ah! catchy tune.. i like your playing in singing in this one a lot. it's a great style! the lyrics are kind of sad, but the way you're singing it's like a 'shrug your shoulders, what are ya gonna do' type thing.. if that makes any sense! this is really the story of so many people's lives!
haha...cool song, Justin. Does remind me a little of Koko Kaina...she rocks! Your car broke down?? You shouldn't be driving on New Years anyway...haha.
Thank you, my friend(s). I have a cover of I'm So Tired up that you are welcome to check out. It's probably my worst cover song because John goes solidly out of my range a couple times.
That said, I use this page primarily to share my originals. You are certainly welcome to peruse those if you wish.
Cute little diddie - it's like you're giving a report ( a Beatle technique) :) Keep it the way it is - just move on to the next one don't change a thing Justin. ***** You crack me up. Some people are just too damn serious for their own good.
I don't think your despondent lyrics set to upbeat lyrics worked on this tune. It's a fun idea but difficult to really match if you know what I mean. Try some different lyrics/storylines with your progression and see what happens. The music here is excellent and wide open for experimenting!
again different style and flawless 5star
RAIDIOFACE 2 years ago
man, you are a professional songwriter. You switch between styles so seamlessly.
toddmakesnoise 2 years ago
Coming from you I take that as a tremendous compliment.
Oswlek 2 years ago
that's not blues , it's cabaret
mentalmistake 3 years ago
Clever Lyrics - Great Voice and Music - Just plain Fun!
BluesMamaRaven 3 years ago
Sorry for not catching this earier. Thank you very much for you compliment!
Oswlek 3 years ago
Hi Justin; listen is a lot of apprezzabile;il that wants to say that you express good musical harmony!15/5 * compliment!! Pino
iaco4ever 3 years ago
Thanks Pino.
Oswlek 3 years ago
ah! catchy tune.. i like your playing in singing in this one a lot. it's a great style! the lyrics are kind of sad, but the way you're singing it's like a 'shrug your shoulders, what are ya gonna do' type thing.. if that makes any sense! this is really the story of so many people's lives!
lauraveltmanmusic 3 years ago
Thank you for the comment, Laura.
Oswlek 3 years ago
you have unique way of putting music together
always a pleasure to read the lyrics too,best wishes
BeautifulGirlByDana 3 years ago
Much obliged, my friend
Oswlek 3 years ago
aww wow i love it aha
new year at home dus suck tbh :L
love it! xD
MaxiMagicx 3 years ago
Thanks, Hannah.
Oswlek 3 years ago
I could not help having monty python stuck on my mind as I enjoyed your brilliant little piece :)
The lyrics are really good, and the melody really turn tragedy into self ironic comedy - well done!
rogersiver 3 years ago
Roger, If I ever need a press release for this song, I'm going to use this post. Thanks for the listen and thanks for stopping by.
Oswlek 3 years ago
Oh Man Justin! This is great. :)
MsEllieJ 3 years ago
Thanks. It is my wife's favorite.
Oswlek 3 years ago
Now this is catchy tune :)
freeoriginalsongs 3 years ago
I agree, I just wanted to give her the credit that she deserves.
Thanks for the comment, Ruby.
Oswlek 3 years ago
got more of a gypsy guitar sound that blues as far as the riff goes.... but other than that... i got 5 stars for ya
captxxchaos 3 years ago
Thanks man. I hear a little bit of ragtime blues in there, but it doesn't matter. As long as you like it, we can call it anything you want!
Oswlek 3 years ago
cool
dannyknapp 3 years ago
haha...cool song, Justin. Does remind me a little of Koko Kaina...she rocks! Your car broke down?? You shouldn't be driving on New Years anyway...haha.
mysticcynic 3 years ago
Glad you like it Josef.
Oswlek 3 years ago
good one Justin!! maybe next new year,, huh,,, hope so,,, good song,, bad economy
stevebaileymusic 3 years ago
Thanks, Steve.
Oswlek 3 years ago
I prefer my irony with a vengence chaser, haha... Other than that this was great :o) Just kidding, its clever and fun to listen to, Jusitn. -Ron
rhopen 3 years ago
It was fun to write as well. Songs like this can be liberating because the lyrics don't have to be taken so seriously.
Oswlek 3 years ago
this is nothing short of excellent. great tune. 5*****
Paul
BradfordandLasso 3 years ago
Thank you, my friend(s). I have a cover of I'm So Tired up that you are welcome to check out. It's probably my worst cover song because John goes solidly out of my range a couple times.
That said, I use this page primarily to share my originals. You are certainly welcome to peruse those if you wish.
Oswlek 3 years ago
Fantastic!
marcoacca 3 years ago
Excellent! 5/5
Pete
PMiddy001 3 years ago
Cute little diddie - it's like you're giving a report ( a Beatle technique) :) Keep it the way it is - just move on to the next one don't change a thing Justin. ***** You crack me up. Some people are just too damn serious for their own good.
freeoriginalsongs 3 years ago
Thanks, Jim. Glad I could give you a laugh.
Oswlek 3 years ago
Ah the beauty of irony. Brilliant work Os, i love the idea and i think you executed it really well. 5 stars from me.
STOOPIDDITTIES 3 years ago
Thanks for the compliment.
Oswlek 3 years ago
I don't think your despondent lyrics set to upbeat lyrics worked on this tune. It's a fun idea but difficult to really match if you know what I mean. Try some different lyrics/storylines with your progression and see what happens. The music here is excellent and wide open for experimenting!
0258jtj7 3 years ago