Time, like a thief, slowly steals the pieces of our lives one by one and leaves us only with memories of who we once were. Of times spent dreaming and planning the new. When the set years of our lives seemed like a forever, a naivety of our youth. Not knowing that all our lives are shadows on a wall which disappear when once the sun has set.
you are my kindred spirit, Charles. We feel the presence of time.
Carp prefer deep water, rarely surfacing; thank you for surfacing today. (Always amazed by your scholarship - love the lines "cast into the net/ that folds itself more closely as we move:/ struggle draws it tight; it is the self" 5* Fav.
exquisite...
jjaggers 2 years ago
Your partner brings you happiness and peace.
Your wonderful recitations bring me happiness
and peace
thank you so much
heartbeat3 2 years ago
How Peaceful!
How Rich!
How full of Love!
Thank you so much
Love
Pios
CHMATOSOVIDEOS01 2 years ago
Wonderful, much to think on, thankyou.
richardyingren 2 years ago
Time, like a thief, slowly steals the pieces of our lives one by one and leaves us only with memories of who we once were. Of times spent dreaming and planning the new. When the set years of our lives seemed like a forever, a naivety of our youth. Not knowing that all our lives are shadows on a wall which disappear when once the sun has set.
you are my kindred spirit, Charles. We feel the presence of time.
EROSGODOFGAYS 2 years ago
Bliss!!
StudioResurrezione1 2 years ago
I see you make beautiful things, not only in poems but also in gardens- and in life. Thank you for sharing these.
twinnumber3 2 years ago
You're very sweet Jonathan. Thank you.
brychar66 2 years ago
Carp prefer deep water, rarely surfacing; thank you for surfacing today. (Always amazed by your scholarship - love the lines "cast into the net/ that folds itself more closely as we move:/ struggle draws it tight; it is the self" 5* Fav.
PoetLina 2 years ago
Many thanks Halina. The Chinese poets are a wonder - no surprise that their nation for so long took its cultural superiority for granted!
brychar66 2 years ago
This is so beautiful I wish for better words to tell you that.
Idlinfarm 2 years ago
Those words say it all Ida. I think we share the Taoist approach. Bless you.
brychar66 2 years ago
very nice ending.
5*
all the best
Keano
keanghiero 2 years ago
Thanks Keano.
brychar66 2 years ago