When the lights go out for good (Original Song)

[GragBrondan]

Please stop listening to these people who are talking about your voice if you haven't already. Please. It's fucking perfect.

Everybody shut the fuck up.

[jessekenyon]

your a really good writer. Im not so good at writing songs. I play guitar and sing. You should besides the voice lessons get a better mic. Condenser mics sound alot better for recording. Dynamics are more for live.

[killpixies]

you sissy

[trickofdisaster2]

am not

[lespaul3030]

liked the lyrics and the overall vibe

[RileyLaFemme]

Hmm, uhh. Guys don't hate me.

But I don't like your voice.

It's a great song and good lyrics and music,

But the voice sounds strained and untalented. Sorry.

Maybe get a singer with a deep and rounder voice that might sing it..

[loull287]

very nice, calming tune. and it's great you keep yourself humble, it's kind of like you're on a musical journey, i noticed some people saying you need singing lessons and whether you need them or not it's great you're willing to do more and more to get better and reach higher and higher with it.

[oversoulseven7]

Sorry but I really don't like it. You seem to be "singing" with the nose...

At least I'm one of the only that have this opinion. Don't give up:p

[trickofdisaster2]

Thanks!

Your not the only one

[theonejamie]

rofl

[JimiHenbricks]

I think you have a lot of talent. Nice song. You need some voice lessons. I'll just tell you flat out. You are singing through your nose. You need to sing from your throat.I took voice lessons and it helped me alot.Really nice playing and great lyrics. Good job.

[trickofdisaster2]

Thanks dude, I am going to start taking singing lessons

[IzzaTHEgreat]

Where in hell do you get all of your ideas from? I'm so freaking jealous... Gorgeous!

[dreaminglad]

just checking out songs this is good ,

project your voice more !do it like you mean it !

[CL0SETGEEK]

I just stumbled across this video. You've got lots of talent. Keep it up! This is a really good song.

[Kaalimaa]

You have nice voice, and this song is really good!

[trickofdisaster2]

Thanks!

[skintrade]

I like it alot... you remind me of Paul Humfries, the keyboardist of OMD :)

[trickofdisaster2]

THanks so much, who's OMD?

[tayloreh]

I'd love to hear your input on my music. Your voice has a neat really neat honest character, and great piano. Take a look at my stuff.

[trickofdisaster2]

Your stuff is really cool!

[Wanderlust777]

Good song man. Could use some more variation though.

[camalach]

Awesome song. It brings tears to my eyes :')

[JimWayne61]

hey nice song! stop by and check out some of my originals when you get a chance:)

jim

[trickofdisaster2]

Ok, will do!

[PAPOS]

WHAT MATTERS IS WHAT YOU HEAR

[trickofdisaster2]

Thanks?

[las6]

You sound like my brother when he was young. Couldn't stand his voice back then but now he's one of the best singers I know.

I think the chorus(?) has potentional, but rest of the song is pretty monotonous and your singing doesn't quite carry it either.

[trickofdisaster2]

Oh well, too bad you didn't like it.. at least your brother got good.

[stasia1112]

hey mate I like your song, dont be offended but you need to work on your voice a little bit, maybe get some lessons, all good vocalists have had some sort of training....but keep writing man your talented...

[trickofdisaster2]

Thanks a lot! Ya, I just signed up for singing lessons for tommorow

[gldmj]

Decent. Needs to be more dynamic, both the vocals and piano melody.

[trickofdisaster2]

Ya, I've been getting that a lot lately. Any idea how to make vocals more dynamci

[jamirophan]

open it in any given music editing program (magix music maker is easy to get, cheap, amateuristic but carries an effect which gives your music extra power

[chrisbilderback]

ya know what? disregard my last comment. It's great

[chrisbilderback]

omg! It's great that you have the guts to sing on camera, and you wrote this song, but you should have gotten someone else to sing it. SO off key!

[trickofdisaster2]

ha, ouch... I know, I know... I'm getting singing lessons

[bobsagi]

that is an amazing song...it's really good

[beetles87]

thats an awesome song man... i like it!!