That girl could not shut up so annoying.... Not enough male victims in horror films. If they put a twist on the end like the person in the mask being a girl it would be more impactful
As an exercise in suspense and horror, it was well done. The HD quality looks great but maybe too vivid for a horror film. May have benefited in film mode like 24p or something. Unless it was, but it seems too clear for me. However, light, sound, and editing was effective. At some points the big suspense music needed to be louder. Its tough to balance the music with the sound of the action but the music could use a bigger "punch" when it crescendos, not background level. Definite talent.
Wow. Can't believe people don't get spooked by a boxcutter. I mean, even before 9/11 it's not exactly a harmless thing (my first mugging in NYC was via boxcutter).
Hahahaa, it would be a blond girl. She would go for the most powerful weapon, The phone, hahaha. and she would stay in the garage after she beat him HALF to Death. Hahaha oooh women. Why?
That girl would have been better off dead. Totally lacking resourcefulness, and all she did was cry and take incredibly heavy breaths. Box cutters are nasty, and that throat slit was pretty realistic looking, but I definitely would not be any more afraid of a killer with a box cutter, than I would be a bread baker with a box cutter. Also, what the hell happened at the end? I have no idea.
good stuff,my one problem is the bald michael myers mask been done by sons of anarchy. plus why would you wanna associate with the Halloween franchise? they've already made a mark how can you make your own when you steal their shit?
Good sfx (especially the throat) but seriously...Why am I supposed to be scared of a douchebag with a box cutter? And why is she so stupid that she'd rather cry than save herself? What's scary is that there must of been at least 3 people stupider than her to all succumb to this killer... Some good ideas but needs more thought in the script department
in 1959 a young teenager was shot and killed in the park. his body was found in a bush with flies eating him one day later. the guy who shot looked like a ghost. some call him the "shadow killer". Legend has it that he is immortal and very creepy. he wears a black leather coat with blood stains. if you dont copy paste this into 8 videos in 3 hours, you will be visited by this killer tonight no matter where you whats the point its not going to kill you i mean come on now
lol if this happened to me i would not cry at the end i would be like "**** you bastard! i totally powned you!!!!!!!" then i would get the hell out of there. lol good short
Great job. REALLY good job. Love the editing, lighting, sound, music, acting... EVERYTHING was outstanding. I'll make sure to check your other videos. Won't you check my latest short film, Kat Killa, and comment/critique? Thank you. Cheers.
Nice movie! I did notice that she woke up, tried to get out but never checked her pockets for her cell phone. Seems odd in this day and age that she wouldn't check that first after getting her bearings...
How did you get into the biz? I would love to do something you do. I would really love to be a horror script writer. I wrote a few rough drafts on some horror stuff which I though would be perfect for a low budget horror flick.
@mwnewberry The best advice i can give you is 'you've got to work really hard' and make people want to watch your work, network and get out there. Cheers.
That was a very cool preview for Desperate Measures. It looks like an interesting movie. Do you do mostly previews or do you also do some low budget horror films?
@mwnewberry Cheers. Desperate Measures is my latest feature film which will be released in UK on DVD (4 July). I'm currently working on a few more film projects. Thanks again.
cool. i would like it more if I saw some blendered up hamburger meat or raw chunks of mutilated turkey thighs to represent his arms being mangled in the boat propellar. hahaha.
Everything technically was superb ! Lighting, film, sound, effects, location. only story line and mask unoriginal. too much like mike myers costume, even without the hair. But You have potential to make a great horror film if you find a good script.
You should have a more animated title at the beggining.. "animated text". Hell I'll do it, gotta put me n the credits tho :P It looked good though. I did a slasher film last november with a camera with no sound then had to add sound fx, music, etc.. still unfinished but check it out sometime. STITCHFACE:unleashed..
beautifully made :] you just need to fix and add more details into it
i hope this short movie would be so famous, that directors and producers of gore/slasher films would be interested to cooperate with you and then next picture would be people watching this at movie theaters.
@okachoe cheers dude..it was a FX1, M2 with Nikon Lenses and a very good DOP. i edited on Avid and there was no filters, what we shot was whats on screen.
suxx...you know what..that guy that sneaked up bhind the killer..he could have grabed a weapon or something..try and consider tht..it didt scre me a bit at all...
Very good for an independent project, the only main thing I would recommend is to not show his whole figure right off the back, conceal parts with shadows and all that.
@steshining Omg this is like something a hollywood filmaker would do i mean the actors are good on acting,u should keep making films And when u do get famous or enough money i request pls make a full version of this film.
paxi29zia
why is the woman crying? She should have beaten the killer hard that he would not breath anymore and then run for her life.
paxi29zia 1 day ago
Daaaaammm that girls got raping style
blackopsfan2100 1 week ago
I would really hate to be that girl but if I knew that I'd die I'd as well as attack back
blackopsfan2100 1 week ago
sheer brilliance....more!!!!!!!!!!
wickedplantz 2 weeks ago
Great Film
The3maniac 3 weeks ago
That girl could not shut up so annoying.... Not enough male victims in horror films. If they put a twist on the end like the person in the mask being a girl it would be more impactful
somecallitlife 1 month ago
very good
Social606 1 month ago
As an exercise in suspense and horror, it was well done. The HD quality looks great but maybe too vivid for a horror film. May have benefited in film mode like 24p or something. Unless it was, but it seems too clear for me. However, light, sound, and editing was effective. At some points the big suspense music needed to be louder. Its tough to balance the music with the sound of the action but the music could use a bigger "punch" when it crescendos, not background level. Definite talent.
Hollebwood 1 month ago
@Hollebwood cheers dude.
steshining 1 month ago
the guy who did the music is brilliant!
pepijn129 1 month ago
@pepijn129 Philip Curran.
steshining 1 month ago
very good and entertaining, just have to say at the end it looks like he's pissing blood x)
wlkdesigns 1 month ago
I think for a low budget film this very impressive!!! keep on doing this man! your good!
pepijn129 2 months ago
i dont think it needs more blood, in real there is also no more blood! ;)
thedon1262 2 months ago
What was this shot on?
TreestumpFilms 2 months ago
@TreestumpFilms it was a FX1, M2 with Nikon Lenses and a very good DOP.
steshining 2 months ago
for a home made horror, not bad. Needed more blood n guts but.....not bad at all. Where did you get the creepy background music?
PLACENTAmusic 2 months ago
@PLACENTAmusic The dudes called Philip Curran, great composer!!!!
steshining 2 months ago
I'm sorry but this is poorly done,
aseptic37 2 months ago
and chainsaws? really? I feel like I've seen this before..
aseptic37 2 months ago
she wakes up so peacefully, unknowingly that there is a dead person right in front of her face!
aseptic37 2 months ago
to hell wit the haters. im a big slasher fan and i rlly enjoyed this. keep it up, you got a nack for this. Great acting on the girl's part too
mauledandsawed 2 months ago
@mauledandsawed cheers dude.
steshining 2 months ago in playlist Uploaded videos
Not enough gore, me no gusta
fiendofdeath57 2 months ago
Blood should have been messier, lol
alibaker21 2 months ago
nice good job!
smokysmoka 3 months ago
that is a michael myers mask without hair..
You're ripping off Halloweens, Michael Myers.
He's even wearing the same clothes as Michael..
XxAlliGrlxX 4 months ago
7:16-7:33 "CRUSH THE SKULLLLL!!!!" <--- hehe WONG FU 4 LYFE !
bomixspring 4 months ago
Wow. Can't believe people don't get spooked by a boxcutter. I mean, even before 9/11 it's not exactly a harmless thing (my first mugging in NYC was via boxcutter).
quigdette 4 months ago
nice stuff man,
are from some school or just novice.
Are you interested in full length feature?
raza271990 4 months ago
Hahahaa, it would be a blond girl. She would go for the most powerful weapon, The phone, hahaha. and she would stay in the garage after she beat him HALF to Death. Hahaha oooh women. Why?
hahaha
DSLRFilmIA 4 months ago
This has been flagged as spam show
"Hey guys! I am a maker of short films, and my team and I have just uploaded our first movie! You should check it out!
FunkyStudiosInc 4 months ago
That girl would have been better off dead. Totally lacking resourcefulness, and all she did was cry and take incredibly heavy breaths. Box cutters are nasty, and that throat slit was pretty realistic looking, but I definitely would not be any more afraid of a killer with a box cutter, than I would be a bread baker with a box cutter. Also, what the hell happened at the end? I have no idea.
wagimusweapon 4 months ago
good stuff,my one problem is the bald michael myers mask been done by sons of anarchy. plus why would you wanna associate with the Halloween franchise? they've already made a mark how can you make your own when you steal their shit?
86quaz 4 months ago
@86quaz homage......Thanks for your feedback :-)
steshining 4 months ago
Good sfx (especially the throat) but seriously...Why am I supposed to be scared of a douchebag with a box cutter? And why is she so stupid that she'd rather cry than save herself? What's scary is that there must of been at least 3 people stupider than her to all succumb to this killer... Some good ideas but needs more thought in the script department
HeathenMa666oT 4 months ago
this movie is like my acting. It could use some work.
JagdActor1 4 months ago
This has been flagged as spam show
Check out TheMofoFlip, We've been doing this for 2 years, and our videos are great. Please check us out, rate comment and subscribe!
TheMofoflip 4 months ago
The killer in this is: Michael Myers + Leatherface + Pinhead + the Saw films
11poketrainer 5 months ago
STU-PID
katybug202 5 months ago
Dumb bitch. "Ahhhh, oh my gosh i just kill someone."
NO. Fucking get up and run. -_- IDIOT.
katybug202 5 months ago
I'm sorry but the cinematography, acting, costumes and story in this were terrible.
saneless23 6 months ago 7
Shit
mate.
englandman1000 6 months ago
v v ordinary.... no thrill at any point... if u dont know hw to produce horrors keep mum..?
MrRavishrao 6 months ago
This has been flagged as spam show
in 1959 a young teenager was shot and killed in the park. his body was found in a bush with flies eating him one day later. the guy who shot looked like a ghost. some call him the "shadow killer". Legend has it that he is immortal and very creepy. he wears a black leather coat with blood stains. if you dont copy paste this into 8 videos in 3 hours, you will be visited by this killer tonight no matter where you whats the point its not going to kill you i mean come on now
savonte100 6 months ago
horrible acting
Mitunivers 6 months ago
ez egy rakat szar!
ben1kah 6 months ago
too much crying gurl! was getting so annoying.
MrJohepa 6 months ago
I hate this
GothArcane 6 months ago
Good,liked it. The girl reminds me of someone in Peterborough.
somkiddy 6 months ago
the will 2 live... awesome!
nelisae 6 months ago
lol if this happened to me i would not cry at the end i would be like "**** you bastard! i totally powned you!!!!!!!" then i would get the hell out of there. lol good short
Roxas0987654321 6 months ago 8
@Roxas0987654321 cheers
steshining 6 months ago
@Roxas0987654321 lol yeah! XD
SpockLover27 5 months ago
Ah, yes, another fine video with death, blood, and torture...the big three, as I call them, for I crave with a most voracious appitite all 3.
HalloweenMan18 7 months ago
@HalloweenMan18 cheers.
steshining 6 months ago
o.O
x3Stalkerinx3 7 months ago
NICE! a lot of crie. But ferry nice
familiemovie 7 months ago
Hey this sort of reminds me of a movie i saw back in the 80's. It was called Friday the 13th.
ME4TUBE4ME1 7 months ago
Do you have do it home?? Wow!! Very great! How do you gett that locking so real?
97jocke 7 months ago
woaw realy good short horror film.great job.
xxLOULOUdu30xx 7 months ago
@xxLOULOUdu30xx cheers....
steshining 7 months ago
who is the victim? :D
i think the guy with the mask :P
Niklas3336 8 months ago
@Niklas3336 Lol, cheers..
steshining 7 months ago
well executed
j5o14jq222 8 months ago
@j5o14jq222 cheers
steshining 8 months ago
Comment removed
j5o14jq222 8 months ago
texas stanly knife massacre
j5o14jq222 8 months ago
hes beHINDD YOUUUU ooowww noo he isint hahahaha
j5o14jq222 8 months ago
Comment removed
j5o14jq222 8 months ago
Comment removed
j5o14jq222 8 months ago
great job! i thought the acting was amazing!
gabed777 8 months ago
@gabed777 cheers.
steshining 8 months ago
Hey this is really good, I also make short horror films. Check them out, they are called -Bed&Bloodshed
-Ghostface(A Short Film
-Final Location 1 and 2.
Or go on to my channel and click on FILM CHANNEL.
999jimboy999 8 months ago
CONGRATULATIONS!!!
MrWM82 8 months ago
excellent short horror hope you ends up making feature length 9/10
asimobry 8 months ago
137 people scarry ;D
hubert576 8 months ago
I usually don't like horror/slasher films but this was pretty good! Nice job.
mrmossart 8 months ago
@mrmossart cheers
steshining 8 months ago
-.-""""""""""
barbi1324 8 months ago
Its so pathetic.... i like it. But sorry guys but you don't have it.
ssateras69 8 months ago
that was amazing lol its the bomb
angelbuddyprincess 8 months ago
@angelbuddyprincess cheers
steshining 8 months ago
Great job. REALLY good job. Love the editing, lighting, sound, music, acting... EVERYTHING was outstanding. I'll make sure to check your other videos. Won't you check my latest short film, Kat Killa, and comment/critique? Thank you. Cheers.
ottoelperro 9 months ago
@ottoelperro cheers dude.
steshining 9 months ago
Nice movie! I did notice that she woke up, tried to get out but never checked her pockets for her cell phone. Seems odd in this day and age that she wouldn't check that first after getting her bearings...
vulnaviadraco 9 months ago
Why you Crying ??? Think you need a Helping Hand
cheungwanfai 9 months ago
The performance needs to rise to the same level as the score. Better than most short films though.
notanythingful 9 months ago
was this shot was a canon 5d
TheShootTruth10 9 months ago
@TheShootTruth10 it was a FX1, M2 with Nikon Lenses and a very good DOP.
steshining 9 months ago
this is a great short film. there are a few short films on youtube that are great and my favoroites and this is one.
TheShootTruth10 9 months ago
@TheShootTruth10 cheers
steshining 9 months ago
Excellent work man. So enjoyed it.
Darknightfilms10 9 months ago
@Darknightfilms10 cheers
steshining 9 months ago
This has been flagged as spam show
WTF??
iam look now film video movies now
kosa45590 9 months ago
a look film movies now
kosa45590 9 months ago
YESSSSSSSSSSSDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
TheZuza1997 10 months ago
Jeez! That mask must had been really hot and stinky! I would have passed out if I was that guy!
Pumpkinpuss67 10 months ago
Thanks for the advice.
mwnewberry 10 months ago
How did you get into the biz? I would love to do something you do. I would really love to be a horror script writer. I wrote a few rough drafts on some horror stuff which I though would be perfect for a low budget horror flick.
mwnewberry 10 months ago
@mwnewberry The best advice i can give you is 'you've got to work really hard' and make people want to watch your work, network and get out there. Cheers.
steshining 10 months ago
That was a very cool preview for Desperate Measures. It looks like an interesting movie. Do you do mostly previews or do you also do some low budget horror films?
mwnewberry 10 months ago
@mwnewberry Cheers. Desperate Measures is my latest feature film which will be released in UK on DVD (4 July). I'm currently working on a few more film projects. Thanks again.
steshining 10 months ago
I just subscribed to you. How do I watch the preview for Desperate Measures?
mwnewberry 10 months ago
@mwnewberry Check your inbox :-)
steshining 10 months ago
i'm sorry but this movie is rly FAKE AND GAY, if you observe a bit there's logic in the reaction/emotion....
vocavi 10 months ago
That was awesome? Do you do any other films?
mwnewberry 10 months ago
@mwnewberry Cheers. I've just directed a feature film called Desperate Measures. Have a look on my channel for the trailer.
steshining 10 months ago
where did you get the sounds and music from?
dalesfilms 10 months ago
@dalesfilms Philip Curran dot com he did the music for this short film.
steshining 10 months ago
Really a good movie ! :)
chidirisposte 10 months ago
@chidirisposte cheers
steshining 10 months ago
GOOD SHIT !!!
jonni2shoota 10 months ago
orgazim at 7:06
mattyg123able 10 months ago
I enjoyed it..... till the end.....classic but good!
GonzoszVoice 10 months ago
That wasn't scary at all (:
starwolffan13 10 months ago
The quality of the filming was great. Good job
docmass15 10 months ago
cool. i would like it more if I saw some blendered up hamburger meat or raw chunks of mutilated turkey thighs to represent his arms being mangled in the boat propellar. hahaha.
smrio 10 months ago
Everything technically was superb ! Lighting, film, sound, effects, location. only story line and mask unoriginal. too much like mike myers costume, even without the hair. But You have potential to make a great horror film if you find a good script.
rupertpumpernik 10 months ago
@rupertpumpernik cheers dude. I'm on it :-)
steshining 10 months ago
Wow that was really good !
Actors are very talentuous !
Congratulation !
LynaLoopS 10 months ago
@LynaLoopS cheers
steshining 10 months ago
looks like a re contructed version of michael myers mask, awesome job, loved the lighting in this
the1mightygod 10 months ago
@the1mightygod thanks
steshining 10 months ago
great stuff
TheShootTruth10 10 months ago
~ Besucht mal meinen Kanal, bald kommt ein VLOG und es komme noch lustige Videos, Abonnieren. :D Bitte :D ~
MrPointlessTV 10 months ago
Epic death scene
knowsall101 10 months ago
@knowsall101 cheers
steshining 10 months ago
yo shes stealing mah phone
osalzu10 10 months ago
this is horror its gore.
SOLE1PRODUCTIONS 10 months ago
nothing special about this
MrBernylicious 11 months ago
one word EPIC
flavorflavsha 11 months ago
@flavorflavsha cool thanks.
steshining 11 months ago
@piethenkens cheers.
steshining 11 months ago
very cool...loved the effects and story
ScottsSlasherWorld 11 months ago
@ScottsSlasherWorld cheers
steshining 11 months ago
If i had the money, i would organize a short film horror movie festival, and i would add this one on the bill ... thumbs up!
xSchmitterSx 11 months ago
@xSchmitterSx cheers
steshining 11 months ago
its boring.. but the way you make it looks good..the camera angle is pleasing.. the story line sucks bro.. but your good...
make it more realistic...
4/10 >:D
lokokings10 11 months ago
well done man i just started a film course this year and i want to make a horror in rural area near my hometown
shitchops 11 months ago
@shitchops cheers dude.
steshining 11 months ago
@giovannimartinesm5 LOL cracked me up too
MyBabyHarrison 11 months ago
You should have a more animated title at the beggining.. "animated text". Hell I'll do it, gotta put me n the credits tho :P It looked good though. I did a slasher film last november with a camera with no sound then had to add sound fx, music, etc.. still unfinished but check it out sometime. STITCHFACE:unleashed..
MattHurtSchlockFilms 11 months ago
beautifully made :] you just need to fix and add more details into it
i hope this short movie would be so famous, that directors and producers of gore/slasher films would be interested to cooperate with you and then next picture would be people watching this at movie theaters.
thefreaknoveau 11 months ago
good film, asome good efx
gints 11 months ago
that was awesome, whatd u shoot with? it looks so good to not be a professional film
okachoe 11 months ago
@okachoe cheers dude..it was a FX1, M2 with Nikon Lenses and a very good DOP. i edited on Avid and there was no filters, what we shot was whats on screen.
steshining 11 months ago
wooooooooooow that was soooooooo cooooooooool!!!!!!!!
MegaKamikaze95 11 months ago
@MegaKamikaze95 cheers
steshining 11 months ago
very cool
mayhemvspeace 11 months ago
suxx...you know what..that guy that sneaked up bhind the killer..he could have grabed a weapon or something..try and consider tht..it didt scre me a bit at all...
MrMerlin131313 11 months ago
suxx...
MrMerlin131313 11 months ago
Dobre..
Bez przekazu i fabuły,ale..dobre(jak na horror):)
wiesiolek23666 11 months ago
Dobre..
wiesiolek23666 11 months ago
was this a snuff ?
superlegos123 11 months ago
very bad acting ...
LeLLoo2 11 months ago
not horror
nnasser007 11 months ago
nice cinematography. I like the way that whole scene plays out!
check out my page for student short films
InfiniteFilmsBLP 1 year ago
Nice movies.
I'm an actor and I'm looking some parts in a horror, so if you do have anything coming up, be sure to let me know and maybe you can check me out. :)
- Que
EvVillznezzThaClown 1 year ago
i can knock you up some music,go here and listen, sonic intrusion
sonicintrusion 1 year ago
Nice, but I had to laugh in the ending because it sounded like the woman would laugh too xD
She had great fun with that guy!
Jumpingplayer 1 year ago
czy to jest kurwa straszne??? raczej zajebisty skecz z tego:P pozdro
wodzuxi 1 year ago
Very good for an independent project, the only main thing I would recommend is to not show his whole figure right off the back, conceal parts with shadows and all that.
ixTorquez 1 year ago
how she get so dirty and she cries too much
muddjim55 1 year ago
good film .
6GodofHatred9 1 year ago
amazing
syasirhusaini 1 year ago
@syasirhusaini cheers
steshining 1 year ago
@steshining Omg this is like something a hollywood filmaker would do i mean the actors are good on acting,u should keep making films And when u do get famous or enough money i request pls make a full version of this film.
IVANAMPOT05 11 months ago
amazing
syasirhusaini 1 year ago
pojebany ten film...
it's suck...
MrSoul997 1 year ago
Entertaining!
Ihateirans 1 year ago
I can do better
and sorry i didn't like it
petrosgraf 1 year ago
I can do better
petrosgraf 1 year ago
@petrosgraf
Let's see then?
krullhero 1 year ago 6
fantastic... superb!...
glnmlo 1 year ago
ehm no!!
MrAceystarboy 1 year ago