watching this again i feel a sense of urgency to protect- the beginning scenes with the children against the "Total Destruction" , the music, the man on the bike continuously peddling, the birds
My favorite piece like this that I've seen you do so far! To pinpoint what I thought was most successful would be difficult, but since I am writing feedback I will try. This piece had a strong sense of symmetry that was constantly being disrupted by other external forces. It was the persistence of the symmetry that I found to be hopeful. All this and a stronger aesthetic and technique. Keep it up!
the eye shape and above point of view but looking throught the eye gives me that back of the head feeling like i'm watching through my own mind. when he sticks his fingers in the nostrils and the blood finally spurts out it gives me chills, nasal passages connected to head burst..
wow..extra trippy..i cant say viewing it from the back of my brain would be the first thing that pops into my head...but...its a bombardment to the senses...an assault. if i viewed this on lsd, i would probably have to be talked back down to reality. nice work..its the chaos that draws me in.
watching this again i feel a sense of urgency to protect- the beginning scenes with the children against the "Total Destruction" , the music, the man on the bike continuously peddling, the birds
happymooncake 2 years ago
My favorite piece like this that I've seen you do so far! To pinpoint what I thought was most successful would be difficult, but since I am writing feedback I will try. This piece had a strong sense of symmetry that was constantly being disrupted by other external forces. It was the persistence of the symmetry that I found to be hopeful. All this and a stronger aesthetic and technique. Keep it up!
tommolino1 2 years ago
the eye shape and above point of view but looking throught the eye gives me that back of the head feeling like i'm watching through my own mind. when he sticks his fingers in the nostrils and the blood finally spurts out it gives me chills, nasal passages connected to head burst..
happymooncake 2 years ago
wow..extra trippy..i cant say viewing it from the back of my brain would be the first thing that pops into my head...but...its a bombardment to the senses...an assault. if i viewed this on lsd, i would probably have to be talked back down to reality. nice work..its the chaos that draws me in.
domisimon 2 years ago