. All there's left to do is bookmark you and hit the 'like' button!
undress68 3 days ago
Nice - Great Job
Thank You For In-boxing Me It
Swantomdisire 3 days ago
I hear the bassplayer learned alot from Hooky : ) Great job!
TheWoud 3 days ago
whatever happened to verse-chorus-verse-chorus-bridge-chorus-fadeout?
SupernalOne 3 days ago
like it
LYCANSAMPATUAN 3 days ago
This is mUsiC!!!
zwzoulini 3 days ago in playlist Favorite videos
I like it! You remember me to Leo DiCaprio when he was more young jeje.
Melodia2425 3 days ago
thanks for sharing - impressed!
arizoned 3 days ago
nice video! thanks for share :D
rizkaputrii 3 days ago
Oh my lord, it is very charming, i really enjoyed it. Already spammed all of my friends in livejournal, Facebook and Twitter. Now I am your fan, Raphael.
R9SNick 3 days ago
Cool video. I love the guitar in this song (sounds similar to the "XX")
nzgooner1 3 days ago
Nice voice, pretty good lyrics and hauntingly beautiful melody! Thanks for sharing! :)
shokoli 3 days ago
ps thanks for sending it to me
TheCorndoll 3 days ago
you should go a long way beautiful music and words very haunting I am 71 years old and I love it
TheCorndoll 3 days ago
You sent me here by inbox and i have to say im stunned... -_- usually you get shit in your mail.
but in (the ocean of turds) my email it was a diamond. keep up the good work- !
rektalsalva 3 days ago
@rektalsalva
Same thing here. I had an email suggesting I would like this song, and I do!
Procopius1980 3 days ago
very nice!!! thanks for the video!
guitarrax 3 days ago
I love it xD
Vocaloid872 3 days ago
Sooooperb stuff! Great tune..........love the slappy guitars and the vocals. Takes me back to Joy Division/ New Order........thanx 4 the link!!
richardmarkwood 3 days ago
Good song. Keep it up.
theApex70 3 days ago
Excellent stuff Raphael, best wishes for the future!
JDsmiffy1 3 days ago
Nice music.......
alicze1 3 days ago
good stuff....kick it up one or two gears and you could be a serious player
atombomb31458 3 days ago
thanks for the link! very nice! im going to buy this song on itunes right now!
vanillachik02138 3 days ago
nice tune dude
neiljohnsonphotos 3 days ago
thats a nice vid and song you got their, keep it going, im sure youl make it big.
thanks for sending it to me, i like something fresh like this!!!
TheGarbagemanGaming 3 days ago
thanks Raphael for sharing with me this nice video.i like it.
MsCanadian26 3 days ago
You'll make it big.
OZZTYE 3 days ago
I like it alot. New Order eh hows about The Cure. Really nice track My bro is on sound cloud "CALICO" check him out.
IClots1 3 days ago
@IClots1 I agree with the cure reference
earwax12321 3 days ago
i never respond to messages ever .... im really glad i did this time its really good i like the uniqueness
XXxjulietx 3 days ago
That`s talent
Valiand 3 days ago
For once I get something good in my inbox! Thanks.
sugarandspice4815 3 days ago
Good work! I loved it =)
TeamTARDIS2015 3 days ago
really swell man!
audiblesex 3 days ago
really...very good man !!!
MrLolzada 3 days ago in playlist seisend.six