it really is the knees of bees my freind. xoxox!! my entire childhhod flashed by me and all the while remembering my engish family and thier lovely outlook on life and how to get through the rough spots and up up u go now. ave a cup of tea. there there. awee. bles you Dash! oh i miss them and they are here through you . god thanks hun. im fucking crying again. lol.
i just love you and i came over and on my i thought to myself boy im luck im on my way to your place cus i knew i would feel almost a blanket of goodness come over me and then i chose this one from your lates cus im late and well. one thing at a time. lol. ;) just bloody blessed and wonderfulness you give us. i listend and the first words .. hahah i misse dyour voice reading to me. and then you took me to a pplace of my life of the best memories. xoxo ty. hug
You're absolutely right, Mark, we need more froth in our lives. Those clouds were beautifully suggestive. I kept seeing the things you described formed in them. Thanks, you brought me some joy here.
@andrewnorris2 Lovely response! Thank you Andrew. It was only after I settled on simply filming clouds as a screen for this poem, that I remembered I'd had 'Castles In The Sky' as a working title. Kind of confirmed things a bit!
soaked to a line in saccharine even your frothy tastes a bit gothy -- hahaha -- amusing collection of happy thoughts, Mark -- seeing a plate of eggs and sausage being set before me is one of my earliest and fondest memories.
i only came here because i thought it was a song :s
hinsley2k12 5 days ago
Beautiful.
ReptoidBoffin 11 months ago
@ReptoidBoffin Thank you (..and I am glad you found my 'Birthday Gift' too). Good day to you! Mark
dashpoet 11 months ago
it really is the knees of bees my freind. xoxox!! my entire childhhod flashed by me and all the while remembering my engish family and thier lovely outlook on life and how to get through the rough spots and up up u go now. ave a cup of tea. there there. awee. bles you Dash! oh i miss them and they are here through you . god thanks hun. im fucking crying again. lol.
mindovermatter2009 1 year ago
i just love you and i came over and on my i thought to myself boy im luck im on my way to your place cus i knew i would feel almost a blanket of goodness come over me and then i chose this one from your lates cus im late and well. one thing at a time. lol. ;) just bloody blessed and wonderfulness you give us. i listend and the first words .. hahah i misse dyour voice reading to me. and then you took me to a pplace of my life of the best memories. xoxo ty. hug
mindovermatter2009 1 year ago
@mindovermatter2009 I am so glad to find you here this way, just a pleasure. Love back atcha, markx
dashpoet 1 year ago
what the...
germigirl 1 year ago
@germigirl ... just something, and nothing
dashpoet 1 year ago
@dashpoet okay
germigirl 1 year ago
@dashpoet okay its just so,
diffrent
germigirl 1 year ago
@germigirl diffrent can be better... or maybe not! Cheers anyway, Mark
dashpoet 1 year ago
Haha! I love this dashpoet. Cheers to everything froth!
I can see the whole thing! I am smiling.
Well done!
A.
ASAngelo 1 year ago
@ASAngelo Can't ask more than to make people smile. Cheers!
dashpoet 1 year ago
wow! you really outdid yourself on this one. fantastic job! great writing.
clayLavl 1 year ago
@clayLavl Off the leash a bit... not quite stream of consciousness but something like it! Cheers Clay
dashpoet 1 year ago
@EpicSammich I'm glad you think so - thanks for letting me know! Cheers for now, Mark
dashpoet 1 year ago
Great poem Mark ....some fun and happy lines in this one, i loved it.
kel2corkeyOriginal 1 year ago
@kel2corkeyOriginal A bit of a meandering drift of thought really, I'm glad I started writing it down! Cheers Kel
dashpoet 1 year ago
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And man said; "Let there be light" and eased the gravity of dimenson... if only for a pause. :-)
MrDaMan 1 year ago
Nice
I like it
All the best
Kean
keanghiero 1 year ago
@keanghiero Thank you Kean, I'm glad. Best to you, Mark
dashpoet 1 year ago
You're absolutely right, Mark, we need more froth in our lives. Those clouds were beautifully suggestive. I kept seeing the things you described formed in them. Thanks, you brought me some joy here.
andrewnorris2 1 year ago
@andrewnorris2 Lovely response! Thank you Andrew. It was only after I settled on simply filming clouds as a screen for this poem, that I remembered I'd had 'Castles In The Sky' as a working title. Kind of confirmed things a bit!
dashpoet 1 year ago
Great work... all the Krinkle gang approve! :p ... you have been on quite a roll lately! :p
KrinkleCartoonShow 1 year ago
@KrinkleCartoonShow ... bit of hay making in the sunshine! Cheers gang..
dashpoet 1 year ago
Like it Mark..Full of sunshine and smiles....Keep it up....Thumbs up...
SuperNutty23 1 year ago
@SuperNutty23 Happy to hear from you, glad to share. Cheers Russ!
dashpoet 1 year ago
Deliciously summery.
janeczka 1 year ago
@janeczka 'tis the season to be jolly!
dashpoet 1 year ago
Thank you for your Gothic and Castles
Happy creative week!
halynamyroslava 1 year ago
@halynamyroslava Let's hope so... thank you!
dashpoet 1 year ago
soaked to a line in saccharine even your frothy tastes a bit gothy -- hahaha -- amusing collection of happy thoughts, Mark -- seeing a plate of eggs and sausage being set before me is one of my earliest and fondest memories.
liz1060 1 year ago
@liz1060 Glad to trigger thoughts like that with this poem - it's what it's for really! Cheers Liz
dashpoet 1 year ago